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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Love the story so far! you are literally my inspiration for writing my fanfictions and I love how you introduced the main character in the beginning of the book! Being a reader of your first book I just knew that this one would be a treat as well!!
love the story so far. i think you want the mc to explore and thats the best kind of pokemon fanfics. i hope to read more soon
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Good story, the author seems to writing a more positive side of the pokemon world with a few new thing in the mixture. With a system but it isn't core to the story so far as it isn't mentioned at every time something happens, only when something relevant to the story happens.
Love the story so far! you are literally my inspiration for writing my fanfictions and I love how you introduced the main character in the beginning of the book! Being a reader of your first book I just knew that this one would be a treat as well!!
love the story so far. i think you want the mc to explore and thats the best kind of pokemon fanfics. i hope to read more soon
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Good story, the author seems to writing a more positive side of the pokemon world with a few new thing in the mixture. With a system but it isn't core to the story so far as it isn't mentioned at every time something happens, only when something relevant to the story happens.