BNHA: Undying

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clattan0ia

love your books guys more chapter please the story is good MORE CHAPTER MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREEEEE CHAPTER PLEASEEER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Trash_Mix

For some reason the author decided to have a SSSniperwolf type audience that disrupts the entire flow of the story, it feels like he added it just to have extra words per chapter or something. Some god gets thrown into the mix which, huh? when has a god ever been a thing in MHA, his presence actively makes the entire story worse, just have it as one POV, Izuku's, we don't need you to explain everything that's happening to us, we aren't toddlers.

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FrikandelSpeciaal

Its interesting never seen anyone do this before. I like it an am looking forward to the rest, so please continue writing this

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No_friends_

Love your books please keep up the good work

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Creators_Fault

Loving it already haven't seen one that has the characters react to the AU its beautiful and hope you continue it

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MeliodasGremory23

love this story so far keep up the good work

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Fanbase0126

Great book, my only complaint is it need to be updated more

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Lucien_Daybreak

It's a genius idea to point out Deku's bullied past and how it can possibly turn out, Satisfactory lvl of bring out a char's mental struggle and it was pretty enjoyable and the fact that all canon chars are seeing what's being played out is a form of amusement as well

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ENDINGSmaker

best mha fanfic ever best mha fanfic ever best mha fanfic ever best mha fanfic ever best mha fanfic ever best mha fanfic ever best mha fanfic ever best mha fanfic ever

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Kw0z

My god this is garbage. It’s genuinely like those gacha reaction videos on YouTube. Entire story is ruined because there’s like an audience watching what he does at all times. Weird as hell

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trish_trish_9144

perfect~ I mean it! but I really hope for more chapters or another book related because I wanna see the usagi twins vs the....Im not really sure of a name but it will be izumi and katsuki! looking forward to it <3

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Ronan_Phipps_3502

Hey mate, I’m loving this book so far. My only real gripe is the update schedule being so slow, lol. I especially love what you’re doing with Midoriya’s traumas and familial relationships. It makes him seem so much more real; watching him struggle with his emotional turmoil regarding his sister. Also, I’m just IzuToga trash in general so that’s a win. Lol. TLDR: MC is complex, book is funny, and the relationships are cute. Amazing job.

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Ternya

One of the best BNHA fanfics I have ever read.

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Ternya

very nice. loved the plot and the concept of the story.

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skulputulurubug

I wish rich people animated good fanfics... you know how they did Dragonball GT but it ain't canon? if I was a Billionaire I'd pick a good fanfic to animate, pay for the rights to use the stories and characters... would it be a good investment? nahh but it sure beats cringe videos on YT and Tiktok rn

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Stoeandi

Nice story, having a darker twist to a sunny personality is realy nice. Can´t wait to know how the story goes and how it developes

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DaoistPfd13C

Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.

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Cheeseborger

The first few chapters aren't the greatest I have ever read, but once you have gotten through those bits, this turns into a much better story than expected.

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MISTYSLAYER45

I'm about 61 chapters in with there being 68 chapters currently I'ma take a braeak from this fanfiction so i need/want to leave a review story is pretty nice character development is consistent and compelling so far and i don't know where the story direction is going but... i hope the middle and end have a satisdfying ending overall pretty good story recommend it still think it could improve in some aspect