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I've been wondering where I read this plot so I freshen my mind and I remember there is Manwha(Korean) where some plot have similarities calles "The Greatest Estate Developer". For some reason i cant post the picture Y_Y LOL
I didn't like the sensitive system at all, I also didn't like how it can get into his head to make him feel pain and force him to accept something (summon contract) [Google translator]
its quite funny although i dont really warm up to the sassy talking system.can't wait for him to ''introduce'' his teamates to the joys of saving up money in order to laze around looking at clouds with a bbq running at the side
First mistake, nobody in konoha is actually named Tobias.. Naruto world is a Japanese themed universe so by using western names, you are ruining the nuances and the vibes of Naruto.
I've been wondering where I read this plot so I freshen my mind and I remember there is Manwha(Korean) where some plot have similarities calles "The Greatest Estate Developer". For some reason i cant post the picture Y_Y LOL
I didn't like the sensitive system at all, I also didn't like how it can get into his head to make him feel pain and force him to accept something (summon contract) [Google translator]
its quite funny although i dont really warm up to the sassy talking system.can't wait for him to ''introduce'' his teamates to the joys of saving up money in order to laze around looking at clouds with a bbq running at the side
First mistake, nobody in konoha is actually named Tobias.. Naruto world is a Japanese themed universe so by using western names, you are ruining the nuances and the vibes of Naruto.
Dude you spent 22 chapters on the life of a 6 years old waste of time