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This FF is nothing but a copy paste of the original with adjustments here and there, all characters feel deader that a rock and the writing quality is 💩. and most importantly this FF rivals Wattpad grade fanfic
Author i am not sure what are you doing here, wether its putting your Oc in the novel/manga of overlord, or if you just wanted to put your own twist to it i have just 3 Things to say: Its. Not. Working. | Its an exact copy of all that happened in the anime and all the interactions are the same but with the Mc just... There like hes some side-character, So far the only thing different is the Mc defeating a blackbear and gaining a pet. but even then Thats just momonga but +pet||||| To Sum Things Up: its becoming Overlord but if it had an extra character to nazarik
It's just Overlord with a twist. It doesn't seem there's going to be many changes, but it's different. If you feel like rereading Overlord it's good to read.
the writing quality is poor feels like it's exactly the original anime/manga, no offence but feels like copy paste just adjusting here and there. the character's feels like robots i dunno there is no emotion if you read this book. design is average i'm warning you all that this FF feels like made up of robots there's no emotion and barely readable story..,....
Personalmente no me gusta la forma de escritura, supongo que no es mi taza de té el involucren al lector como el MC, aunque tal vez tiene que ver más con la forma en la que lo escribe ya que no es la primera vez que leo historias así. El inicio del e primer capítulo fue pésimo, básicamente un volcado de texto en base al original o un copie y pegue. No hay una introducción adecuada al MC, aunque supongo que aún puede esperar. El flujo de los eventos cuando se hace la transmigracion se sintió super antinatural, solo adivinaron que ahora están en otro mundo y ese mundo es real?? En cuanto a la trama, aún es pronto para decir
gostei,tem potencial ,reclamação, a historia não mudou muito da original espero que mude,,,,,,,,,,,,,.....................................................
its's a good written fanfiction Whit good character description specially new world characters like Gezef, Renner, & blue rose in general but everything is ok barely interesting .
This FF is nothing but a copy paste of the original with adjustments here and there, all characters feel deader that a rock and the writing quality is 💩. and most importantly this FF rivals Wattpad grade fanfic
Author i am not sure what are you doing here, wether its putting your Oc in the novel/manga of overlord, or if you just wanted to put your own twist to it i have just 3 Things to say: Its. Not. Working. | Its an exact copy of all that happened in the anime and all the interactions are the same but with the Mc just... There like hes some side-character, So far the only thing different is the Mc defeating a blackbear and gaining a pet. but even then Thats just momonga but +pet||||| To Sum Things Up: its becoming Overlord but if it had an extra character to nazarik
It's just Overlord with a twist. It doesn't seem there's going to be many changes, but it's different. If you feel like rereading Overlord it's good to read.
the writing quality is poor feels like it's exactly the original anime/manga, no offence but feels like copy paste just adjusting here and there. the character's feels like robots i dunno there is no emotion if you read this book. design is average i'm warning you all that this FF feels like made up of robots there's no emotion and barely readable story..,....
Personalmente no me gusta la forma de escritura, supongo que no es mi taza de té el involucren al lector como el MC, aunque tal vez tiene que ver más con la forma en la que lo escribe ya que no es la primera vez que leo historias así. El inicio del e primer capítulo fue pésimo, básicamente un volcado de texto en base al original o un copie y pegue. No hay una introducción adecuada al MC, aunque supongo que aún puede esperar. El flujo de los eventos cuando se hace la transmigracion se sintió super antinatural, solo adivinaron que ahora están en otro mundo y ese mundo es real?? En cuanto a la trama, aún es pronto para decir
gostei,tem potencial ,reclamação, a historia não mudou muito da original espero que mude,,,,,,,,,,,,,.....................................................
its's a good written fanfiction Whit good character description specially new world characters like Gezef, Renner, & blue rose in general but everything is ok barely interesting .