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Reborn on Pandora
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Dead at 22, your soul is literally trapped in stone. It just so happens that a hundred years later the Interplanetary Commerce Administration (ICA) let RDA build their base on top of your tombstone, now free, you join on board the ISV heading towards a moon called Pandora.
You witnessed a lot of things that happened but after not being able to talk to anyone and the war ending, you let your boredom get the better of you, powered by curiosity, you touched the tree of voice/souls, trapping you again. By some form of miracle or mystery, you were born together with your twin sister Kiri.
p.s the cover isn't mine, got most of the pics on Pinterest, credits goes to the maker and Avatar isn't mine, just the oc and a few others. English isn't really my first language, if I get something wrong just let me down slowly. Can't really take hyperactive criticism.lol. k. Bye
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Honestly I am interesting to see how this develops further, the story isn’t exactly amazing but it isn’t bad for a new writer. The characters seem a little flat and some things don’t make some sense but overall it is a decent attempt that can still be turned into something amazing if given time, hopefully this updates in the future but if not I wish you luck on your writing journey, even if you never post here again 👍