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Jessika_vocals

OMG! 🙄 She's giving her book a 5 stars! This Author is so ridiculous! A Five stars? She's really high and needs to be sued! Yes! This is what I get when I decided to chase passion. Interestingly, "A Bride for The Vampires" is my First ever Novel, dedicated on Webnovel. Writing this wonderful masterpiece and putting in the sweat and toils, is a BIG WIN for me, and also to others : that you CAN do anything you SET your mind to! Now, wonderful readers, I need your views concerning this story.

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Jessika_vocals

It's my first time! I need your reviews to set as a map if I'm improving or vise-versa. How is the exposition between The MC and other round characters? Who is your favourite character? What story twists makes you wanna scream and develop cold feet?? 😂 And MOST IMPORTANTLY , in what ways do you suggest I improve?

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Ninestar619_5803

The story is good and the plot is interesting. Good details of every character and an excellent plot setting. The writing style is awesome and easily flowing. Great story and made twisting. Keep up the good work.

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Manda_Chisom

A shoutout to this Author! I was just going through my stories feed, and I caught a glimpse of the book cover, decided to give this book a try. Okurrrrr! It turned out to be so niceeeeee! I mean. I wasn't expecting the buildup of characters. This for me, is perfect. Just don't relent. And pls, don't drop the book. I'm getting in love with emotional Vanessa.

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Jessika_vocals

OMG! 🙄 She's giving her book a 5 stars! This Author is so ridiculous! A Five stars? She's really high and needs to be sued! Yes! This is what I get when I decided to chase passion. Interestingly, "A Bride for The Vampires" is my First ever Novel, dedicated on Webnovel. Writing this wonderful masterpiece and putting in the sweat and toils, is a BIG WIN for me, and also to others : that you CAN do anything you SET your mind to! Now, wonderful readers, I need your views concerning this story.

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1yr
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Jessika_vocals

It's my first time! I need your reviews to set as a map if I'm improving or vise-versa. How is the exposition between The MC and other round characters? Who is your favourite character? What story twists makes you wanna scream and develop cold feet?? 😂 And MOST IMPORTANTLY , in what ways do you suggest I improve?

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1yr
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Ninestar619_5803

The story is good and the plot is interesting. Good details of every character and an excellent plot setting. The writing style is awesome and easily flowing. Great story and made twisting. Keep up the good work.

1yr
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Manda_Chisom

A shoutout to this Author! I was just going through my stories feed, and I caught a glimpse of the book cover, decided to give this book a try. Okurrrrr! It turned out to be so niceeeeee! I mean. I wasn't expecting the buildup of characters. This for me, is perfect. Just don't relent. And pls, don't drop the book. I'm getting in love with emotional Vanessa.

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1yr
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