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He never fails to deliver. Could tell the author really worked on this book, especially the characters and the setting. I like the MC, and the story's beginning from the first chapter really makes me sucked into the entire narrative Thumbs up to this author and this book 🔥🔥🔥
This is an interesting book, no doubt. The characters, the worldbuilding, the writing style...mehn...! I can't say much because I can not speak English but trust me, this book is a sure read.... Good work author San 😉
I’m gonna keep it real. If you like books with the mc hiding his powers for no reason and still getting is constant trouble while having the author get him out of it then this is the book for you. For example, 2 assassins (tier 6) have been sent after him (tier 6 but seals himself to tier 2) so far and each time he has come out completely fine by unsealing his powers, which somehow doesn’t arise any suspicions from the most powerful ppl in the kingdom. In one case the principle, an extremely powerful being even felt him at tier 6 but still believed the mc’s lie. It just doesn’t make sense. Author tried to do an eminence of shadows vibe but failed because of rlly bad plot armor use.
Great book, nice world background, story progression isn't bad, character development isn't the best but it's great. Although it is slow paced, it's a good read.
Overall, the book is a great one coming from a new author. It's awesome and although the pacing is slow, I can assure you that it is worth it. It's one of those development books with a great potential.
Wow like.. are authors machines, is the question I would ask if I wasn't one haha. The author's creativity shined in this novel, I'm wondering why it isn't more popular.
Urekkkkkkk it is I Hoshi and I've come to leave final verdict. You've grown. I can't believe I didn't have this in my library before, I also paid for your locked chapters too. Tehee... Keep the good work you're gonna go places😜
Second reviewer and all I can say is that the story is not bad. I love the MC already and if you are a sucker for reincarnation novels then this book gets you covered because not just action-packed but suspense-filled. It's a good job that should be accompanied with a bucket of popcorn😂😂😂
It's a bit early but here's my review of my own book 😅. (It's going to be hyped obviously) The book's centered around Draneil, now Seth who was killed by the Primordial Demon. Betrayed by dragons of his kind, he vows to punish them... (all of these are in the synopsis and early chapters). Well, the books going to be great. I know there's been hundreds if not thousands of books about getting killed, reincarnated and getting revenge but I promise you this one's going to be unique. The world is set in a different world where humans and dragons coexist. There exist several gateways to other worlds which the dragons guard until of course, their death. The story development is great and I'm hoping you all will leave reviews about that. The character designs is also doing okay. More characters will be introduced as the book progresses. It's obvious I'm gonna be updating it on a daily basis with bonus chapters in between.
He never fails to deliver. Could tell the author really worked on this book, especially the characters and the setting. I like the MC, and the story's beginning from the first chapter really makes me sucked into the entire narrative Thumbs up to this author and this book 🔥🔥🔥
This is an interesting book, no doubt. The characters, the worldbuilding, the writing style...mehn...! I can't say much because I can not speak English but trust me, this book is a sure read.... Good work author San 😉
I’m gonna keep it real. If you like books with the mc hiding his powers for no reason and still getting is constant trouble while having the author get him out of it then this is the book for you. For example, 2 assassins (tier 6) have been sent after him (tier 6 but seals himself to tier 2) so far and each time he has come out completely fine by unsealing his powers, which somehow doesn’t arise any suspicions from the most powerful ppl in the kingdom. In one case the principle, an extremely powerful being even felt him at tier 6 but still believed the mc’s lie. It just doesn’t make sense. Author tried to do an eminence of shadows vibe but failed because of rlly bad plot armor use.
Great book, nice world background, story progression isn't bad, character development isn't the best but it's great. Although it is slow paced, it's a good read.
Overall, the book is a great one coming from a new author. It's awesome and although the pacing is slow, I can assure you that it is worth it. It's one of those development books with a great potential.
Wow like.. are authors machines, is the question I would ask if I wasn't one haha. The author's creativity shined in this novel, I'm wondering why it isn't more popular.
Urekkkkkkk it is I Hoshi and I've come to leave final verdict. You've grown. I can't believe I didn't have this in my library before, I also paid for your locked chapters too. Tehee... Keep the good work you're gonna go places😜
Second reviewer and all I can say is that the story is not bad. I love the MC already and if you are a sucker for reincarnation novels then this book gets you covered because not just action-packed but suspense-filled. It's a good job that should be accompanied with a bucket of popcorn😂😂😂
It's a bit early but here's my review of my own book 😅. (It's going to be hyped obviously) The book's centered around Draneil, now Seth who was killed by the Primordial Demon. Betrayed by dragons of his kind, he vows to punish them... (all of these are in the synopsis and early chapters). Well, the books going to be great. I know there's been hundreds if not thousands of books about getting killed, reincarnated and getting revenge but I promise you this one's going to be unique. The world is set in a different world where humans and dragons coexist. There exist several gateways to other worlds which the dragons guard until of course, their death. The story development is great and I'm hoping you all will leave reviews about that. The character designs is also doing okay. More characters will be introduced as the book progresses. It's obvious I'm gonna be updating it on a daily basis with bonus chapters in between.