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The book is great. I'm not even done with it yet, but I got the urge to review. It unique, and the FL fantasies are kind of fun.
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it's an amazing book, even the cover is nice and I love the synopsis and first chapter, it was really eye catching and heart warming, keep up the good work.
[img=coins]Your writing is truly amazing, Alicia Yon. Your calm and cool writing techniques allow readers to fully immerse themselves in your stories without feeling rushed or overwhelmed. Your amazing fiction stories are simple yet captivating, and I cannot wait to see what you write next. Keep up the fantastic work!
amazing superpower entry is super... super writer..... i am curious about black hoodie man . who is this.. oh peony is not just innocent boy he also a superpower
overall nice..i wish this writer also write its many episodes as others we are waiting for next episode.. you change flower into boy is really amazing and unique
simple but nice. sometimes we all need escape from hollow world and need to enter in fiction world.[img=faceslap][img=coins]...i like to live alone but in fantasy world
Spoiler de révélation ❤️[img=faceslap][img=update]it is a fictional simple story with deep thoughts ❤️❤️
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Warm characters and good storyline, I like the cover, it looks like a kpop idol, I THOUGHT IT WAS A FANFIC lolololo I suggest you to use grammarly bro, and your review feed is sort of creepy, like check it with AE, may be its a glitch
The book is great. I'm not even done with it yet, but I got the urge to review. It unique, and the FL fantasies are kind of fun.
Spoiler de révélation it's an amazing book, even the cover is nice and I love the synopsis and first chapter, it was really eye catching and heart warming, keep up the good work.
[img=coins]Your writing is truly amazing, Alicia Yon. Your calm and cool writing techniques allow readers to fully immerse themselves in your stories without feeling rushed or overwhelmed. Your amazing fiction stories are simple yet captivating, and I cannot wait to see what you write next. Keep up the fantastic work!
amazing superpower entry is super... super writer..... i am curious about black hoodie man . who is this.. oh peony is not just innocent boy he also a superpower
overall nice..i wish this writer also write its many episodes as others we are waiting for next episode.. you change flower into boy is really amazing and unique
simple but nice. sometimes we all need escape from hollow world and need to enter in fiction world.[img=faceslap][img=coins]...i like to live alone but in fantasy world
Spoiler de révélation ❤️[img=faceslap][img=update]it is a fictional simple story with deep thoughts ❤️❤️
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Warm characters and good storyline, I like the cover, it looks like a kpop idol, I THOUGHT IT WAS A FANFIC lolololo I suggest you to use grammarly bro, and your review feed is sort of creepy, like check it with AE, may be its a glitch