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Chapitre 570: About Naruto and the Nine-Tailed Fox

Earth Land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, the Village Hidden in the Leaves. 

 

March, x788. 

 

"So, you're telling me that one of the academy's teachers was planning to get Naruto killed and escape to Orochimaru's side?" Hiruzen asked angrily as he stared at the captain of the Anbu who rushed to the academy after feeling the Nine-Tailed Fox's magic power. "And how did no one notice this Mizuki's traitorous thoughts before this?" 

 

"He hid them well.. very well, in fact." The Anbu captain replied in a stoic tone. "Not even Iruka Umino, who worked with him on a daily basis was able to see through his façade, Lord Hokage. But isn't it more important to discuss Naruto Uzumaki? Perhaps after twelve years, the [Seal] is weakening." 

 

In response, Hiruzen glanced at Alfonzo, who arrived in his office with Kakashi around the same time the Anbu stormed the testing room in the academy. After receiving a nod from Alfonzo, Hiruzen released a heavy sigh. 

 

"You can leave that matter to me." Hiruzen said sternly. "For now, this is an S-Class secret. Make sure that Iruka and the Anbu in your squad know, as well. Dismissed." 

 

"Sir!" The Anbu Captain replied before quickly disappearing from the office. 

 

Once the Anbu Captain was gone, Hiruzen picked up his pipe. Then, he took a long drag. After holding the smoke in his lungs for a moment, he exhaled a large cloud of smoke. Then, he once again turned to look at Alfonzo. 

 

"so, you really did it, huh?" Hiruzen asked in a tired tone. "You really manage to help him control the Nine-Tailed Fox's power." 

 

"To an extent." Alfonzo replied with a shrug. "But other than getting him started on the right path, there's not much more I can do about it." 

 

"What do you mean?" Hiruzen asked while narrowing his eyes. 

 

Kakashi was focused on Alfonzo's next words, as well. 

 

"Well, all I did was introduce the two to each other." Alfonzo replied. "Everything else is up to how well Naruto can get along with him. But considering Naruto's personality, I don't think it will take all that long." 

 

"Introduced them? Get along? Why is it that I can understand all your words, but when you string them together into sentences, they don't make any sense." Hiruzen asked in a dumbfounded tone. 

 

Like Hiruzen, Kakashi also seemed confused about what Alfonzo was talking about. 

 

Seeing the expressions on Hiruzen and Kakashi's faces, Alfonzo exhaled a sigh. 

 

"Fine then, let me start from the beginning." Alfonzo said in an exasperated tone. "First, you are aware that the Nine-Tailed Fox is one of the Books of Zeref, right?" 

 

Both Hiruzen and Kakashi nodded in response. 

 

"Good." Alfonzo continued with a nod. "Then, did you know that the most powerful of Zeref's demons, or Etherious as they call themselves, have complete personalities?" 

 

That bit of information was news to the two experienced shinobi. So, they shook their heads in response to Alfonzo's question. 

 

"Even if that's true, how in the world do you know that?" Hiruzen asked skeptically. 

 

"Well, because I've met one of them." Alfonzo replied with another shrug. "He called himself Jackal. Instead of magic, he used something called a curse. The [Bomb Curse] was what he called it. And he interrupted Crawford Seam and Org's execution. Hell, Lici even killed him." 

 

'Well, it looked like she killed him, anyway.' Alfonzo thought to himself, finishing his sentence internally. 'We both know he's not dead, and won't truly die before we destroy the respawning chambers on Cube. But I can't tell them that. That's not something I'm supposed to know.' 

 

"And you think the Tailed Beasts are like these Etherious, I would assume?" Kakashi asked. Though, it was more like a statement than a question. 

 

Although he did not say anything, it was obvious Hiruzen was thinking the same thing. 

 

"That's right." Alfonzo said with a nod. "And if you consider the way they've been treated for the past four hundred years, it's obvious why they don't get along with humans." 

 

"Still, that doesn't explain why you… introduced Naruto to it." Hiruzen pointed out. 

 

"First of all, not 'it.' But 'him'." Alfonzo pointed out. "and I was getting to that. According to the history of your village, the First Hokage captured all the Tailed Beasts and gave them away to the other villages to be used as weapons. And even before that, the Ghost of the Uchiha, Madara Uchiha forced the Nine-Tailed Fox to battle on his behalf when he came to destroy the village decades ago." 

 

As that was not a secret to either Hiruzen or Kakashi, they simply nodded in response. 

 

"So, I got to thinking, that it might be possible to befriend the Tailed Beasts." Alfonzo continued. "I mean, since they had basically been imprisoned for decades, they were probably starved for friendship. So, I interacted with the [Seal] on Naruto, bringing his consciousness inside the [Seal] with me. And as it turned out, I was right." 

 

Alfonzo smiled proudly as he reached the end of his explanation. 

 

"but how did you come to that conclusion?" Hiruzen asked. "If you had been wrong, it could have been disastrous." 

 

"Not really." Alfonzo replied while shaking his head. "For one, the [Seal] is still going strong. So, even if he had been hostile, which he was when we first met him, I could have just strengthened the [Seal] before setting up a one way flow for the Nine-Tailed Fox's power. But that would have only made it angrier and more dangerous for the next Jinchuriki after Naruto." 

 

Hearing that, Hiruzen and Kakashi nodded in agreement. Though they were not well-versed enough in [Seals] to know if making a one-way bypass for the Nine-Tailed Fox's magic power was possible, they understood that, if it were in fact possible to do so, it would definitely make the Fox angrier and harder to control in the future. 

 

"And to answer your question about how I knew befriending the Fox would work, I've read about Killer Bee, the Jinchuriki of the Eight-Tails." Alfonzo continued. "And based on everything I read after raiding Danzo's base, he should be a Perfect Jinchuriki. Meaning, he can tap into all of the Eight-Tails power. And based on his personality, the only way he could have done that is by becoming its friend." 

 

"I can see how you came to that conclusion." Hiruzen said after stopping to think for a while. "Still, had you been wrong, it could have been disastrous for the Leaf. Maybe not now, but definitely in the future." 

 

"But I wasn't." Alfonzo replied with yet another shrug. "so, there's really no point in dwelling on it." 

 

'If I didn't already know the canon, though things are different in this world,..' Alfonzo thought to himself. '… I would have never even tried something so bat-shit insane.' 

 

"Anyway, just don't' get in the way of Naruto interacting with the Fox." Alfonzo said. "I believe he'll be able to become friends with him with no issue. And then, at some point, the [Seal] won't even be necessary anymore." 

 

"But then the Fox could break out of the boy's body." Hiruzen said in a panicked tone. "And that would more than likely spell the end for the Leaf." 

 

"If you had a friend that you trusted with your life, and you know that one of your actions would definitely kill him, would you do it?" Alfonzo asked a seemingly unrelated question. 

 

Confused by Alfonzo's question, both Hiruzen and Kakashi shook their heads in reply. 

 

"And that's how the Fox will feel by the time I remove Naruto's [Seal]. Or rather, when Naruto removes it himself." Alfonzo said in a solemn tone. "Trust me. The Etherious are much more pure than humans. On top of that, they all seem to feel its beneath them to deceive a human. So, even though most of them are hostile to humans, they never lie to them. They'd rather just kill them, instead." 

 

Like that, the conversation continued with Alfonzo trying to alleviate Hiruzen and Kakashi's fears. And he eventually succeeded, to an extent. At that point, he was allowed to leave. However, Kakashi did not leave with him, as Hiruzen had asked him to stay for a different conversation. 

 

"What do you need of me, Lord Hokage?" Kakashi asked respectfully. 

 

"You already know I want you to become a Jōnin Instructor for this batch of academy graduates, again, right?" Hiruzen asked. 

 

"That's right." Kakashi replied with a nod. "But Lord Hokage, you know my standards. Don't be surprised if no one passes my test this year, either." 

 

"Unfortunately, that cannot be allowed this time." Hiruzen said sternly. "I will be assigning you Sasuke Uchiha, Sakura Haruno, and Naruto Uzumaki as a Genin Team." 

 

"*Sigh* And you want at least Sasuke and Naruto trained properly, right?" Kakashi said in an exasperated tone. "And you think I'm the best to train them because of the fact that I'm Minato-Sensei's student and have a Sharingan, right." 

 

"Although you're mostly right, I want to make sure that Sakura is trained properly as well." Hiruzen replied. "According to the Anbu, that girl has been training with the girl from Fairy Tail, Wendy, who trained under Tsunade. So, if she is trained properly, she'll be a great asset to the village." 

 

"But I know nothing about [Medical Ninjutsu], Sir.' Kakashi said in an apprehensive tone. 

 

"That's true." Hiruzen said with a nod. "But you're quite skilled in every other aspect of being a shinobi… Well, accept for being punctual. I'll trust you not to pass that trait onto your students." 

 

Under his mask, Kakashi could only grin sheepishly in reply. 

 

"Anyway, until they leave, we'll ask Miss Wendy to continue Sakura's training in [Medical Ninjutsu]." Hiruzen said, returning to his stern tone. "But keep this in mind, Sakura, with Tsunade's techniques under her belt, could grow into the most well-rounded kunoichi in the village if you train her properly. So, I'm counting on your skill as a teacher. Show me what made you one of the greatest Anbu trainers of your generation." 

 

"*Sigh* I understand." Kakashi said in a resigned tone. "I'll do my best. Still, I don't know how to face Naruto. I was his father's student… But when things were at their worst for him, I didn't help at all." 

 

"Just tell him the truth, Kakashi. That thanks to the orders you received, you were not allowed to help him." Hiruzen said in a grandfatherly tone. A moment later, his smile turned into a knowing one as he continued. "But don't think I didn't know about the ways you helped him in secret. For example, all those groceries that seemingly showed up out of nowhere when he was completely out of food and money." 

 

Kakashi could only look away sheepishly in response, embarrassed that he had been caught. 

 

"Anyway, you should go and prepare to guide your new students. "I expect you to be on time to pick them up, as well. Also, have Yamato come see me, I have a mission for him." 

 

"*Sigh* I'll try." Kakashi replied as he stood up. "I'll find Yamato immediately, too." 

 

After standing up, Kakashi bowed respectfully. Then, in a swirl of leaves, he vanished from Hiruzen's office. 

 

"*Sigh* I get the feeling that those kids are gonna end up waiting for quite a while after the Genin teams are announced." Hiruzen said as he picked up his pipe again. Then, after taking a toke, he looked around his office with a frown. A moment later, he spoke once again after exhaling the smoke in his lungs. "And just who does he expect to clean up all these leaves?" 

 

Meanwhile, back at the residence where the guests from Magnolia were staying, the Rookie 9 had gathered to tell Alfonzo and the others that they had all passed the graduation exam. Even their families were in attendance to join the celebration. Unfortunately, Sakura's parents, who were only civilians, were not too friendly to Naruto. And that lead to a small argument between Sakura and her parents. 

 

The argument was eventually ended when the shinobi parents stood up for Naruto, causing not only Sakura's parents to be thoroughly confused, but Naruto, as well. Despite all that, Naruto was not confused for long. Instead, he started telling everyone how he caught Mizuki, and how he was actually planning to betray the Leaf, in a proud tone. Naturally, he embellished quite a bit. But because everyone was so happy about the graduation and the kids becoming Genin, they did not say anything about it. 

 

Under Kurama's instruction, Naruto did leave the part about using his magic power out, though. And Alfonzo greatly approved of that decision. Though, he was sure it would come out that he could use it, eventually. But for now, he was just happy to celebrate with the kids he helped to train over the last several months. And he did so by going all out in the kitchen, cooking a big enough meal that everyone could eat until they were stuffed, even Choji and his father, Choza. 


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Chapitre 571: Giving Her Body, Heart, and Soul

Earth Land, Ishgar, Kingdom of Fiore, the Village Hidden in the Leaves.

 

March, x788.

 

The day after the graduation exam, things started as they always did. However, when Alfonzo and Miyuki left the house to make their way to the training ground Alfonzo was working on, there was a man other than Kakashi waiting for them outside the door.

 

Standing just outside the door, with his hand raised to knock, was a man with short brown hair, almond shaped black eyes, wearing the standard Leaf Jōnin attire with a turtle neck that covered his chin, and a forehead protector that split downwards to cover his cheeks.

 

"Oh… Uh… Good morning." The brown-haired man said awkwardly as he slowly lowered his hand. Then, he put on a forced smile as he extended his hand towards Alfonzo for a handshake. "I'm Yamato. I was sent here to replaced Kakashi… Now that he's…"

 

"Been assigned as a Jōnin Instructor." Alfonzo said, finishing Yamato's sentence with a smile. Then, he accepted Yamato's handshake as he continued. "It's nice to meet you, Yamato. I'm Alfonzo Marcus. And this is my attendant, Miyuki Kujo."

 

"It's a pleasure." Miyuki said with a curtsey after Alfonzo introduced her.

 

"Oh, the pleasure is mine." Yamato replied as he released Alfonzo's hand. "Well then, shall we be on our way?"

 

"Sure, let's go." Alfonzo replied with a nod as he and Miyuki followed Yamato to Training Ground 40.

 

'Holy shit, he sounds just like Troy Baker.' Alfonzo thought to himself while continuing to chat with Yamato along the way. 'I wonder if his voice will change at some point in the future.'

 

Alfonzo chuckled internally at how characters would change voice actors in anime, knowing that stuff like that did not happen in real life.

 

Other than getting Yamato as an observer, the day went the same as usual. Until the evening, at least. Though the Rookie 9 did come over to talk about how their day went and who their Jōnin Instructors were, they did not train. Nor did they stay long enough for dinner.

 

To be honest, Alfonzo was expecting as much, though. But them leaving before dinner was unexpected. It was funny to see Choji looking back every few steps as he went home, though.

 

Currently, after sending off the newly graduated Genin, the whole group, Alfonzo, Laki, Wendy, Carla, Saeko, and Miyuki, were in the kitchen of the residence. While Alfonzo was cooking and Miyuki was assisting him, Laki, Wendy, Carla, and Saeko were simply standing around while enjoying the scents of the food Alfonzo was preparing.

 

"So, they all have another test tomorrow, huh?" Laki asked with her usual smile on her face. "Maybe I'll go watch. Kakashi will be training the three you, Wendy, and Saeko helped. Maybe his mask will come off."

 

"I seriously doubt that it will." Alfonzo replied with a shrug while cooking dinner. "But I won't stop you. And I'm sure you already know this, but Kakashi probably won't show up until 9 a.m.,"

 

"Huh? But Sakura told us that their Survival Test was at 7 a.m." Wendy said in a confused tone.

 

"That's because Kakashi is always late." Miyuki replied. "Yesterday, Master Alfonzo brought it up with him in conversation."

 

"Really?" Saeko asked in a curious tone. "But I've never seen him be late when going with Alfonzo to the Training Grounds, though."

 

"Apparently, he's only on time when it comes to missions." Miyuki replied as she brought more ingredients to Alfonzo.

 

"Yeah, someone could get killed if you're like that on missions." Alfonzo added. "At least, that's what he said, anyway."

 

"It's hard to believe someone so skilled can act like that." Saeko said with a slight frown.

 

"Well, most people with talent have some quirks." Carla said while smiling wryly. "I mean, look at Fairy Tail. No one in the guild, except me and Wendy, are normal either."

 

Immediately, everyone stopped and turned towards Carla.

 

"What, why are you all looking at me like that?" Carla asked as she put her paws on her hips in defiance.

 

"Wendy aside, you? Normal?" Alfonzo asked with an eyebrow raised.

 

"And what's not normal about me?" Carla asked aggressively.

 

"You're a talking, flying cat." Laki said bluntly.

 

"And no matter how you look at it, that's not normal." Saeko added.

 

Hearing that, Carla stumbled backwards as if she had been punched in the gut. In fact, she almost fell off the counter, which she was standing on when this conversation began. Luckily, Wendy reacted quickly and caught her in her arms.

 

"You did get one thing partially right, though." Alfonzo said with a smile as he added more ingredients to the skillet he was tending to. "Wendy is the closest thing to normal our guild has. But even she's not completely normal."

 

"Really?" Wendy asked in a tone that sounded like she had been betrayed. "What's not normal about me?"

 

"You're a Dragon Slayer." Laki said bluntly.

 

"Yes, and Dragon Slayers are abnormal by default." Miyuki added.

 

Hearing that, Wendy's shoulders slumped.

 

"But what's wrong with that?" Alfonzo asked. "Being normal means you're like everyone else. But we're all unique. So, that's a good thing, right?"

 

While Wendy cheered up at that, Carla was still in shock that no one considered her normal. Despite that, Alfonzo and Miyuki eventually finished preparing dinner. Then, the group sat down to eat. After that, they all headed to their bedrooms, except for Alfonzo, who went to his workshop for about an hour and a half.

 

After returning to his room, Alfonzo smiled wryly just outside of the door. Someone was inside his room, and thanks to [Magic Power Detection], he knew exactly who it was.

 

Opening the door, Alfonzo was not surprised when he saw Saeko. However, when he saw her position and what she was wearing, he found himself thoroughly surprised..

 

Currently, Saeko was sitting in front of his door in the seiza position. On top of that, she was wearing a loose white yukata with her long, purple hair let down.

 

"Welcome back, Alfonzo." Saeko said with a bashful smile on her face. "I hope you don't mind, but I wanted to spend the night with you. Now that there is no training in the evenings, I thought tonight would be a good time."

 

Understanding exactly what Saeko meant by spend the night, Alfonzo walked through the door. Then, he closed the door behind him. And as soon as the door was closed, the walls, floor, and ceiling were covered in a thin layer of metal etched with miniscule silencing sigils.

 

Seeing Alfonzo's actions, Saeko's cheeks reddened. Despite her apparent bashfulness, she stood from her seiza position. Then she stepped towards Alfonzo before taking his hand gently. After that, she led him to the bed before having him sit on its edge.

 

===R-18===

 

"I won't ask if you're sure about this, because I can see in your eyes that you are." Alfonzo said as he allowed Saeko to take off his shirt. "But I wasn't expecting this. Not so early, at least. I mean, you seem to have quite a few traditional values."

 

"Though that is true." Saeko said as she carefully folded Alfonzo's shirt. "I have sworn to give you my body, heart, and soul. And giving you my body is what I intend to do."

 

"I see." Alfonzo replied with a nod.

 

A moment later, Saeko had finished folding Alfonzo's shirt. Then, after placing it on the foot of the bed, she leaned forward and kissed him. AS she did, she ran her hands up and down his naked torso. At the same time, Alfonzo pulled her close, his hands resting on her ass in the end.

 

"Mmm~!" Saeko moaned into the kiss as Alfonzo squeezed her well-toned ass.

 

A moment later, Saeko broke the kiss. Then, she started kissing down Alfonzo's neck, to his chest and down his abdomen. When she eventually reached the waistband of his pants, she gently unbuckled his belt, unbuttoned his pants, and unzipped them. Then, she attentively helped him take off his pants.

 

Now wearing only his underwear, Alfonzo watched as Saeko, like she did with his shirt, folded his pants before placing them on top of his shirt. Then, she returned her attention to Alfonzo's body. And after looking it up and down for a few moments, she reached out her hands to the bulge in his underwear gently.

 

With gentle movement's, Saeko caressed Alfonzo's dick over his boxers. However, it did not take long for her to also pull his boxers down, revealing his half-erect dick. Once it was revealed, Saeko took his dick in her hands, she began stroking it slowly, yet firmly.

 

Before she could do any more, however, Alfonzo's right hand shot out, grabbing a fistful of Saeko's hair before pulling her forcefully into another kiss. Meanwhile, Saeko continued to stroke his dick. And as the kiss deepened, so too did her hand move up and down faster and faster.

 

Before long, Saeko, while continuing to stroke Alfonzo's dick, used her free hand to untie the sash holding her yukata shut. Then, once it was open, she pressed her body forward while sandwiching Alfonzo's dick between her D-cup breasts. After that, with her hands on her breasts, she began using them to stroke Alfonzo's dick up and down.

 

This kiss and tit job went on for the next few minutes. However, just as Alfonzo was fully erect, he let go of Saeko's' hair, breaking the kiss in the process. Then, he reached down and pulled her up, before spinning around and throwing her on the bed, face up.

 

"Kya!" Saeko yelped in surprise at Alfonzo's quick turnaround of the situation.

 

"If you really want me to make your body mine, then that's what I'll do." Alfonzo said as he looked down at Saeko's body clad in only an open yukata.

 

And even though he had seen Saeko in a skimpy bikini at his mansion, he could not help but marvel at her toned body. There was not an ounce of unnecessary fat. Her arms were thin, yet powerful, her hips were relatively wide, and her legs were muscled, yet seemed soft at the same time. On top of that, her breasts were elastic and shaped perfectly.

 

Then, without another word, Alfonzo leaned forward and kissed Saeko on the left side of her neck. And once he started, he quickly kissed his way downward. Stopping to suck, lick, and nibble on her hard nipples as he moved down. Then, he let his tongue run down her stomach until he reached her shaved pussy.

 

"Ahn~~~~!" Saeko moaned as Alfonzo started licking her lower lips. And when he stuck his tongue inside, she could not help but moan even louder as she gripped two handfuls of his hair. "Oh~! Alfonzo~~~! This is… Ahn~! Amazing~~~!"

 

The longer Alfonzo's tongue brought her pleasure, the harder Saeko pulled on his hair. On top of that, her legs were beginning to shake while droplets of sweat started appearing all over her body. Then, after a few minutes, when Alfonzo pulled his tongue out of her pussy and started flicking it on her clit, she reached her limit.

 

"Ahh~~~~~!" Saeko screamed as she flailed her legs wildly while pulling Alfonzo's head deeper into her crotch with all her strength.

 

Eventually, after fifteen seconds or so, Saeko came down from her orgasm as she let go of Alfonzo's hair and her legs flopped to the bed listlessly. Meanwhile, on her face was a satisfied smile.

 

At the same time, while wiping Saeko's juices off his face, Alfonzo crawled up between Saeko's legs. Then, while on his knees, he held his dick and rubbed it against her dripping wet pussy.

 

"I hope you're ready for the real thing." Alfonzo said while grinning lustfully.

 

Opening her eyes, Saeko looked up at Alfonzo's face. And when she saw the grin he was wearing and the lustful glint in his eyes, she subconsciously opened her legs a little wider while nodding with expectation.

 

With that, Alfonzo put the tip of his dick against Saeko's pussy lips. Then, he slowly pushed it inside. Meanwhile, Saeko closed her eyes to endure the feeling of her insides being stretched out. Luckily, because of all her harsh training, her hymen had been broken long ago. So, aside from the uncomfortable feeling, that was quickly turning pleasurable, of having her vaginal walls stretched, she did not feel any of the pain she had heard about when a woman loses her virginity.

 

When Alfonzo reached her deepest parts, he leaned forward to kiss Saeko. And when he felt her vaginal walls relax, he started to move slowly while continuing to kiss her.

 

"Mmm~!" Saeko moaned into the kiss as she wrapped her arms around Alfonzo's neck. And as his strokes increased in speed, she also wrapped her legs around his waist as she continued to moan into the kiss. "Mmm~! Mmm~~~~~!"

 

Eventually, when Alfonzo reached a certain speed, Saeko broke the kiss as she threw her head back.

 

"Ahn~~~~! Alfonzo~~~! Faster~~~! Mmm~~~~! Faster~~~~~!" Saeko shouted in ecstasy as Alfonzo hit all her most sensitive spots.

 

When Alfonzo finally brought her to another orgasm, Saeko could not help but bite down on his shoulder. However, her bite did not even cause Alfonzo to flinch. Instead, it made him intensify his pounding. Then, just as Saeko's orgasm ended, she was brought to another one when Alfonzo shot his load deep inside of her.

 

Like that, the two shuddered together as they rode out their orgasms. Then, as Alfonzo was the first to recover, he rolled over onto his back, with Saeko still impaled on his dick.

 

"I hope you're not too tired to continue." Alfonzo said with a grin while planting his feet on the mattress. "Because we're just getting started."

 

With that, before Saeko had fully recovered from her last orgasm, Alfonzo sat her upright on his dick before he started pounding up into her from below. As a result, he could now get a firm grip of her ass while watching her breasts bounce with every thrust.

 

The couple continued their fun for the next few hours, until Saeko passed out after an especially powerful orgasm. Then, Alfonzo tucked them both into bed, kissed Saeko on the forehead, and fell asleep himself.


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