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Shameless author review here.It's my my first story. So there will be a lot of mistakes. I hope you will forgive me and and tell me where i did the mistake. It will be like a noobs writing but hope you will find the plot interesting. Here I tried something new with matching wrestling with system. I know my writing kinda sucks so you can curse at me but please do tell what i could add to make the story better. Well who am i Rambling to. I don't even have views 🙂
Shameless author review here.It's my my first story. So there will be a lot of mistakes. I hope you will forgive me and and tell me where i did the mistake. It will be like a noobs writing but hope you will find the plot interesting. Here I tried something new with matching wrestling with system. I know my writing kinda sucks so you can curse at me but please do tell what i could add to make the story better. Well who am i Rambling to. I don't even have views 🙂