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I really like this but are you planning to continue this or did you dropped it?? Please tell me I been waiting for a chapter for a long time now 🙏🙏🙏
this was one of the best novel i have ever read in this platform, will sure miss it
This Novel is a piece of Art also a Hidden Gem 💎. An Art that exceeds Webnovel "Standard" that we're used to in these "difficult (Webnovel policy) time 😁[img=recommend][img=update]. The only problem is that the two latest chapters are always "Do not Unlock" that destroys it and also seems a bit like a "scam" when you have already bought them with the premium (Privilege).
Whoa.. This novel is very good, the mc is pretty likable and realistic. Everything does not revolve around him but its still great, he strong but not overpowered but sometimes he goes insane. The main character would be between a hero and anti-hero
Well this book is very amazing 😉 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰.................(!!!!!!!) Perfect The best
This novel confuse me the more i read. Idk where that gone wrong. But all i know : MC personality is good. But somthing stop he talking correctly . Also Somehow idk who is mc or who in the POV talking. Jae-sung? Who is this? Did pervious owner of body that mc reside still in there? Who is correct his talking (mc) , suddenly mc cant speak correctly . Like ' i want cake ' he though , but when he speak it tell 'i want chicken' something like this. It so confuse, did i read too fast ? Hahaha. Read it if u want, it good story. But if u confuse read again few back chapters.
Okay, to start, I would like to say this is Ryukurou's second novel, the first being, The Extra's Odyssey. I recommend you check that out if you haven't already. The reason I mentioned his first novel (one with over 200 chaps) is to show he that the author has some experience under his belt. And... upon reading 63 chapters at the time of this review, I can definitely say it shows! The writing quality is very high, the Author clearly knows what they're doing. The side characters and MC are interesting and have their own personalities, combining to give some interesting moments of comedy. The plot is intriguing and flows smoothly, and not to mention the several interesting twists taking place. The Update Stability is consistent, with the Author trying to publish a chap every day. Overall, I highly recommend you to check this novel out! You won't regret it :)
I really like the story so far. I hope the pace kinda picks up and I can’ wait what happens once the worlds coalesce
Well the story is going on a good way.I hope more and more interesting things to happen.There are not many chapters for now but this story would be amazing when there would be many chapters.
I hope this novel will be great to read. And by the way I hate damsel in distress cliche plot so I'm glad that the author removed that annoying plot.😊
The writing quality is amazing and the descriptions are good as well. The plot is very interesting and the story might feel good but I think you should give it a go. The mc is sometimes calm, cold and calculating but he is not always like that he is quite funny actually quite funny. His planning skills are amazing. You will certainly like him. Please dont misunderstand the title the mc is not the villain. The twists in the story amazing and sometimes I get a coughing fit of laughter due to it. I like the world builiding of this story. It's not fast but it's not slow either. The fight scenes are well described and you can clearly imagine it in your mind. As it is still in it's beginning phase I can't offer much advice or criticism. One of the main reasons I first read this is because he is one of my favourite most authors and his previous book [The Extra's Odyssey] was simply fantastic and superb. I recommend you read both of his works
don't you dare drop this novel and if you do prepare to have another siblings ...... that's it and thanks for this great art 🙃🙃
Yessss boy new novel of this author let's read the monstourity ( in a good way ) he created this time😁😁
Having read the story up to the latest chapter, I can vouch for the quality of the novel as one of the best on the platform. I must say that the author has done a perfect job of bringing the characters to life... hmm? This is my main account? Oh shi— I mean, Ahem! Hello, dear readers~ This is the author's obligatory review to give an overview of the novel~ → Main Character He might seem like a happy-go-lucky main character at first glance, but he is not. The more you'll read, you will realize that he isn't simple and most of the time even his stupid actions have a meaning behind them. I would recommend reading till at least chapter 40 for a basic understanding of his actual personality. → Harem? No, he will only have one relationship at one time. → Comedy? Just read the first three chapters. → Action? Yes, it's action-packed. It's a multiverse setting, so of course it has heavy action. Additionally, • There is no need to worry about the Soul Bond that appears in Chapter 2. The soul bond isn't there to create a Damsel in Distress type of plot. MC won't need to save the other side of the bond and the bond has its importance in the story. • MC isn't a pure villain but there is a reason the title has 'villain' in it. His personality is a mix of True-neutral and Lawful-evil. It doesn't mean he is heartless, though. • Vote for the novel and give me a lot of power stones and golden tickets! A dose of motivation is always welcomed! If you have any other questions, ask away under this thread~
I really like this but are you planning to continue this or did you dropped it?? Please tell me I been waiting for a chapter for a long time now 🙏🙏🙏
this was one of the best novel i have ever read in this platform, will sure miss it
This Novel is a piece of Art also a Hidden Gem 💎. An Art that exceeds Webnovel "Standard" that we're used to in these "difficult (Webnovel policy) time 😁[img=recommend][img=update]. The only problem is that the two latest chapters are always "Do not Unlock" that destroys it and also seems a bit like a "scam" when you have already bought them with the premium (Privilege).
Whoa.. This novel is very good, the mc is pretty likable and realistic. Everything does not revolve around him but its still great, he strong but not overpowered but sometimes he goes insane. The main character would be between a hero and anti-hero
Well this book is very amazing 😉 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰.................(!!!!!!!) Perfect The best
This novel confuse me the more i read. Idk where that gone wrong. But all i know : MC personality is good. But somthing stop he talking correctly . Also Somehow idk who is mc or who in the POV talking. Jae-sung? Who is this? Did pervious owner of body that mc reside still in there? Who is correct his talking (mc) , suddenly mc cant speak correctly . Like ' i want cake ' he though , but when he speak it tell 'i want chicken' something like this. It so confuse, did i read too fast ? Hahaha. Read it if u want, it good story. But if u confuse read again few back chapters.
Okay, to start, I would like to say this is Ryukurou's second novel, the first being, The Extra's Odyssey. I recommend you check that out if you haven't already. The reason I mentioned his first novel (one with over 200 chaps) is to show he that the author has some experience under his belt. And... upon reading 63 chapters at the time of this review, I can definitely say it shows! The writing quality is very high, the Author clearly knows what they're doing. The side characters and MC are interesting and have their own personalities, combining to give some interesting moments of comedy. The plot is intriguing and flows smoothly, and not to mention the several interesting twists taking place. The Update Stability is consistent, with the Author trying to publish a chap every day. Overall, I highly recommend you to check this novel out! You won't regret it :)
I really like the story so far. I hope the pace kinda picks up and I can’ wait what happens once the worlds coalesce
Well the story is going on a good way.I hope more and more interesting things to happen.There are not many chapters for now but this story would be amazing when there would be many chapters.
I hope this novel will be great to read. And by the way I hate damsel in distress cliche plot so I'm glad that the author removed that annoying plot.😊
The writing quality is amazing and the descriptions are good as well. The plot is very interesting and the story might feel good but I think you should give it a go. The mc is sometimes calm, cold and calculating but he is not always like that he is quite funny actually quite funny. His planning skills are amazing. You will certainly like him. Please dont misunderstand the title the mc is not the villain. The twists in the story amazing and sometimes I get a coughing fit of laughter due to it. I like the world builiding of this story. It's not fast but it's not slow either. The fight scenes are well described and you can clearly imagine it in your mind. As it is still in it's beginning phase I can't offer much advice or criticism. One of the main reasons I first read this is because he is one of my favourite most authors and his previous book [The Extra's Odyssey] was simply fantastic and superb. I recommend you read both of his works
don't you dare drop this novel and if you do prepare to have another siblings ...... that's it and thanks for this great art 🙃🙃
Yessss boy new novel of this author let's read the monstourity ( in a good way ) he created this time😁😁
Having read the story up to the latest chapter, I can vouch for the quality of the novel as one of the best on the platform. I must say that the author has done a perfect job of bringing the characters to life... hmm? This is my main account? Oh shi— I mean, Ahem! Hello, dear readers~ This is the author's obligatory review to give an overview of the novel~ → Main Character He might seem like a happy-go-lucky main character at first glance, but he is not. The more you'll read, you will realize that he isn't simple and most of the time even his stupid actions have a meaning behind them. I would recommend reading till at least chapter 40 for a basic understanding of his actual personality. → Harem? No, he will only have one relationship at one time. → Comedy? Just read the first three chapters. → Action? Yes, it's action-packed. It's a multiverse setting, so of course it has heavy action. Additionally, • There is no need to worry about the Soul Bond that appears in Chapter 2. The soul bond isn't there to create a Damsel in Distress type of plot. MC won't need to save the other side of the bond and the bond has its importance in the story. • MC isn't a pure villain but there is a reason the title has 'villain' in it. His personality is a mix of True-neutral and Lawful-evil. It doesn't mean he is heartless, though. • Vote for the novel and give me a lot of power stones and golden tickets! A dose of motivation is always welcomed! If you have any other questions, ask away under this thread~