/ Urban / Quest-based Magnate
Synopsis
"Over thirty years old, but I still bumbling, disliked by all.
Until...
[Host detected. The system is loading.]
[Congratulations to the host for obtaining the Magnate System. System loading is complete. Data generation in progress...]
[Current system level: Level 1.]
[Main Task 1: Walk 10km without stopping.]
[Note: Upgrade only after completing the main task. Please explore more features on your own.]
Beginner's rewards were issued.
[Reward 1: You get the "heartbeat generates power" buff. 0.01 yuan for each heartbeat. Note: The buff can be upgraded with the system level.]
[Reward 2: You get 1 billion yuan. Note: The funds are safe and reliable, green, energy-saving, and environmentally friendly. The final right of interpretation belongs to this Magnate System. The funds may not be used to purchase system goods.]
This was a rhapsody of a thirty-year-old man!
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raw here. 任务流神豪 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^******************&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
From the chapters I have read so far it is not an interesting read. It's very dull and poorly creative.
I don’t know how to feel about this novel, overall I dont enjoy this novel so I will give 3 Star
absolutely terrible title name and an even worse story, they should change the name to squanderer womanizer who doesn't know how to make money even by being given so much money
translation is done poorly proper gender is not correct over all raw material
A very misogynistic how disappointing. The story wasn't hard to follow but the way he treats people leaves a lot to be desired for. 1/10.
I want to know about y did u lower the system value and give importance to harem based things.From start to end u only give importance to womens and other low activity. sorry for the offends.
Translation quality: too literal. Translating Chinese to English is an art form, and this novel is the artistic equivalent to children scribbling on walls. 2/5, but only because there aren’t many typos. The prose is incredibly difficult to follow. Updating stability: fits and starts. Sometimes one chapter will be released, other times they’ll dump five at once. 2/5. Story development: incomprehensible. For a quest system, there aren’t many quests at all. And the lacking translation quality really hits hard here, because things happen and characters talk about those things happening, yet none of them actually happen in the chapter. If that sentence confused you, welcome to my world; most of this novel was as confusing to me as that sentence was to you. Basically, it seems like the author cut content from every chapter without bothering to stitch the ragged edges back together. 1/5, and I would rate this lower if I could. Character design: horrible. The characters have all the personality of soggy cardboard and, again, the overly literal translation doesn’t help things at all. 1/5, and I would rate this lower if I could. World background: nonexistent. This is set in modern-day corporate China, with all the things that that setting entails. There’s nothing new here, but there’s also nothing much of what you’d expect to be there, given the setting. 1/5 and I would light this novel on fire if it was in paper form. Overall: avoid this dumpster fire at all costs. I wish I had.
In the realm of literary creation, the novel stands as a canvas for boundless creativity. It is a symphony of words, where characters dance and stories unravel. The author's pen wields the power to shape worlds, weaving intricate narratives that ignite the imagination. In the realm of the novel, creativity knows no limits.
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i really want to know where the money comes from which the system gives to the MC.