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interesting so far but the author needs more frequent updates and there is still plenty of time for this devolve into garbage where the MC easily destroys everyone and creates a super harem. So far none of that.MC has a special eye that allows him to see the flow of energy, not original but an interesting ability
Good grammar, good character design. All details are given when tellig teh story, it feels like emperor's domination, but definitely not as cliche, with the same harem story being repeated again and again
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Really good book. Been some while since good eastern fantasy book has come. Doesn't even feel like original. feels like a nice translated book
As an author, I have seen many books before. This one stands out. The world building in this is exceptional. It is not apparent immediately, but when the story progresses, it starts to show. The book is very well written, with good grammar and punctuation everywhere, and a really nice way of story telling.
Author here. Please use this as a place to ask questions about the book, including the world, cultivation, and other aspects that might not be clear as of yet, but will definitely be answered as you keep reading forward.
interesting so far but the author needs more frequent updates and there is still plenty of time for this devolve into garbage where the MC easily destroys everyone and creates a super harem. So far none of that.MC has a special eye that allows him to see the flow of energy, not original but an interesting ability
Good grammar, good character design. All details are given when tellig teh story, it feels like emperor's domination, but definitely not as cliche, with the same harem story being repeated again and again
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Really good book. Been some while since good eastern fantasy book has come. Doesn't even feel like original. feels like a nice translated book
As an author, I have seen many books before. This one stands out. The world building in this is exceptional. It is not apparent immediately, but when the story progresses, it starts to show. The book is very well written, with good grammar and punctuation everywhere, and a really nice way of story telling.
Author here. Please use this as a place to ask questions about the book, including the world, cultivation, and other aspects that might not be clear as of yet, but will definitely be answered as you keep reading forward.