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This storyline and development is rlly good, once you read it you will know what i mean, right now i am just hopping that this hasn't been dropped. 5* for me.
The way the MC is personality is written is unique the lack of knowledge about them is an amazing hook with a good plot/system
excelente. lo unico malo es que hay pocos capitulos :c excelente. lo unico malo es que hay pocos capitulos :c excelente. lo unico malo es que hay pocos capitulos :c
it doesn't have that many chapter that I can give it a real review. This story reminds me of 'mangaka in teyvat.' Glad I found this gem. I look forward more chapters.
Love it when they dumb down everyone in order for this whole mysterious stranger persona. Hey Author have everyone internal monologue “ wHO aRE yOU” “wHErE dID hE cOmE fRoM?” “hOW dID hE gEt SuCH aN iTEm?” every two sentences please. Just so we can understand how interesting he is. And to make sure we KNOW that everyone is interested. Thanks for the 62IQ character understanding btw.
Pretty nice, only downside is update stability. Also, a suggestion, make it so chests have a 1% or less chance of getting a chest 1 tier higher as a reward, so people who only buy bronze can get a silver, people who only buy silver have a chance at gold (and since the price increases and buy limit decreases it won’t cause an issue) and gold has a chance for gaming box. Of course, that might inply the existence of a secret tier higher than gaming box only obtainable through a 1% chance or less of opening a gaming box
I will say it’s a lot more exciting then I thought it would be and now I’ m completely hooked. Can’t wait for the next chapters.
Really enjoying this rn. Hope this keeps updating I’d be pretty sad if it got dropped
i love this already [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]keep it up
YEP GOOD CONCEPT. I cant wait for next chapters. READ IT.READ IT.READ IT.READ IT.READ IT.READ IT.READ IT.READ IT. YOSH I WRITE THIS LINE SO I CAN POST IT.
Was decent, kept my interest for the whole 2 chapters out. Dropped probably tho
this has big potential and I like it, also the tarot cards in the beginning reminded me of lotm ngl but I hope author doesn't drop this fic umu that's all
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Great Story, harem for three is nice.I hope no more will be added...................................................................................
Although It's Too Early For Me To Write A Review I Just Wanna Say I Already Like Where The Story Is Going And I Hope You Can Add Hu Tao, Shenhe, Ei, And Yae Into The Harem
This storyline and development is rlly good, once you read it you will know what i mean, right now i am just hopping that this hasn't been dropped. 5* for me.
The way the MC is personality is written is unique the lack of knowledge about them is an amazing hook with a good plot/system
excelente. lo unico malo es que hay pocos capitulos :c excelente. lo unico malo es que hay pocos capitulos :c excelente. lo unico malo es que hay pocos capitulos :c
it doesn't have that many chapter that I can give it a real review. This story reminds me of 'mangaka in teyvat.' Glad I found this gem. I look forward more chapters.
Love it when they dumb down everyone in order for this whole mysterious stranger persona. Hey Author have everyone internal monologue “ wHO aRE yOU” “wHErE dID hE cOmE fRoM?” “hOW dID hE gEt SuCH aN iTEm?” every two sentences please. Just so we can understand how interesting he is. And to make sure we KNOW that everyone is interested. Thanks for the 62IQ character understanding btw.
Pretty nice, only downside is update stability. Also, a suggestion, make it so chests have a 1% or less chance of getting a chest 1 tier higher as a reward, so people who only buy bronze can get a silver, people who only buy silver have a chance at gold (and since the price increases and buy limit decreases it won’t cause an issue) and gold has a chance for gaming box. Of course, that might inply the existence of a secret tier higher than gaming box only obtainable through a 1% chance or less of opening a gaming box
I will say it’s a lot more exciting then I thought it would be and now I’ m completely hooked. Can’t wait for the next chapters.
Really enjoying this rn. Hope this keeps updating I’d be pretty sad if it got dropped
i love this already [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]keep it up
YEP GOOD CONCEPT. I cant wait for next chapters. READ IT.READ IT.READ IT.READ IT.READ IT.READ IT.READ IT.READ IT. YOSH I WRITE THIS LINE SO I CAN POST IT.
Was decent, kept my interest for the whole 2 chapters out. Dropped probably tho
this has big potential and I like it, also the tarot cards in the beginning reminded me of lotm ngl but I hope author doesn't drop this fic umu that's all
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Great Story, harem for three is nice.I hope no more will be added...................................................................................
Although It's Too Early For Me To Write A Review I Just Wanna Say I Already Like Where The Story Is Going And I Hope You Can Add Hu Tao, Shenhe, Ei, And Yae Into The Harem
pls gave us a new chapter i even gave you power stone