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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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It's just the beginning but it's interesting already. The story flow is really good so far. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep updating.
The beginning is a little slow, but it seems to have a great potential. The future of the book is good. The update is continuing. The background of the world, I think, is the world of magic and swords, so the future spatial must be wonderful. I recommend it
This story is really interesting at the very least. I can’t say much about it as it only has a few chapters; but they’re good enough to already have me enraptured.
It's only the beginning, but it's already interesting, The update is good and it's obvious the book really has potentials
It's just the beginning but it's interesting already. The story flow is really good so far. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep updating.
The beginning is a little slow, but it seems to have a great potential. The future of the book is good. The update is continuing. The background of the world, I think, is the world of magic and swords, so the future spatial must be wonderful. I recommend it
This story is really interesting at the very least. I can’t say much about it as it only has a few chapters; but they’re good enough to already have me enraptured.
It's only the beginning, but it's already interesting, The update is good and it's obvious the book really has potentials