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athass_prkr

I am giving the story five stars because ... well everybody seems to do it, and I did it in my last story. Anyway, if you have any comments or criticism let me know. I hope you enjoy this fic...

1yr
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Punctual_reader

I dropped it when he left hermione in the washroom like how can you be drop dead dumb like, the story shows he is smart but acts like a dumbass, he knew what was going to happen even if he was not so sure he should have helped before if there was a silver of a chance that something could have gone wrong

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AllSeeingBedroom

mid until chapter 70 may change review upon reading more..........................................................................................................

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SeventhEvil

by far the best harry potter fic out there. although an au, the author did well in creating new arcs and storylines that doesnt follow the canon. regular updates and the chapters are decently long. keep up the good work author!!! maybe you could add a harry potter tag in the cover page

1mth
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Phoenix1998

Ok this is now in my top 10 fanfics about harry potter. Really loving it so ......................................................................................

2mth
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AnimagusCat

I personally think that this is an incredible work of art. There are some bits and pieces that could use improvement, like Daphne said, Harry rants ALOT. Shortening them a bit would make this-in my opinion- much better. Take chapter 349 as an example, Harry repeatedly says that he wants to not be involved with Lily anymore, but practically the whole chap was him ranting at her and thinking how much he doesn't like her. This just makes me thinks that Lily has gotten in his head and Harry is no where near letting go of her. This just a small issue though and it can be easily improved. Just try your best and strive for more Author-kun! Overall this is a contender for my fav ff of all time

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3mth
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MythicWeaver

Although the main character says he wouldn’t get involved in the Golden Trio’s adventures, he gets involved quite easily, up until the chapter I read. The character seems to get less intelligent as the story progresses, and at times it seems like he either forgot he knew about the events beforehand or didn’t care enough about them. But the story is well-written.

3mth
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littlemonsterrr

waaahh I absolutely love this please update as soon as you can

3mth
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sayan_samanta

one of the best HP fanfic available with surprisingly with more than 800k words. I love how author uses HP's magical talent & family legacy. I hope author explores HP universe more.

4mth
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ProudRaven

Too much of a cat and mouse game. Every arc I've read (up to chapter 100, because I have run out of patience) so far is like that. Too many layers, like Ghost grandpa in the crest and OP horcruxes? It's a good read, but you get tired of it. Character developement from chap 1 to 20: he gets a few friends, he's not alone anymore. From 20 to 100: nothing.

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4mth
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Amirthesh_123

can you write a fanfiction in asoiaf world as an immortal with harry potter magic at the time of the conqueror, like more magical support and swordsman academy, magic college. mix more fantasy elements and becoming a god like story i don't know there is not much a quality asoiaf world novel. you can look tatered dragon fanfiction its good i don't know asoiaf is a great sandbox

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4mth
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iTosu
LV 4 Badge

One of, if not the best Harry Potter Fanfics I have ever read, I struggle to find appropriate words to describe how good this is so I will simply leave it with this: Thanks for an amazing read!

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4mth
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Dhruv_Saxena_8202

w story properly hashed characters and everyone acts 3 dimensionally. The only downside is how realistic it is – that literally every character has a story

4mth
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Morgan_Dudicourt

A very good novel based on HP story. I've read a few so far, and it's one of the best.

4mth
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Noiwillnot

This is one of the best or the best book on here there is only one book that can compare. But about the book its's amazing and really fun to read. The writer is amazing, the grammar is perfect (at least to me because i couldn't find grammar problems). I absolutely love the MC it's so fun to try to predict what he will do and see if you guessed correctly. I would definitely recommend this book to everyone who likes harry potter because this is definitely the best harry potter book on webnovel

5mth
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basel
LV 2 Badge

In fact, I find it wonderful how the author added his own additions to the original world, or rather how the entire world is based on Harry not being the child of prophecy, some difference but fun, and he did not limit himself to some kind of closed reference, sometimes I find that MC's actions may drive me crazy, but I liked how he developed his character without forgetting the rest of the characters and developing the world. I liked how the author explained the characters' feelings and made me live all their joys, sorrows and even their difficulties, and I find that he delivered this message in a creative way. How the author made the character face challenges and did not make him too strong, but he also did not make him weak all the time, you will find sometimes that the character is weak and that he cannot win in a simple situation and sometimes he wins in extremely difficult situations, I liked the idea of ​​moving to the original dimension, although it is somewhat repetitive, the author formulated it in his own style and I cannot wait to complete the rest of the chapters of the alternate universe

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5mth
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Phoenix1998

Nice. Hope he has fun here lol. Instead of obsessing over dumbledore. Lol........... ............................................................

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5mth
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ckwendel

4 star review. 4 star review. 4 star review.

6mth
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king_of_kings666

One of the best hp fanfiction no doubt. Different and cool story.

6mth
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Ben_Payne

I liked the story at first, but honestly with so many different povs it becomes a chore to read and the mc has just become some Mary sue who never actually loses anything with real meaning, and when he does lose they do some Mary sue shenanigans where they actually won and played their opponents all along. It’s just become some face slapping power fantasy story.

6mth
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TheAuthorKami

I swear, the word “Shrugged” is the author’s favorite. There is not a single chapter where it does not appear. It really drives me crazy. There's also the protagonist with his terribly random “adult” monologue that he tries to instill in the kids from time to time. They also instill it in adults. Is there really a person who can talk like that? I don't believe it, but the author seems to believe it. If the narrative is improved a little more by reducing... no, ELIMINATING that annoying “Shrugged” and the strange monologues of the protagonist along with a good polishing of his personality, the novel would become an almost perfect story.

6mth
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Taoist_Boomslang

i don't know. i like this story but I don't think it's incredible either. It has many points against it and many points going for it. Finally, this is a question for the author. Is this a crossover with the fate universe? Or did you just adapt it's magic system? I am around chapter 80.

6mth
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Fat_Elf

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7mth
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Thanos

hope the author will see this review. too much pov, you're killing the story and breaking the pace constantly. it's becoming a hassle to read frankly, and that's sad because the story is interesting. also, Harry is too lame, almost no real evolution of his caractere. even if you are emotionally stupid if you are as smart as him and curious when people constantly make the same comments you'll start to think. so him and daph, boring

7mth
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Phoenix1998

Massive W imo. Love it. Keep it up arthur. .................................. Cant wait when dumbledore dies but that will probably be in end of this fic.

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7mth
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Jackleell

Ok, this is disappointing to read. If you were going to completely change Harry's roots and his family history, you should have just created a different character who was fresh. The Potter family can be traced back to Linfred of Stinchcombe, a 12th-century wizard who was a celebrated potion-maker and the original source of the family’s wealth. He was affectionately known as "the Potterer," which eventually became "Potter." I'm up to chapter 22, and it feels disappointing. I hate that Harry Potter fanfics always try to force their MC to go to school for absolutely no reason.

8mth
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EternalEden

Came for a witty character and an interesting spin on the series. Left with a depressed little emo and the same shenanigans as the first-year story. Despite all the changes the author likes to pretend happened, the end result is the same. And sure, maybe things won't change immediately, but expecting their readers to endure 60+ chapters before they actually get there makes them a clown.

8mth
Voir 0 Réponses
ArSolaris

It is very very well written and very well developed. overall, it is a fantastic fic, but if you are not a fan of constant POV changes, you might go insane. I don't remember If the earlier chapters follow the same pattern, but in the later chapters every single chapter is a POV change, and it can get pretty jarring at times.

8mth
Voir 0 Réponses
CouchPotatoDandy

This fanfic is not bad, it's just too boring. I love fanfics that are easy to read, not too rigid and cumbersome. This fanfic here is too logical, the MC doesn't feel like he is the MC. Just a normal person who reincarnated into Harry Potter world and started to learn about magic. He isn't talented and he doesn't have any Golden Finger or anything else to help him, he works hard to get anywhere. If it was only that, it would have been okay, but the problem is that the MC honesty doesn't get anywhere even with all his hard work, since as I said before this is a very logical fanfic, and not everyone can get as strong as Dumbledore and Voldemort through hard work... How many wizards dedicated themselves to studying and practicing magic but still didn't amount to much? A lot... I don't know what happens later on in this fanfic, but the first 100 chapters are very very boring and I honestly couldn't continue past it. So it is a 3 star review from me.

9mth
Voir 1 Réponses
mounir_1b

I dare to say this is one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction I ever read and I read a lot this character development and the storyline Ward background everything is so good in my opinion this is your five stars so give it a shot and I am going to tell you you will not regret it

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9mth
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go_zpace

After 230 chapters. This is the only book that has amazing background work, amazing characters, and great storytelling. BEST Harry Potter novel ever. The complexity of the world and Harry's influences is well detailed. Author PLS, dont drop it.

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9mth
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athass_prkr

I am giving the story five stars because ... well everybody seems to do it, and I did it in my last story. Anyway, if you have any comments or criticism let me know. I hope you enjoy this fic...

1yr
Voir 18 Réponses
Punctual_reader

I dropped it when he left hermione in the washroom like how can you be drop dead dumb like, the story shows he is smart but acts like a dumbass, he knew what was going to happen even if he was not so sure he should have helped before if there was a silver of a chance that something could have gone wrong

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6d
Voir 0 Réponses
AllSeeingBedroom

mid until chapter 70 may change review upon reading more..........................................................................................................

28d
Voir 0 Réponses
SeventhEvil

by far the best harry potter fic out there. although an au, the author did well in creating new arcs and storylines that doesnt follow the canon. regular updates and the chapters are decently long. keep up the good work author!!! maybe you could add a harry potter tag in the cover page

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Phoenix1998

Ok this is now in my top 10 fanfics about harry potter. Really loving it so ......................................................................................

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
AnimagusCat

I personally think that this is an incredible work of art. There are some bits and pieces that could use improvement, like Daphne said, Harry rants ALOT. Shortening them a bit would make this-in my opinion- much better. Take chapter 349 as an example, Harry repeatedly says that he wants to not be involved with Lily anymore, but practically the whole chap was him ranting at her and thinking how much he doesn't like her. This just makes me thinks that Lily has gotten in his head and Harry is no where near letting go of her. This just a small issue though and it can be easily improved. Just try your best and strive for more Author-kun! Overall this is a contender for my fav ff of all time

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3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
MythicWeaver

Although the main character says he wouldn’t get involved in the Golden Trio’s adventures, he gets involved quite easily, up until the chapter I read. The character seems to get less intelligent as the story progresses, and at times it seems like he either forgot he knew about the events beforehand or didn’t care enough about them. But the story is well-written.

3mth
Voir 1 Réponses
littlemonsterrr

waaahh I absolutely love this please update as soon as you can

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
sayan_samanta

one of the best HP fanfic available with surprisingly with more than 800k words. I love how author uses HP's magical talent & family legacy. I hope author explores HP universe more.

4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
ProudRaven

Too much of a cat and mouse game. Every arc I've read (up to chapter 100, because I have run out of patience) so far is like that. Too many layers, like Ghost grandpa in the crest and OP horcruxes? It's a good read, but you get tired of it. Character developement from chap 1 to 20: he gets a few friends, he's not alone anymore. From 20 to 100: nothing.

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4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Amirthesh_123

can you write a fanfiction in asoiaf world as an immortal with harry potter magic at the time of the conqueror, like more magical support and swordsman academy, magic college. mix more fantasy elements and becoming a god like story i don't know there is not much a quality asoiaf world novel. you can look tatered dragon fanfiction its good i don't know asoiaf is a great sandbox

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4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
iTosu
LV 4 Badge

One of, if not the best Harry Potter Fanfics I have ever read, I struggle to find appropriate words to describe how good this is so I will simply leave it with this: Thanks for an amazing read!

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4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Dhruv_Saxena_8202

w story properly hashed characters and everyone acts 3 dimensionally. The only downside is how realistic it is – that literally every character has a story

4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Morgan_Dudicourt

A very good novel based on HP story. I've read a few so far, and it's one of the best.

4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Noiwillnot

This is one of the best or the best book on here there is only one book that can compare. But about the book its's amazing and really fun to read. The writer is amazing, the grammar is perfect (at least to me because i couldn't find grammar problems). I absolutely love the MC it's so fun to try to predict what he will do and see if you guessed correctly. I would definitely recommend this book to everyone who likes harry potter because this is definitely the best harry potter book on webnovel

5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
basel
LV 2 Badge

In fact, I find it wonderful how the author added his own additions to the original world, or rather how the entire world is based on Harry not being the child of prophecy, some difference but fun, and he did not limit himself to some kind of closed reference, sometimes I find that MC's actions may drive me crazy, but I liked how he developed his character without forgetting the rest of the characters and developing the world. I liked how the author explained the characters' feelings and made me live all their joys, sorrows and even their difficulties, and I find that he delivered this message in a creative way. How the author made the character face challenges and did not make him too strong, but he also did not make him weak all the time, you will find sometimes that the character is weak and that he cannot win in a simple situation and sometimes he wins in extremely difficult situations, I liked the idea of ​​moving to the original dimension, although it is somewhat repetitive, the author formulated it in his own style and I cannot wait to complete the rest of the chapters of the alternate universe

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5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Phoenix1998

Nice. Hope he has fun here lol. Instead of obsessing over dumbledore. Lol........... ............................................................

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5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
ckwendel

4 star review. 4 star review. 4 star review.

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
king_of_kings666

One of the best hp fanfiction no doubt. Different and cool story.

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Ben_Payne

I liked the story at first, but honestly with so many different povs it becomes a chore to read and the mc has just become some Mary sue who never actually loses anything with real meaning, and when he does lose they do some Mary sue shenanigans where they actually won and played their opponents all along. It’s just become some face slapping power fantasy story.

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
TheAuthorKami

I swear, the word “Shrugged” is the author’s favorite. There is not a single chapter where it does not appear. It really drives me crazy. There's also the protagonist with his terribly random “adult” monologue that he tries to instill in the kids from time to time. They also instill it in adults. Is there really a person who can talk like that? I don't believe it, but the author seems to believe it. If the narrative is improved a little more by reducing... no, ELIMINATING that annoying “Shrugged” and the strange monologues of the protagonist along with a good polishing of his personality, the novel would become an almost perfect story.

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Taoist_Boomslang

i don't know. i like this story but I don't think it's incredible either. It has many points against it and many points going for it. Finally, this is a question for the author. Is this a crossover with the fate universe? Or did you just adapt it's magic system? I am around chapter 80.

6mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Fat_Elf

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7mth
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Thanos

hope the author will see this review. too much pov, you're killing the story and breaking the pace constantly. it's becoming a hassle to read frankly, and that's sad because the story is interesting. also, Harry is too lame, almost no real evolution of his caractere. even if you are emotionally stupid if you are as smart as him and curious when people constantly make the same comments you'll start to think. so him and daph, boring

7mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Phoenix1998

Massive W imo. Love it. Keep it up arthur. .................................. Cant wait when dumbledore dies but that will probably be in end of this fic.

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7mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Jackleell

Ok, this is disappointing to read. If you were going to completely change Harry's roots and his family history, you should have just created a different character who was fresh. The Potter family can be traced back to Linfred of Stinchcombe, a 12th-century wizard who was a celebrated potion-maker and the original source of the family’s wealth. He was affectionately known as "the Potterer," which eventually became "Potter." I'm up to chapter 22, and it feels disappointing. I hate that Harry Potter fanfics always try to force their MC to go to school for absolutely no reason.

8mth
Voir 0 Réponses
EternalEden

Came for a witty character and an interesting spin on the series. Left with a depressed little emo and the same shenanigans as the first-year story. Despite all the changes the author likes to pretend happened, the end result is the same. And sure, maybe things won't change immediately, but expecting their readers to endure 60+ chapters before they actually get there makes them a clown.

8mth
Voir 0 Réponses
ArSolaris

It is very very well written and very well developed. overall, it is a fantastic fic, but if you are not a fan of constant POV changes, you might go insane. I don't remember If the earlier chapters follow the same pattern, but in the later chapters every single chapter is a POV change, and it can get pretty jarring at times.

8mth
Voir 0 Réponses
CouchPotatoDandy

This fanfic is not bad, it's just too boring. I love fanfics that are easy to read, not too rigid and cumbersome. This fanfic here is too logical, the MC doesn't feel like he is the MC. Just a normal person who reincarnated into Harry Potter world and started to learn about magic. He isn't talented and he doesn't have any Golden Finger or anything else to help him, he works hard to get anywhere. If it was only that, it would have been okay, but the problem is that the MC honesty doesn't get anywhere even with all his hard work, since as I said before this is a very logical fanfic, and not everyone can get as strong as Dumbledore and Voldemort through hard work... How many wizards dedicated themselves to studying and practicing magic but still didn't amount to much? A lot... I don't know what happens later on in this fanfic, but the first 100 chapters are very very boring and I honestly couldn't continue past it. So it is a 3 star review from me.

9mth
Voir 1 Réponses
mounir_1b

I dare to say this is one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction I ever read and I read a lot this character development and the storyline Ward background everything is so good in my opinion this is your five stars so give it a shot and I am going to tell you you will not regret it

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9mth
Voir 0 Réponses
go_zpace

After 230 chapters. This is the only book that has amazing background work, amazing characters, and great storytelling. BEST Harry Potter novel ever. The complexity of the world and Harry's influences is well detailed. Author PLS, dont drop it.

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9mth
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