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I really like the world bg yk nice work there..mc nd characters are good too..but there are some things which i don't like: 1)I hv read till around 200s and still pace of novel is the slowest I hv ever seen .. 2) Please increase the length of chapter ..u should take a peek into 'the perfect run' novel iIloke the word length per ch .. 3) It breaks immersion when author jumps in b/w like Fuc+ Leon ...the god is here..but we are reading a world yk ..if u wanna ask for opinions etc author thoughts r there for a reason man 4) I hv seen how u seem to avoid Rio's interaction with anyone like ...gotta do this order esme..Artemis..my company...u didn't explain how people are working and their interaction .. best of luck to you ..
The novel is engaging, with a clever and overpowered main character, and an interesting plot, but it still leaves many unanswered questions about the main character's thoughts and the mysterious entities inhabiting his mind, including the nature of the devil.[img=thinking] This novel is definitely worth reading, I highly recommend it.
i just going to give full rating because i saw this novel not going to make mc to hide his strength
The plot is flawless and so character development, Some are bad and unnecessary and there is a lot of info dump but; totally the idea is great, author just lacks creativity but It worth reading. The thing that bothers me, is that the MC's rank doesn't increase, although he has the power of a limit or even an S ranked awakener but he's stuck at C rank, hope author fix it):
The writer is boring and slow Very Very slow and repetitive events and short chapters, a profitable method only ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
meh! you can skip the first 11 chapters without missing too much. The author could have named the characters better.
This book is clearly not for impatient people, the progress for the storyline is way too slow. I've read till 300+ chapters and 2 things I want to happen is happening way too slow. First, faceslapping and revenge. I wish Rio will get revenge on Alfred and those bastards soon but I do understand that revenge is best serve cold. Secondly, is the Author really not giving the memories of the girls back? Then, whats the point of introducing it in the first place?(Probably will be explain in the future but I'm too impatient.) Another thing I feel Author should improve is on the climax of an arc and increase the suspense and stakes but I do understand he just started writing so I will let him off. I do like how he kill noah though and his Eclipse which I think should be mention more. Even though I said lots of negative things I do see potential for it being good thats why i gave a 4*. :)
Spoiler de révélation
Author kidnapped my entire blood line and said he would never let them see the light of day again if I didn't leave a 5 star review 😨😨😨 Other than the threats every other chapter great story and the character development is great the protagonist is not some brain dead guy and actully remembers his abilities 🤩🤩and he actual develops meaningful connections with the female leads (impossible🙊🙊) one of my favorite reincarnation novels 😍😍😍
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I thought you said you believe in soulmates and there's no harem but here am seeing three female leads
Author I like this novel ( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`) keep up your good work I will support you with my praises 🗿💯as I am not rich enough to buy those golden tickets 💔🤧
Everything about this novel is good but if the author could stop being a sloth it would be even greater.
This rating is the equivalent of what i feel while reading this novel, this might seem harsh but these are the things i hated about this novel: the random authors note or explaining of things in the chapters, it breaks immersion and it is irritating when the flow of the story gets sidetracked because the authors doent know how to write those explanations organically in the story and just butts in. The authors notes at the ends of the story are so very irritating and they make me think that this author is an entitled narcissist with a god complex just because he wrote the novel (it lessens and belittles the characters in the novel). The author also introduces so many plot lines and characters to introduce mystery about the story but then says that the readers should forget about it, like whats the point of it then?. In summary, the story is good and has ootential but the pacing and random notes from the author breaks the story, its like the author backseats you while reading his novel and nobody lokes backseating
the book is very good..the story is slowly progressing but I really liked it. But explaining things in the middle of the chapter is quite frustrating.
I have reached around chp 200 .I am getting myself lost in this story, great work author, but keep the interaction you have during stories to a minimum. Because just when i am getting my mood all up ,its like youtube ads with your jokes. I don't hate your jokes but it just pulls me down to reality when i am getting involve in the stories... That's it and by the way hope you are not one of those authors who dropped novels halfway and starts a new one because they cannot finish it properly... Also just so you know i will vote my daily powerstones to you everyday....hope it helps because i am not rich to give you gifts....
well well another masterpiece, if you get the essence of what the author is trying to explain and doing you will love it and of course I will not do anything other than this as you would have read all other reviews so I'm saying the same thing go , give it a go you will not regret it
This novel is the best villain related novel..... No matter, what others say. This one is the best. ................................................
shameless!!!!!!!! but good as well!!! ..........................................................................................................
Amazing novel, amazing plot, amazing setups, amazing characters, entertaining to read
Here's the author's HONEST review. i know shameless but FOR my first book i had to, anyone who has lived happy LIFE has used the power OF being shameless unless they want to be A mediocre talent or a NOBODY. . .
I really like the world bg yk nice work there..mc nd characters are good too..but there are some things which i don't like: 1)I hv read till around 200s and still pace of novel is the slowest I hv ever seen .. 2) Please increase the length of chapter ..u should take a peek into 'the perfect run' novel iIloke the word length per ch .. 3) It breaks immersion when author jumps in b/w like Fuc+ Leon ...the god is here..but we are reading a world yk ..if u wanna ask for opinions etc author thoughts r there for a reason man 4) I hv seen how u seem to avoid Rio's interaction with anyone like ...gotta do this order esme..Artemis..my company...u didn't explain how people are working and their interaction .. best of luck to you ..
The novel is engaging, with a clever and overpowered main character, and an interesting plot, but it still leaves many unanswered questions about the main character's thoughts and the mysterious entities inhabiting his mind, including the nature of the devil.[img=thinking] This novel is definitely worth reading, I highly recommend it.
i just going to give full rating because i saw this novel not going to make mc to hide his strength
The plot is flawless and so character development, Some are bad and unnecessary and there is a lot of info dump but; totally the idea is great, author just lacks creativity but It worth reading. The thing that bothers me, is that the MC's rank doesn't increase, although he has the power of a limit or even an S ranked awakener but he's stuck at C rank, hope author fix it):
The writer is boring and slow Very Very slow and repetitive events and short chapters, a profitable method only ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
meh! you can skip the first 11 chapters without missing too much. The author could have named the characters better.
This book is clearly not for impatient people, the progress for the storyline is way too slow. I've read till 300+ chapters and 2 things I want to happen is happening way too slow. First, faceslapping and revenge. I wish Rio will get revenge on Alfred and those bastards soon but I do understand that revenge is best serve cold. Secondly, is the Author really not giving the memories of the girls back? Then, whats the point of introducing it in the first place?(Probably will be explain in the future but I'm too impatient.) Another thing I feel Author should improve is on the climax of an arc and increase the suspense and stakes but I do understand he just started writing so I will let him off. I do like how he kill noah though and his Eclipse which I think should be mention more. Even though I said lots of negative things I do see potential for it being good thats why i gave a 4*. :)
Spoiler de révélation Author kidnapped my entire blood line and said he would never let them see the light of day again if I didn't leave a 5 star review 😨😨😨 Other than the threats every other chapter great story and the character development is great the protagonist is not some brain dead guy and actully remembers his abilities 🤩🤩and he actual develops meaningful connections with the female leads (impossible🙊🙊) one of my favorite reincarnation novels 😍😍😍
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I thought you said you believe in soulmates and there's no harem but here am seeing three female leads
Author I like this novel ( ꈍᴗꈍ)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`) keep up your good work I will support you with my praises 🗿💯as I am not rich enough to buy those golden tickets 💔🤧
Everything about this novel is good but if the author could stop being a sloth it would be even greater.
This rating is the equivalent of what i feel while reading this novel, this might seem harsh but these are the things i hated about this novel: the random authors note or explaining of things in the chapters, it breaks immersion and it is irritating when the flow of the story gets sidetracked because the authors doent know how to write those explanations organically in the story and just butts in. The authors notes at the ends of the story are so very irritating and they make me think that this author is an entitled narcissist with a god complex just because he wrote the novel (it lessens and belittles the characters in the novel). The author also introduces so many plot lines and characters to introduce mystery about the story but then says that the readers should forget about it, like whats the point of it then?. In summary, the story is good and has ootential but the pacing and random notes from the author breaks the story, its like the author backseats you while reading his novel and nobody lokes backseating
the book is very good..the story is slowly progressing but I really liked it. But explaining things in the middle of the chapter is quite frustrating.
I have reached around chp 200 .I am getting myself lost in this story, great work author, but keep the interaction you have during stories to a minimum. Because just when i am getting my mood all up ,its like youtube ads with your jokes. I don't hate your jokes but it just pulls me down to reality when i am getting involve in the stories... That's it and by the way hope you are not one of those authors who dropped novels halfway and starts a new one because they cannot finish it properly... Also just so you know i will vote my daily powerstones to you everyday....hope it helps because i am not rich to give you gifts....
well well another masterpiece, if you get the essence of what the author is trying to explain and doing you will love it and of course I will not do anything other than this as you would have read all other reviews so I'm saying the same thing go , give it a go you will not regret it
This novel is the best villain related novel..... No matter, what others say. This one is the best. ................................................
shameless!!!!!!!! but good as well!!! ..........................................................................................................
Amazing novel, amazing plot, amazing setups, amazing characters, entertaining to read
Here's the author's HONEST review. i know shameless but FOR my first book i had to, anyone who has lived happy LIFE has used the power OF being shameless unless they want to be A mediocre talent or a NOBODY. . .