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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The novel is very good lemme highlight the main points: Writing Quality: One word, superb the author revises the chapters every now and then and every revision ups the quality of it so fricking much most writers do not revise but this author does so this makes her special and unique. Stability Of Updates: Some of the most stable updates I have ever seen, a chapter everyday so good! not many authors do that. Story Development: Neither fast nor slow exactly as I like, it keeps us on our toes every single time. Character Design: The specialty of this book is its unique characters each and every one with their own personality. World Background: As there are already two worlds the world background becomes tough but the author handled it in a unique and lovely way. Hats off! Keep up the good work author and I would love to see more of your work. Congrats on getting contracted, you finally reap all the fruits of your hard work XD.
A unit take for isekai novel, the story was interesting. It's have so much potential, just around chapter 4,5,6 he or she it's a little confusing. Butian? Is he a he or a she. Any way it's a good read. [img=recommend]
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At the beginning there were very long paragraphs, which was corrected in the next chapter. Soon after there were some extra spaces between paragraphs, which was also corrected. We can clearly see that the author cares about the work and is constantly improving to make it better. I am fascinated by the world that is appearing after they pass through the isekai gate. Definitely a yes
Okay,if ken's father is really alive,I'll more than tell my dad to beg,and the sweet voice in my head well....let's say I'll gladly fight back,okay time for the review. superb book savvy,the description of the novel;it's like really seeing what you're reading, awesome chapters, please don't stop there,cause am dying to see ken's fight or flight
Hello, thank you for coming, if you like it, please kindly add my book to your liblary. I am the author of this novel, and I hope my book didn't disappoint you all. I need your support. English is not my primary language, so please give me feedback and provide me with a note if there is a mistake in my novel so that in the future, I can revise my book. Happy reading. [first release 24 April 2023]
The novel is very good lemme highlight the main points: Writing Quality: One word, superb the author revises the chapters every now and then and every revision ups the quality of it so fricking much most writers do not revise but this author does so this makes her special and unique. Stability Of Updates: Some of the most stable updates I have ever seen, a chapter everyday so good! not many authors do that. Story Development: Neither fast nor slow exactly as I like, it keeps us on our toes every single time. Character Design: The specialty of this book is its unique characters each and every one with their own personality. World Background: As there are already two worlds the world background becomes tough but the author handled it in a unique and lovely way. Hats off! Keep up the good work author and I would love to see more of your work. Congrats on getting contracted, you finally reap all the fruits of your hard work XD.
A unit take for isekai novel, the story was interesting. It's have so much potential, just around chapter 4,5,6 he or she it's a little confusing. Butian? Is he a he or a she. Any way it's a good read. [img=recommend]
so interesting, recomended[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
At the beginning there were very long paragraphs, which was corrected in the next chapter. Soon after there were some extra spaces between paragraphs, which was also corrected. We can clearly see that the author cares about the work and is constantly improving to make it better. I am fascinated by the world that is appearing after they pass through the isekai gate. Definitely a yes
Okay,if ken's father is really alive,I'll more than tell my dad to beg,and the sweet voice in my head well....let's say I'll gladly fight back,okay time for the review. superb book savvy,the description of the novel;it's like really seeing what you're reading, awesome chapters, please don't stop there,cause am dying to see ken's fight or flight
Hello, thank you for coming, if you like it, please kindly add my book to your liblary. I am the author of this novel, and I hope my book didn't disappoint you all. I need your support. English is not my primary language, so please give me feedback and provide me with a note if there is a mistake in my novel so that in the future, I can revise my book. Happy reading. [first release 24 April 2023]