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While the idea of a reincarnated Esdeath is interesting, the author was too ambitious with the heavily AU universe and not skilled enough to make it an interesting story. While it is normal for a novice author to write at the level of a novice, writing an AU fic requires a lot of skill to compensate for the fall in expectations of the reader who normally wants to see a world more faithful to the original with the divergence from canon occurring due to the actions of the protagonist. I recommend the author try to gain experience with simpler projects before trying something so ambitious.
While the idea of a reincarnated Esdeath is interesting, the author was too ambitious with the heavily AU universe and not skilled enough to make it an interesting story. While it is normal for a novice author to write at the level of a novice, writing an AU fic requires a lot of skill to compensate for the fall in expectations of the reader who normally wants to see a world more faithful to the original with the divergence from canon occurring due to the actions of the protagonist. I recommend the author try to gain experience with simpler projects before trying something so ambitious.