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Yo, i just see you write fic with Dxd tag Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.
Did you get Yuuya3's permission? That is what I want to know in the past someone do that too and they drop it because it is without his permission and I give the 5 Stars to original
Translate: Я уже читал этот ФФ, это похоже перезапись по новой.............................................................................................
the best fanfic I have read so far this year.. normally the writers start straight up villainising the original main characters and also somehow the love between the original mc and original female lead vanishes as soon as the new mc comes in. but this progression seems more natural please dont drop
keep going with the story please i really like it a lot ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,...............,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Perfect work! I have no words to describe this great work! Greatly deserves more than 5 🌟 if it were up to me. I hope you continue this work, with at least 1 chapter a day.
If you like it then please leave a power stone and review guys........ If there are any mistakes in my translation, feel free to point them out and I'll fix them immediately.... Don't forget to leave a review guys .......
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Yo, i just see you write fic with Dxd tag Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.
Did you get Yuuya3's permission? That is what I want to know in the past someone do that too and they drop it because it is without his permission and I give the 5 Stars to original
Translate: Я уже читал этот ФФ, это похоже перезапись по новой.............................................................................................
the best fanfic I have read so far this year.. normally the writers start straight up villainising the original main characters and also somehow the love between the original mc and original female lead vanishes as soon as the new mc comes in. but this progression seems more natural please dont drop
keep going with the story please i really like it a lot ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,...............,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Perfect work! I have no words to describe this great work! Greatly deserves more than 5 🌟 if it were up to me. I hope you continue this work, with at least 1 chapter a day.
If you like it then please leave a power stone and review guys........ If there are any mistakes in my translation, feel free to point them out and I'll fix them immediately.... Don't forget to leave a review guys .......