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Great book and quite a different way of romance. The world-building style is pretty beautiful and combined with the genre. The writing style is good and easy to understand and the author did great work creating it. keep it up!
Honestly I just looked at the synopsis and the cover also the names and the author is just too good.Am so reading this week at least I could learn from you to correct my mistakes[img=Loving it][img=Loving it]Okay it's just too good 10/10
This book is absolutely wonderful. The characters go through a moving journey yet it's heartbreaking and inspiring to watch them. I can't wait to continue following their journey.
Hello, I just added your story to my library! I like how you describe your characters and the internal monologuing, I felt my heart ache as I read it. I think that's one of the best signs of a story, when it makes you feel things. Anyway, there were some misspellings tho but a little Grammarly checker can help you improve that! You did an amazing job with this book. Keep being amazing!
So here is my take, the author's attention to detail is impressive. The intensity of the scenes makes it very immersing and thought evoking. A great work that needs more attention..
I love it! It's in my library already cos i have to find out what comes next! To me, the writing and the narrative is flawless, the characters and .... i mean, i just love everything about what i have read! Totally a 5- star for me cos i believe a good book hooks you up from chapter 1!
The male protagonist is a winner in this book that really just helps make the book shine. It's a very neatly packed book, that has an entire vault of potential.
I loved the book want to erase it from my memory and re read it again. Author's character description is just awesome, and character and world building are just chef's kiss. The plots forces you to stay on the edge of you seat thinking what will happen next. Overall recommended
This story has me with a bucket of popcorn and lots of scrolling as I can't get enough! Read the first few chapters and the male character is definitely something. I won't say any spoilers, but I'm very interested in how his story goes ;) Keep up the great work!!!!
To tell the truth I love this book totally and I'm not even done reading it but I have to give a review right now the book is beautiful
can't complain tbh. great book so far. plot so thickening. author-san keep up the good work
LOVE IT!! The pacing and characterization is well written, and honestly, I really like the mc. Poor girl honestly, she needs a break and a good night of sleep.. Ehem. Anyway, this was a fun read! Despite the occasional spelling and grammar mistakes, I can see that this has great potential! Keep it up, author!
So this novel got me hooked from first sentence. Writing quality - There's no problem with it author can become a poet with how graceful her words are. It's a first pov i an not used to reading it's not confusing even for moment. the dialogues seemed to be flowing well you just need a "..." at some places. Story development - The development is fast paced in the first few chapter. Even the Mc life is fast paced she literally works multiple job. Ouff i feel bad for her. Character Design - Even the side characters are well written except for the male lead who comes off as a jerk at first. But who doesn't love a bad boy😁. Well I do I love them. Updating stability - Good so far ☺️ author you are doing a great job. World background - Well it's a modern world and how things go normally rich enjoy the life while poor people struggle. I love to see the Mc overcoming the struggle. I hope her sister gets better from cancer. And the bad boy turns for good for our dear Mc. Guys it's a nice story 😉 and ML isn't also the overbearing jerk there is kinda twist to his character. I still want justice for the poor Diva though author 🥺
7 chapters in. The story is good and the characters are well written. But the only downsides are the grammatical mistakes and frequent changes in 1st person & 3rd person point of views. I suggest you to use grammerly for writing and modifying your chapters. Keep writing. kudos to you😊
This has been an interesting read so far! The ML was a little scary, but if you want those very spicy and a bit dramatic romances this is for you.
The book is a bomb... I'm obsessed with it, I keep coming back every 5 minutes to check for updates
It was a good read. The female lead has depth and her situations are written with clarity and empathy. To readers expecting something out of the box and fresh ideas, this is a good pick.
This book make me download webnovel after reading it online. The novel is great and alarming. The setting is great and I recommend this for everyone. Good job author.
honest review here. The story is great, the plot, theme and the description of the characters amazed me. The story quality is unique.
A friend told me about this story and I was so curious to read it. the writing quality is good and I like the frequent update.
I'm new on webnovel, and this is my first book. I love the writing system and it simple to read, plus the plot is great. I recommend this for everyone.
I will say the male protagonist is a real psychopath. I hope he doesn't kill her also. I love the story so far, the plot is great and it giving me goosebumps. Keep writing author, this story is so good.
I loved this book. The male protagonist is giving me chills like what... I love how the author describe him and I can say he's really handsome. Waiting for the next chapter....
The plot just kept getting better, I really enjoyed reading this book. Can't wait for 17. I feel on edge of what will happen next... Keep it up author.
I love already love this story, it keeps me interested and I can't wait for the next chapter.
The story is so interesting. This exactly what I have been looking for. In love with the male character and the plot is just so good. I can't wait for the next update[img=faceslap]
Great book and quite a different way of romance. The world-building style is pretty beautiful and combined with the genre. The writing style is good and easy to understand and the author did great work creating it. keep it up!
Honestly I just looked at the synopsis and the cover also the names and the author is just too good.Am so reading this week at least I could learn from you to correct my mistakes[img=Loving it][img=Loving it]Okay it's just too good 10/10
This book is absolutely wonderful. The characters go through a moving journey yet it's heartbreaking and inspiring to watch them. I can't wait to continue following their journey.
Hello, I just added your story to my library! I like how you describe your characters and the internal monologuing, I felt my heart ache as I read it. I think that's one of the best signs of a story, when it makes you feel things. Anyway, there were some misspellings tho but a little Grammarly checker can help you improve that! You did an amazing job with this book. Keep being amazing!
So here is my take, the author's attention to detail is impressive. The intensity of the scenes makes it very immersing and thought evoking. A great work that needs more attention..
I love it! It's in my library already cos i have to find out what comes next! To me, the writing and the narrative is flawless, the characters and .... i mean, i just love everything about what i have read! Totally a 5- star for me cos i believe a good book hooks you up from chapter 1!
The male protagonist is a winner in this book that really just helps make the book shine. It's a very neatly packed book, that has an entire vault of potential.
I loved the book want to erase it from my memory and re read it again. Author's character description is just awesome, and character and world building are just chef's kiss. The plots forces you to stay on the edge of you seat thinking what will happen next. Overall recommended
This story has me with a bucket of popcorn and lots of scrolling as I can't get enough! Read the first few chapters and the male character is definitely something. I won't say any spoilers, but I'm very interested in how his story goes ;) Keep up the great work!!!!
To tell the truth I love this book totally and I'm not even done reading it but I have to give a review right now the book is beautiful
can't complain tbh. great book so far. plot so thickening. author-san keep up the good work
LOVE IT!! The pacing and characterization is well written, and honestly, I really like the mc. Poor girl honestly, she needs a break and a good night of sleep.. Ehem. Anyway, this was a fun read! Despite the occasional spelling and grammar mistakes, I can see that this has great potential! Keep it up, author!
So this novel got me hooked from first sentence. Writing quality - There's no problem with it author can become a poet with how graceful her words are. It's a first pov i an not used to reading it's not confusing even for moment. the dialogues seemed to be flowing well you just need a "..." at some places. Story development - The development is fast paced in the first few chapter. Even the Mc life is fast paced she literally works multiple job. Ouff i feel bad for her. Character Design - Even the side characters are well written except for the male lead who comes off as a jerk at first. But who doesn't love a bad boy😁. Well I do I love them. Updating stability - Good so far ☺️ author you are doing a great job. World background - Well it's a modern world and how things go normally rich enjoy the life while poor people struggle. I love to see the Mc overcoming the struggle. I hope her sister gets better from cancer. And the bad boy turns for good for our dear Mc. Guys it's a nice story 😉 and ML isn't also the overbearing jerk there is kinda twist to his character. I still want justice for the poor Diva though author 🥺
7 chapters in. The story is good and the characters are well written. But the only downsides are the grammatical mistakes and frequent changes in 1st person & 3rd person point of views. I suggest you to use grammerly for writing and modifying your chapters. Keep writing. kudos to you😊
This has been an interesting read so far! The ML was a little scary, but if you want those very spicy and a bit dramatic romances this is for you.
The book is a bomb... I'm obsessed with it, I keep coming back every 5 minutes to check for updates
It was a good read. The female lead has depth and her situations are written with clarity and empathy. To readers expecting something out of the box and fresh ideas, this is a good pick.
This book make me download webnovel after reading it online. The novel is great and alarming. The setting is great and I recommend this for everyone. Good job author.
honest review here. The story is great, the plot, theme and the description of the characters amazed me. The story quality is unique.
A friend told me about this story and I was so curious to read it. the writing quality is good and I like the frequent update.
I'm new on webnovel, and this is my first book. I love the writing system and it simple to read, plus the plot is great. I recommend this for everyone.
I will say the male protagonist is a real psychopath. I hope he doesn't kill her also. I love the story so far, the plot is great and it giving me goosebumps. Keep writing author, this story is so good.
I loved this book. The male protagonist is giving me chills like what... I love how the author describe him and I can say he's really handsome. Waiting for the next chapter....
The plot just kept getting better, I really enjoyed reading this book. Can't wait for 17. I feel on edge of what will happen next... Keep it up author.
I love already love this story, it keeps me interested and I can't wait for the next chapter.
The story is so interesting. This exactly what I have been looking for. In love with the male character and the plot is just so good. I can't wait for the next update[img=faceslap]
I just love these like everything about it