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Rely fun Duell monsters story, its quite enjoyable. Its fun seeing dull that don't revolve around minute longe combo plays and constant archetype metas.
I love how detailed the auther made it with lil to almost no mistakes I hope he continue to post and to one anyone that reads this I hope y’all enjoy the story
This is great in my opinion not many yugioh fanfics or novels are around these days only the arc-v ones so this one is refreshing to read keep up the good work and update when you can because this one has been great to read
Es buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo ya no se que escribir bueno el tiempo para nuevos capitulos se me hace muyyu largo
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I quite like this series. It is a blend between the anime, movie, and manga that is tough to combine together. So its a nice breath of fresh air as a yugioh series is rarely ever used considering how complex they can be. I hope you keep it up, though of course you have a few grammar mistakes here and there. There are other things to it that makes up for the mistake.
this good but i hope you dont story to much and relationship with ishuzu happen to fast no development happen so i hope in next story or next chapter you can fix that and your duel writing is good but i think you can improve more. sorry may english bad i hope you can read this
I recommend everyone to read this book is very great And I can't wait to see what happens next and more of these chapters I totally recommend everyone who loves yugioh to read this book
So far I've enjoyed it despite some grammar issues here and then it's a good read for a Yugioh fan such myself. Hope you'll continue it my good sir.
Just…. don’t drop please, And for me yu-gi-oh MC always be that red hat guy, had the best ending in 5d’s story
If you want to fix your grammar just ask chatgpt to fix any mistakes or make your sentences more clear and it will re write it for you in less than 30 seconds. Its perhaps one of the most useful tools for someone who wants to make their story’s more readable.
Me gusto el desarrollo en esos ultimos caps. Ciertamente hay algunas pequeñas lagunas en cuanto a la justificacion para los villanos, pero no es algo que cambie mucho la formula que usa konamo para sacar sus pelis.
Spoiler de révélation Rely fun Duell monsters story, its quite enjoyable. Its fun seeing dull that don't revolve around minute longe combo plays and constant archetype metas.
I love how detailed the auther made it with lil to almost no mistakes I hope he continue to post and to one anyone that reads this I hope y’all enjoy the story
This is great in my opinion not many yugioh fanfics or novels are around these days only the arc-v ones so this one is refreshing to read keep up the good work and update when you can because this one has been great to read
Es buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo buenísimo ya no se que escribir bueno el tiempo para nuevos capitulos se me hace muyyu largo
Spoiler de révélation I quite like this series. It is a blend between the anime, movie, and manga that is tough to combine together. So its a nice breath of fresh air as a yugioh series is rarely ever used considering how complex they can be. I hope you keep it up, though of course you have a few grammar mistakes here and there. There are other things to it that makes up for the mistake.
this good but i hope you dont story to much and relationship with ishuzu happen to fast no development happen so i hope in next story or next chapter you can fix that and your duel writing is good but i think you can improve more. sorry may english bad i hope you can read this
I recommend everyone to read this book is very great And I can't wait to see what happens next and more of these chapters I totally recommend everyone who loves yugioh to read this book
So far I've enjoyed it despite some grammar issues here and then it's a good read for a Yugioh fan such myself. Hope you'll continue it my good sir.
Just…. don’t drop please, And for me yu-gi-oh MC always be that red hat guy, had the best ending in 5d’s story
If you want to fix your grammar just ask chatgpt to fix any mistakes or make your sentences more clear and it will re write it for you in less than 30 seconds. Its perhaps one of the most useful tools for someone who wants to make their story’s more readable.
Me gusto el desarrollo en esos ultimos caps. Ciertamente hay algunas pequeñas lagunas en cuanto a la justificacion para los villanos, pero no es algo que cambie mucho la formula que usa konamo para sacar sus pelis.
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