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Really liked the idea and the development of the story, love red dead world and adding john wick was the cherry on top please keep writing this story!
What can I say from the little I have read, a good story with great potential to grow and be something much better, I like that there is no harem, it is not that I dislike it but it is already tiring to see it all the time A not-so-seen premise (at least it's not something I can easily find) and I really like how you handle John, a great fic I have to say and have a good day author: D
Ps: This story would have many Main leads and multiple POVs, and I write it in first person point of view, most of the time. There would be no harem as I dint want to break John Wick's Image. And lastly, I would try to update every day, but my original plan is to update every two days. so please don't hope too much. Pss: Please criticize me so I can get better at my writing. English is my third language, so please be gentle. That's all from me, "May The Imagination of The Mind always be with You." From yours truly, Tbyte
For those who put this fanfic on your collection, I'm sorry if it's took too long, because I feel this novel can be good if I cook it more. From dialog, monolog, poin of view, john power, info slip/info dump, etc Because I need to earn from this, thats mean I need to put my heart writing my creation. Beside, I writing my original novel too. That's why sometime I write my original one and cooking this fanfic again from time to time. In comment section I gonna put some of my original paragraf and another fanfic I write in between, when I kinda stuck with my original one. Sorry for the inconvenience. Yours truly, Tbyte.
Really liked the idea and the development of the story, love red dead world and adding john wick was the cherry on top please keep writing this story!
What can I say from the little I have read, a good story with great potential to grow and be something much better, I like that there is no harem, it is not that I dislike it but it is already tiring to see it all the time A not-so-seen premise (at least it's not something I can easily find) and I really like how you handle John, a great fic I have to say and have a good day author: D
Ps: This story would have many Main leads and multiple POVs, and I write it in first person point of view, most of the time. There would be no harem as I dint want to break John Wick's Image. And lastly, I would try to update every day, but my original plan is to update every two days. so please don't hope too much. Pss: Please criticize me so I can get better at my writing. English is my third language, so please be gentle. That's all from me, "May The Imagination of The Mind always be with You." From yours truly, Tbyte
For those who put this fanfic on your collection, I'm sorry if it's took too long, because I feel this novel can be good if I cook it more. From dialog, monolog, poin of view, john power, info slip/info dump, etc Because I need to earn from this, thats mean I need to put my heart writing my creation. Beside, I writing my original novel too. That's why sometime I write my original one and cooking this fanfic again from time to time. In comment section I gonna put some of my original paragraf and another fanfic I write in between, when I kinda stuck with my original one. Sorry for the inconvenience. Yours truly, Tbyte.