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It's good so far. There are some very minor errors in reading and there is also a slight acceleration of events.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😊❤️😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
This is one of the best reverend insanity fanfiction !!! The MC is not overly op and has character development so it’s refreshing
Great FF Keep It going ................ ... ,.......................................... . ................
Great except that it doesn't talk enough about fang yuan (even if it's not his 3rd reincarnation) Mo bei's character is smart, and he's not as evil as fan yuan, I hope he can go out. and also make other reincarnated friends
Writing quality 4 stars: Sometimes there will be weird phrasing or slight jumps in the writing but overall it reads well. Update stability 5 stars: 30 chapters in a few days... Story development 5 stars: Logical and good so far. Character Design 4 stars World background 4 stars: This is a RI Fanfic, and it's a pretty good one
Mo Bei, a young Gu Master, is reborn into a new life with limited knowledge. Despite facing many obstacles and opportunities, he is determined to rise to the top and see the Gu Yue Clan achieve prominence and strength. While striving towards his goal, Mo Bei creates his own faction, forging alliances and building a network of support to overcome the death flags that threaten him at every turn. With each challenge he faces, Mo Bei grows stronger, more confident, and more focused on achieving his objectives. His journey may be slow, but he will definitely emerge from battles wiser. Failure teaches him discipline. Victory earns him glory, wealth and strength.
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Spoiler de révélation It's good so far. There are some very minor errors in reading and there is also a slight acceleration of events.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😊❤️😊❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
This is one of the best reverend insanity fanfiction !!! The MC is not overly op and has character development so it’s refreshing
Great FF Keep It going ................ ... ,.......................................... . ................
Great except that it doesn't talk enough about fang yuan (even if it's not his 3rd reincarnation) Mo bei's character is smart, and he's not as evil as fan yuan, I hope he can go out. and also make other reincarnated friends
Writing quality 4 stars: Sometimes there will be weird phrasing or slight jumps in the writing but overall it reads well. Update stability 5 stars: 30 chapters in a few days... Story development 5 stars: Logical and good so far. Character Design 4 stars World background 4 stars: This is a RI Fanfic, and it's a pretty good one
Mo Bei, a young Gu Master, is reborn into a new life with limited knowledge. Despite facing many obstacles and opportunities, he is determined to rise to the top and see the Gu Yue Clan achieve prominence and strength. While striving towards his goal, Mo Bei creates his own faction, forging alliances and building a network of support to overcome the death flags that threaten him at every turn. With each challenge he faces, Mo Bei grows stronger, more confident, and more focused on achieving his objectives. His journey may be slow, but he will definitely emerge from battles wiser. Failure teaches him discipline. Victory earns him glory, wealth and strength.