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Keep it up author I know its your first novel but I liked it till now........................................................................................................
I think story is getting more interesting as the ch are released I hope it doesn't disappoint................................................................................
I don't read it yet but MC Kirito weeb was just a normal nobody. The heck! How can someone with name 'Kirito' be just some nobody?!
I am New at novels but I somewhat like this novel hope it carries on good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍________________________________________________________________
The story is not good it is the very very generic and the mc just get everything given to him there is no struggle plus You do not go into detail enoug. It just seems like your honestly lazy after all for his death you did pretty much just say he died and moved on. You need to go more in depth build the relationships better. The only redeeming quality so far is the update stability.
interesting story keep up. more chapterrrr can't wait to see little aron new skills. The plot is interesting hope his adventures will start soon.[img=update]
Going to be completely honest, not the greatest. Your first chapter wasn’t even 100 words long. No character/world development. A good chuck of the text is just the system, it makes me not want to read at all.
Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need,I can give you more power stones and comments. This novel was an enthralling ride through a fantastical world. The characters were well-developed and the plot kept me hooked from start to finish. Despite the novel ending a little abruptly, the journey was engaging and thought-provoking and I highly recommend it to all readers looking for an exciting and absorbing read.
Concept is ok like most of the reincarnation novel. I will give it a chance ____________________________________________________________________________________
God plot keep it up_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I like novel with system hope it will satisfy me. And author update the novel everyday till now hope it will be same in future. good work keep it up
I think its to early to write a review but i liked the story till now so to encourage the author I'm writing this review . I hope that good story will be continued
Untill now I'm satisfied hope author will keep continue this novel and do not leave in between[img=recommend][img=recommend] . Also like the plot
Hope that in future it will not be Harem novel . Like if you don't want harem 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 If it's Harem I will drop it maybe if stroy remains good I will not
Following this novel for past 4 days daily update has been there hope author will keep it up. story also seems pretty good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Story looks interesting hope it will be maintained.keep it up 👍 I also think that if possible upload daily or 5 times a week sorry for pressure 😅
Fast updates . Now only 5 ch But I think story is turning good in my opinion hope that story will develop more and so I do not loose my interest
Suggestion will be welcomed and will be applied to the novel Thank you for reading it
That guy is really very unlucky in first chapter ..............................................................................................
Keep it up author I know its your first novel but I liked it till now........................................................................................................
I think story is getting more interesting as the ch are released I hope it doesn't disappoint................................................................................
I don't read it yet but MC Kirito weeb was just a normal nobody. The heck! How can someone with name 'Kirito' be just some nobody?!
I am New at novels but I somewhat like this novel hope it carries on good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍________________________________________________________________
The story is not good it is the very very generic and the mc just get everything given to him there is no struggle plus You do not go into detail enoug. It just seems like your honestly lazy after all for his death you did pretty much just say he died and moved on. You need to go more in depth build the relationships better. The only redeeming quality so far is the update stability.
interesting story keep up. more chapterrrr can't wait to see little aron new skills. The plot is interesting hope his adventures will start soon.[img=update]
Going to be completely honest, not the greatest. Your first chapter wasn’t even 100 words long. No character/world development. A good chuck of the text is just the system, it makes me not want to read at all.
Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need,I can give you more power stones and comments. This novel was an enthralling ride through a fantastical world. The characters were well-developed and the plot kept me hooked from start to finish. Despite the novel ending a little abruptly, the journey was engaging and thought-provoking and I highly recommend it to all readers looking for an exciting and absorbing read.
Concept is ok like most of the reincarnation novel. I will give it a chance ____________________________________________________________________________________
God plot keep it up_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I like novel with system hope it will satisfy me. And author update the novel everyday till now hope it will be same in future. good work keep it up
I think its to early to write a review but i liked the story till now so to encourage the author I'm writing this review . I hope that good story will be continued
Untill now I'm satisfied hope author will keep continue this novel and do not leave in between[img=recommend][img=recommend] . Also like the plot
Hope that in future it will not be Harem novel . Like if you don't want harem 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 If it's Harem I will drop it maybe if stroy remains good I will not
Following this novel for past 4 days daily update has been there hope author will keep it up. story also seems pretty good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Story looks interesting hope it will be maintained.keep it up 👍 I also think that if possible upload daily or 5 times a week sorry for pressure 😅
Fast updates . Now only 5 ch But I think story is turning good in my opinion hope that story will develop more and so I do not loose my interest
Suggestion will be welcomed and will be applied to the novel Thank you for reading it
That guy is really very unlucky in first chapter ..............................................................................................