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I just couldn't stop reading. So, when I remembered that 'Oops! I need to write a review too' I rushed here to drop one soon and go continue this book. So, when I saw it is a Yuri. I was ready for a cute love story, I mean- I am not a fan of reading synopsis. I just jumped in. The story is too good and interesting. I love the MC Alexandra (sorry if the spelling is wrong). This was a new concept to me. I never read something related to this. So I was kinda drawn into the story because the author have portrayed it very well. This is highly recommended to all the people who wanna know about our marshmallow girl. (remembers the scene, internal screaming)[img=faceslap] Oh just read this novel. It's good!!!!!
So far, I only read 9 chapters. Lot of new characters were introduced till now. Our MC Alexandra is also very interesting person. To get her status back she has to kill angels. Let’s see if she completes her mission or not. Everything was good, except I found many errors in chapters. For example, you are using commas and in most place instead of full stop. You can edit it later on. It’s not a big deal. Update quality is also great. I would love to keep reading.
To be honest, I was slightly intrigued by why the "angel" wanted to kill her and so on. This review is only based on the first chapter and it seems a bit short to me. Overall, some sound effects could be added, such as some panting while she was running, to bring this action scene to life. However, I will continue reading because I am really curious about what will happen next. I would even like to see a comic based on this story.
Spoiler de révélation
This isn't a review but an announcement (but apparently you have to put stars? what's this? I will just put my personal and totally subjective opinion). Anyway, I won't usually publish on Sundays in order to keep a little advance with my writing. The next chapter is scheduled to tomorrow at the usual hour hope to see you then. 😊 (Here's a accidentally provocative illustration of Zazzera Schneeweißchen. ☻)
I started reading the book with not very much expection since it's the first book of the other, but I can't describe how wrong I was! The chapters have a nice flow, have comedy, are exciting and a plot which well blown my mind for a second since I didn't expected it all In short, I cannot recommend Bibliomancer highly enough. This is a truly remarkable work of literature, and I believe that anyone who appreciates a good book will find themselves completely engrossed in its pages. If you're looking for a thought-provoking and beautifully written story that will stay with you long after you've finished reading, then this is the book for you. This review are based on the first 14 chapters, I will rewrite this review probably in the future, but as for now, keep it up author really nice work!
I just couldn't stop reading. So, when I remembered that 'Oops! I need to write a review too' I rushed here to drop one soon and go continue this book. So, when I saw it is a Yuri. I was ready for a cute love story, I mean- I am not a fan of reading synopsis. I just jumped in. The story is too good and interesting. I love the MC Alexandra (sorry if the spelling is wrong). This was a new concept to me. I never read something related to this. So I was kinda drawn into the story because the author have portrayed it very well. This is highly recommended to all the people who wanna know about our marshmallow girl. (remembers the scene, internal screaming)[img=faceslap] Oh just read this novel. It's good!!!!!
So far, I only read 9 chapters. Lot of new characters were introduced till now. Our MC Alexandra is also very interesting person. To get her status back she has to kill angels. Let’s see if she completes her mission or not. Everything was good, except I found many errors in chapters. For example, you are using commas and in most place instead of full stop. You can edit it later on. It’s not a big deal. Update quality is also great. I would love to keep reading.
To be honest, I was slightly intrigued by why the "angel" wanted to kill her and so on. This review is only based on the first chapter and it seems a bit short to me. Overall, some sound effects could be added, such as some panting while she was running, to bring this action scene to life. However, I will continue reading because I am really curious about what will happen next. I would even like to see a comic based on this story.
Spoiler de révélation This isn't a review but an announcement (but apparently you have to put stars? what's this? I will just put my personal and totally subjective opinion). Anyway, I won't usually publish on Sundays in order to keep a little advance with my writing. The next chapter is scheduled to tomorrow at the usual hour hope to see you then. 😊 (Here's a accidentally provocative illustration of Zazzera Schneeweißchen. ☻)
I started reading the book with not very much expection since it's the first book of the other, but I can't describe how wrong I was! The chapters have a nice flow, have comedy, are exciting and a plot which well blown my mind for a second since I didn't expected it all In short, I cannot recommend Bibliomancer highly enough. This is a truly remarkable work of literature, and I believe that anyone who appreciates a good book will find themselves completely engrossed in its pages. If you're looking for a thought-provoking and beautifully written story that will stay with you long after you've finished reading, then this is the book for you. This review are based on the first 14 chapters, I will rewrite this review probably in the future, but as for now, keep it up author really nice work!