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"Are you the writer?" "Hn." "So you are obviously going to give yourself 5 stars, right?" "Hn."
The writing style of this fic is definitely unique and it feels like a breath of fresh air after so many similar Naruto fics. From the first four chapters it definitely looks promising if the next chapters are the same. keep it up MrAuthor👍
spent 1500 points on the character because of the Ignore This chapter 😂😂😂 it made me laugh and have a great day so why not 😂
This fic made me laugh so hard I almost pee’d my pants. Also: scariest Uchihafangirl fan club I’ve ever seen. If we see more of it this might become a horror story. Still funny though.
Pretty funny read can’t lie, gets the Uchiha verbal skills perfectly replicated.
It started off well enough, but the grammar is atrocious. It wasn't enough to deter me by itself since I found the MC amusing, but then his sister and girlfriend (of his current life not his precious one) suddenly turn out to be reincarnations too! Nope no thanks.
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I don't know what the feck is going on but it's hella funny 😂😂 ............................................................................................................................................................
OP But dont drop it . ......................................................................................
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great english/translate and interesting story/plot.. It interesting to see story where there no MC Pov.. I like MC/Mikaboshi character, he's not afraid to do what he want, even denied do mission and open a tea stall instead, it's so funny.. Hope he can change many thing, like Uchiha massacre (he's change a Hyuga heiress kidnapping, so is Hizashi still alive??) Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great job author sama 😁👍👍😍
its fun and thats it . if you read strawberry naruto ff its same style but this one seems too bad if you read the other novel but it is still fun to read
upload more episode don't be mean this thing is too good to hang like this. ................................................................................................
It is unique writing style and very fun to read.........................................................
A very wonderful story I read many stories about Uchiha but I liked this one a lot I wish there was a more flashback about how he was in the village and the school
interesting good read ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This was fun to ready, at least you're not taking the characters too seriously. Looking forward to more!
a fun read. unique style of writing. An MC that doesnt take himself too seriously from the looks of it. no die danzo! Sarutobi you hypocrite! and such. it feels fresh
it is a translation? give a link to the original please, I liked the beginning of the fanfiction, it's a pity there are so few chapters. it is a translation? give a link to the original please, I liked the beginning of the fanfiction, it's a pity there are so few chapters. it is a translation? give a link to the original please, I liked the beginning of the fanfiction, it's a pity there are so few chapters.
"Are you the writer?" "Hn." "So you are obviously going to give yourself 5 stars, right?" "Hn."
The writing style of this fic is definitely unique and it feels like a breath of fresh air after so many similar Naruto fics. From the first four chapters it definitely looks promising if the next chapters are the same. keep it up MrAuthor👍
spent 1500 points on the character because of the Ignore This chapter 😂😂😂 it made me laugh and have a great day so why not 😂
This fic made me laugh so hard I almost pee’d my pants. Also: scariest Uchihafangirl fan club I’ve ever seen. If we see more of it this might become a horror story. Still funny though.
Pretty funny read can’t lie, gets the Uchiha verbal skills perfectly replicated.
It started off well enough, but the grammar is atrocious. It wasn't enough to deter me by itself since I found the MC amusing, but then his sister and girlfriend (of his current life not his precious one) suddenly turn out to be reincarnations too! Nope no thanks.
Spoiler de révélation I don't know what the feck is going on but it's hella funny 😂😂 ............................................................................................................................................................
OP But dont drop it . ......................................................................................
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I love it!!! 😍😍 It have a great english/translate and interesting story/plot.. It interesting to see story where there no MC Pov.. I like MC/Mikaboshi character, he's not afraid to do what he want, even denied do mission and open a tea stall instead, it's so funny.. Hope he can change many thing, like Uchiha massacre (he's change a Hyuga heiress kidnapping, so is Hizashi still alive??) Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the great job author sama 😁👍👍😍
its fun and thats it . if you read strawberry naruto ff its same style but this one seems too bad if you read the other novel but it is still fun to read
upload more episode don't be mean this thing is too good to hang like this. ................................................................................................
It is unique writing style and very fun to read.........................................................
A very wonderful story I read many stories about Uchiha but I liked this one a lot I wish there was a more flashback about how he was in the village and the school
interesting good read ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This was fun to ready, at least you're not taking the characters too seriously. Looking forward to more!
a fun read. unique style of writing. An MC that doesnt take himself too seriously from the looks of it. no die danzo! Sarutobi you hypocrite! and such. it feels fresh
it is a translation? give a link to the original please, I liked the beginning of the fanfiction, it's a pity there are so few chapters. it is a translation? give a link to the original please, I liked the beginning of the fanfiction, it's a pity there are so few chapters. it is a translation? give a link to the original please, I liked the beginning of the fanfiction, it's a pity there are so few chapters.
I only have 1 thing to say about this. Y O U T H Y O U T H Y O U T H 👍👍👍