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Very good.It's great that the MC isn't obely caucious like in many stories about martial arts.
The system unique as far as I know. Basically what the system does is allow for techniques to cultivate automatically. Technics have their own personality and requirements for working one at work properly without a proper medical bath and another requires you to listen to Taoist or Buddhist scripture. If I had to make one complaint, I would say that the MC hasn’t really faced a failure or defeat yet in battle. I would like it if he got totally defeated by someone in a higher level, just so he can establish a little bit of what we’re looking forward towards. other than that it’s good, I hope the author continues.
Very good.It's great that the MC isn't obely caucious like in many stories about martial arts.
The system unique as far as I know. Basically what the system does is allow for techniques to cultivate automatically. Technics have their own personality and requirements for working one at work properly without a proper medical bath and another requires you to listen to Taoist or Buddhist scripture. If I had to make one complaint, I would say that the MC hasn’t really faced a failure or defeat yet in battle. I would like it if he got totally defeated by someone in a higher level, just so he can establish a little bit of what we’re looking forward towards. other than that it’s good, I hope the author continues.
[img=strong]just amazing plz upload chapters fast