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This is a real gem. If this book was made into a show I would be the first one to watch it .
it's very nice and you must read it, very funny and perfect change, things changes so fast it's funny that itis actually happening.
this is a masterpiece. a rare worldbuilding novel rather than train for 200 chaps plus the comedy is gold 10/10 no doubt about it 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
Esta historia está bastante buena, un toque de humor y un poco de seriedad. Se recurre mucho al chiste de secuestrar a Danzo pero es una joyita cómica de la historia y más como lo ha llegado a afectar. El avance de la historia también es muy bueno y es progresiva y sin estancarse demasiado. El único tema que me ha molestado es el tema del sistema que se le dan al protagonista y no hace acto de presencia en la historia. Pese a eso es una historia agradable de leer y muy recomendable. [img=update][img=recommend]
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um dos melhores fanfic de naruto, o primeiro que vi nesse estilo, e capaz de mudar muita coisa, nem sei como vai ficar no final, tem uma comedia muito boa , so não sei porque tem a tag de harem? vim aqui so para procurar a tag anti-harem
Esperaba encontrarme un escritura de fanfic promedio de naruto y, no es así. Aunque es cierto que no ha cambiado mucho la historia (voy por el capitulo 38) me ha hecho reír y sonreír en sus momentos. Así que no esperes algo muy muy profundo, pero si es muy entretenido y divertido
If you are tired of Naruto Fanfictions where fighting is the main theme, then this is the perfect fanfic for you. The MC spent his focus on developing the village and kept the most vulnerable victims in times of war, children, and noncombat away from the atrocity. The MC portrays a high level of strategy, cunningness and kingdom-building tendency. Some comments complained about why they don't dive into the practical use of certain clans. I think it's unreasonable to do so. Why? Because they are not to fight wars. The MC invited them for 2 reasons: increasing workforce and population. Without people, they couldn't produce things that could alleviate the economy, and without people who would stand guard and work. Thank you author!
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Honestly it’s a entertaining read but it should show more of what the system contributes to the mc and the village because if not you might as well say it’s not a system fanfic. Also I think you should show more of what the mc battle prowes or what abilities he has and just have him more In the story since he’s the mc since it kind feel like he’s a side character
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I really like the story, I left it to ferment for a while and I came back to it today and I really like this, I've had a lot of laughs from this, telling the world of naruto from another perspective which is another thing I love. Overall amazing book, story, development, thank you author.
In my opinion, this fanfics is one of the best Naruto fanfic I have ever read. I really like how the mc ninjutsu are not all mix and matches unlike some fics. The comedy here is very unique and the way the canon character diverts from the original is very refreshing. I honestly enjoy reading this.
212 capítulos fue el limite que pude leer sinceramente desde ahí ya me canse es bueno me rei bastante pero tengo mis limites
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uma boa novel de naruto, tem uma construção interessante e feita de forma bem diferente, uma das poucas novels de naruto que ainda se mantem na minha biblioteca
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT GOES THROUGH THESE PEOPLE'S MIND TO GIVE SUCH A LOW RATING. SERIOUSLY, THIS IS A GREAT STORY, THAT GOES OUT OF THE STANDARD AND TAKES YOU ON A VERY UNIQUE ADVENTURE THAT YOU WON'T FIND ELSEWHERE. TOP 5 OF ALL FAN FICTION
it's not even looks like a ninja fanfic, less fighting and more into making money. how tf this is Naruto fanfic if author focus more on making money ffs.
This fic said it wasn’t a system fanfic but has a system. Please clarify the tags because I was looking for a naruto fanfic without a system and since this fic didn’t have that tag I selected it. But it turns out it was a system fanfic. Please correct your tags.
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Ome of my Favorite stories so far. MC is OP but he uses brain instead. Also Mubuki is The Man, The Myth The Legend haha. Very funny and awesome story. People who didn't read it should give it a try. Kusagakure Rock and Every other Village in Shock
It was fun to read and very relaxing, but the lack of certain details makes it hard to imagine, like the village development. It comes out like introducing only the technology and nothing more, lacking more depth and making it hard to immerse. Secondly, the main character is almost like a side character in the development of the story. Third, the system completely vanishes after a few chapters, which left me quite confused about his strength. If you are not truly planning on using a system, you should just make the main character have a bloodline and training arc so that the banishment of the system will not make some people leave the fanfic immediately. Fourth, the characters are a bit bland in personality or outright out of character. Fifth, you tried so hard in preventing major tragedies that it makes some plot twists of yours become out of context. Sixth, the lies of the main character become too much readable that I'm confused about how people can be tricked by that. This was just a small reminder to me that the lies of the main character are too generic and unbelievable, causing a significant loss of interest. But overall, you made it fun to read, and I managed to laugh sometimes. This was quite successful in storytelling and very relaxing to read, even though it was quite hard to immerse myself in the story. It also gave me another perspective. Congratulation
Perfect, Just perfect. If you're looking for a FF with new dynamics and totally brilliant, you've found it. Super fun to read, it doesn't get boring and has a high level of humor. 5 stars, totally recommend. Thank you for this fantastic work
[img=recommend] me gusta la historia es genial😎. Tiene tanta paz mental así como estabilidad emocional. El jefe de kusagakure no solo trae libertad sino que logra dar tranquilidad a los que lo rodean. Sin duda es un líder porque va enfrente de los problemas para que los demás sigan su ejemplo. Relajado en lo malo y serio en lo simple, simplemente cine.
Chapter 37. Sorry I can't continue, the story is starting to get boring because the plot is starting to repeat itself. MC Building a Village > Ninja Clan Rescue > Making a Movie > Back to Building a Village and so on. There are no fights involving the MC. I think this is suitable for those of you who want to see the MC's daily life building a village, if you don't get bored with the same plot. Just that.
Hello, thank you for taking the time to read this. Unfortunately, there is nothing of substance to find in this review. I hope you have a nice day.
what's the name of the mtl novel this story is inspired from? find the premise of the story quite original and love the bouts of shamelessness depicted
What Can I say, It's My First Novel So obv. I have to give 5 stars to myself for even trying.
This is a real gem. If this book was made into a show I would be the first one to watch it .
it's very nice and you must read it, very funny and perfect change, things changes so fast it's funny that itis actually happening.
this is a masterpiece. a rare worldbuilding novel rather than train for 200 chaps plus the comedy is gold 10/10 no doubt about it 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
Esta historia está bastante buena, un toque de humor y un poco de seriedad. Se recurre mucho al chiste de secuestrar a Danzo pero es una joyita cómica de la historia y más como lo ha llegado a afectar. El avance de la historia también es muy bueno y es progresiva y sin estancarse demasiado. El único tema que me ha molestado es el tema del sistema que se le dan al protagonista y no hace acto de presencia en la historia. Pese a eso es una historia agradable de leer y muy recomendable. [img=update][img=recommend]
Spoiler de révélation um dos melhores fanfic de naruto, o primeiro que vi nesse estilo, e capaz de mudar muita coisa, nem sei como vai ficar no final, tem uma comedia muito boa , so não sei porque tem a tag de harem? vim aqui so para procurar a tag anti-harem
Esperaba encontrarme un escritura de fanfic promedio de naruto y, no es así. Aunque es cierto que no ha cambiado mucho la historia (voy por el capitulo 38) me ha hecho reír y sonreír en sus momentos. Así que no esperes algo muy muy profundo, pero si es muy entretenido y divertido
If you are tired of Naruto Fanfictions where fighting is the main theme, then this is the perfect fanfic for you. The MC spent his focus on developing the village and kept the most vulnerable victims in times of war, children, and noncombat away from the atrocity. The MC portrays a high level of strategy, cunningness and kingdom-building tendency. Some comments complained about why they don't dive into the practical use of certain clans. I think it's unreasonable to do so. Why? Because they are not to fight wars. The MC invited them for 2 reasons: increasing workforce and population. Without people, they couldn't produce things that could alleviate the economy, and without people who would stand guard and work. Thank you author!
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Honestly it’s a entertaining read but it should show more of what the system contributes to the mc and the village because if not you might as well say it’s not a system fanfic. Also I think you should show more of what the mc battle prowes or what abilities he has and just have him more In the story since he’s the mc since it kind feel like he’s a side character
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Spoiler de révélation I really like the story, I left it to ferment for a while and I came back to it today and I really like this, I've had a lot of laughs from this, telling the world of naruto from another perspective which is another thing I love. Overall amazing book, story, development, thank you author.
In my opinion, this fanfics is one of the best Naruto fanfic I have ever read. I really like how the mc ninjutsu are not all mix and matches unlike some fics. The comedy here is very unique and the way the canon character diverts from the original is very refreshing. I honestly enjoy reading this.
212 capítulos fue el limite que pude leer sinceramente desde ahí ya me canse es bueno me rei bastante pero tengo mis limites
Рекомендую к чтению 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
uma boa novel de naruto, tem uma construção interessante e feita de forma bem diferente, uma das poucas novels de naruto que ainda se mantem na minha biblioteca
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT GOES THROUGH THESE PEOPLE'S MIND TO GIVE SUCH A LOW RATING. SERIOUSLY, THIS IS A GREAT STORY, THAT GOES OUT OF THE STANDARD AND TAKES YOU ON A VERY UNIQUE ADVENTURE THAT YOU WON'T FIND ELSEWHERE. TOP 5 OF ALL FAN FICTION
it's not even looks like a ninja fanfic, less fighting and more into making money. how tf this is Naruto fanfic if author focus more on making money ffs.
This fic said it wasn’t a system fanfic but has a system. Please clarify the tags because I was looking for a naruto fanfic without a system and since this fic didn’t have that tag I selected it. But it turns out it was a system fanfic. Please correct your tags.
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Ome of my Favorite stories so far. MC is OP but he uses brain instead. Also Mubuki is The Man, The Myth The Legend haha. Very funny and awesome story. People who didn't read it should give it a try. Kusagakure Rock and Every other Village in Shock
It was fun to read and very relaxing, but the lack of certain details makes it hard to imagine, like the village development. It comes out like introducing only the technology and nothing more, lacking more depth and making it hard to immerse. Secondly, the main character is almost like a side character in the development of the story. Third, the system completely vanishes after a few chapters, which left me quite confused about his strength. If you are not truly planning on using a system, you should just make the main character have a bloodline and training arc so that the banishment of the system will not make some people leave the fanfic immediately. Fourth, the characters are a bit bland in personality or outright out of character. Fifth, you tried so hard in preventing major tragedies that it makes some plot twists of yours become out of context. Sixth, the lies of the main character become too much readable that I'm confused about how people can be tricked by that. This was just a small reminder to me that the lies of the main character are too generic and unbelievable, causing a significant loss of interest. But overall, you made it fun to read, and I managed to laugh sometimes. This was quite successful in storytelling and very relaxing to read, even though it was quite hard to immerse myself in the story. It also gave me another perspective. Congratulation
Perfect, Just perfect. If you're looking for a FF with new dynamics and totally brilliant, you've found it. Super fun to read, it doesn't get boring and has a high level of humor. 5 stars, totally recommend. Thank you for this fantastic work
[img=recommend] me gusta la historia es genial😎. Tiene tanta paz mental así como estabilidad emocional. El jefe de kusagakure no solo trae libertad sino que logra dar tranquilidad a los que lo rodean. Sin duda es un líder porque va enfrente de los problemas para que los demás sigan su ejemplo. Relajado en lo malo y serio en lo simple, simplemente cine.
Chapter 37. Sorry I can't continue, the story is starting to get boring because the plot is starting to repeat itself. MC Building a Village > Ninja Clan Rescue > Making a Movie > Back to Building a Village and so on. There are no fights involving the MC. I think this is suitable for those of you who want to see the MC's daily life building a village, if you don't get bored with the same plot. Just that.
Hello, thank you for taking the time to read this. Unfortunately, there is nothing of substance to find in this review. I hope you have a nice day.
what's the name of the mtl novel this story is inspired from? find the premise of the story quite original and love the bouts of shamelessness depicted
What Can I say, It's My First Novel So obv. I have to give 5 stars to myself for even trying.