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Man this is not Spider-Man this is some sort of monster like I don’t understand why not just give him a Spider-Man type quirk with enhanced strength heightened senses enhanced speed and all that why do you have to give him 5 quirks that does not make him Spider-Man and you just had to give him a symbiote like quirk. I also hated the fact how he was in his lab and his parents never decided to go check up on him he may have intelligence quirk but he is still 14 in their eyes they didn’t bother at all not even bothered to ask what was he doing. Anyways Dropped I was hoping for a true Spider-Man web shooting taking down villains when they attack UA helping deku and all that jazz but nope.
Solid Grammar.Excellent History.It was actually good enough.This guy deserves more!
The story isn't bad because its new but i know the creator will get better at it and the upload schedule is faster than any other webnovel that i've waited
No esta tan mal...............................................................................................
Man this is not Spider-Man this is some sort of monster like I don’t understand why not just give him a Spider-Man type quirk with enhanced strength heightened senses enhanced speed and all that why do you have to give him 5 quirks that does not make him Spider-Man and you just had to give him a symbiote like quirk. I also hated the fact how he was in his lab and his parents never decided to go check up on him he may have intelligence quirk but he is still 14 in their eyes they didn’t bother at all not even bothered to ask what was he doing. Anyways Dropped I was hoping for a true Spider-Man web shooting taking down villains when they attack UA helping deku and all that jazz but nope.
Solid Grammar.Excellent History.It was actually good enough.This guy deserves more!
The story isn't bad because its new but i know the creator will get better at it and the upload schedule is faster than any other webnovel that i've waited
No esta tan mal...............................................................................................