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Everything here is just my opinion. I'm not very far in the novel but if you are able to read the story it seems like the an average op Mc. He also seems a little bit incompetent for destroying an entire empire. When he "respawned" he didn't ask for information but just started his quests after seeing the system. Well it seems like he just gets everything he needs. The worst part is that we know of fate and an almost omnipotent being said that he will succeed in his Conquest or whatever he does. The world building until now also isn't very special to be honest. Church is evil and the demons are good. And it seems like the author is a little bit lazy. Many of the first chapters are only his stats and skills with around 1 or 2 paragraphs added. Some describtions also are a little bit confusing. There also is forced love and very random at that. He randomly transforms an elf and she instantly becomes his bride/wife and they love each other while knowing each other less than an hour. The writing quality is good even though I'm not really a fan of multiple povs because most of the time it's just fill or confuses me. Some digits are wrong but doesn't hinder the reading flow. I wouldn't recommend it as it is something average. As the reader already knows how it ends and what the aim is. There will be harem and it will destroy the entire storyline I think, such as the women getting in trouble and he needs to help or just getting too op. It's just nothing special. Just all the op abilities of vampires and the magic of this world put into one person and added an hardcarry support system.
Spoiler de révélation
Hello everyone, author here, i will be uploading chapters on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays from now on. I hope you all will continue to enjoy my novel, and feel free to leave a review.
Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need,I can give you more power stones and comments. This novel offers a unique take on a classic subject. Although the premise seems familiar and predictable, the characters and plot twists ensure a captivating read. I'd certainly suggest giving it a chance; it's definitely worth a read for its creativity and strong writing. Despite its conventional story, it packs a punch with its unexpected turns and engaging dialogue.
Everything here is just my opinion. I'm not very far in the novel but if you are able to read the story it seems like the an average op Mc. He also seems a little bit incompetent for destroying an entire empire. When he "respawned" he didn't ask for information but just started his quests after seeing the system. Well it seems like he just gets everything he needs. The worst part is that we know of fate and an almost omnipotent being said that he will succeed in his Conquest or whatever he does. The world building until now also isn't very special to be honest. Church is evil and the demons are good. And it seems like the author is a little bit lazy. Many of the first chapters are only his stats and skills with around 1 or 2 paragraphs added. Some describtions also are a little bit confusing. There also is forced love and very random at that. He randomly transforms an elf and she instantly becomes his bride/wife and they love each other while knowing each other less than an hour. The writing quality is good even though I'm not really a fan of multiple povs because most of the time it's just fill or confuses me. Some digits are wrong but doesn't hinder the reading flow. I wouldn't recommend it as it is something average. As the reader already knows how it ends and what the aim is. There will be harem and it will destroy the entire storyline I think, such as the women getting in trouble and he needs to help or just getting too op. It's just nothing special. Just all the op abilities of vampires and the magic of this world put into one person and added an hardcarry support system.
Spoiler de révélation Hello everyone, author here, i will be uploading chapters on Mondays, Wednesdays, and Fridays from now on. I hope you all will continue to enjoy my novel, and feel free to leave a review.
Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need,I can give you more power stones and comments. This novel offers a unique take on a classic subject. Although the premise seems familiar and predictable, the characters and plot twists ensure a captivating read. I'd certainly suggest giving it a chance; it's definitely worth a read for its creativity and strong writing. Despite its conventional story, it packs a punch with its unexpected turns and engaging dialogue.
Tally ho. Love the book so far pls continue writing