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I have been in the reading industry from years. I have read novels, webnovels, light novels. From greatest written works and MTL chainese translation. I have tried them all. I have also read endless amounts of fanfiction and have written some myself 'Emmanuel_Capricorn is my writing account name' so believe me when I say. This is a good book. Exceptional. A chef's kiss. The only thing I am wondering is why this is in fanfic section? Author could make a good original novel out of this
Sincerely haven’t read it yet but only looking at the art I can see you are a man of culture for having a Jack Cayless art on your fic
a nice story with elements pulled from various media, nicely arranged and mixed that doesn't feel 'heavy/bloated' with everything that its got going on. the characters are fun, none feel as if they exist to just fulfil a 'roster' like one dimensional tsundere/yandere types for example.
5 stars. do not pass Go do not collect $200 go directly to reading this gem, you wont regret it. keep up the awesome job Author-Kami
Synopsis along got me highly interested. Anyhow, this sounds like an original novel so why is it in the fanfic section?
War is a vicious cycle, but it will continue to exist as long as there are intelligent creatures, you just need to make as much use of it as possible[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
I am about 30 chapters in and I the love the story. a lot of story's where a monster is the lead is bit hit or miss for me. this one good on how it started and where it going.
I have been in the reading industry from years. I have read novels, webnovels, light novels. From greatest written works and MTL chainese translation. I have tried them all. I have also read endless amounts of fanfiction and have written some myself 'Emmanuel_Capricorn is my writing account name' so believe me when I say. This is a good book. Exceptional. A chef's kiss. The only thing I am wondering is why this is in fanfic section? Author could make a good original novel out of this
Sincerely haven’t read it yet but only looking at the art I can see you are a man of culture for having a Jack Cayless art on your fic
a nice story with elements pulled from various media, nicely arranged and mixed that doesn't feel 'heavy/bloated' with everything that its got going on. the characters are fun, none feel as if they exist to just fulfil a 'roster' like one dimensional tsundere/yandere types for example.
5 stars. do not pass Go do not collect $200 go directly to reading this gem, you wont regret it. keep up the awesome job Author-Kami
Synopsis along got me highly interested. Anyhow, this sounds like an original novel so why is it in the fanfic section?
War is a vicious cycle, but it will continue to exist as long as there are intelligent creatures, you just need to make as much use of it as possible[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
I am about 30 chapters in and I the love the story. a lot of story's where a monster is the lead is bit hit or miss for me. this one good on how it started and where it going.