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Such relaxing story to read and so many positives.. 1. MC with a brain who has already had his growth from the previous game world. 2. MC who shows compassion and care yet is not soft to his enemies. 3. The unique relationships with the girls are different and the Snu Snu scenes even reflect that. 4. MC is OP, so it isn't always lets power up mid fight so I can win. MC is able to plan (I still thing the Crane incident was a wrong decision on MC, but it still worked in the end) and adjust strategy. 5. OMG the use of pronouns is actually done correctly most of the times. (this here warrants a 6th star for review) 6. Foreshadowing is good, and actually has some mystery to it.
Author I need u back, this is like the best r18 novel that this app has to offer and I was really interested in seeing where the story will go 😢
I just finished reading and sad to see it's been 8 months since the last post, so I hope the author is doing ok and hope you will continue with the novel when you get the free time.
Well this story is very good . Accordingly in action face slappying and snu snu staff. Read it once and i am sur you are going to enjoy it.
Dropped?..................... .................................. ........................... ....................... ................. ............. ....... .... ..
well ,overall a good novel with good smuts but there is a problem man your discord link is expired so i cant't access the pictures man.
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
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Lol I just can’t. I like your Evil Devourer novel a lot, but this one is honestly horrible compared to that one. Almost every heroine wears I3wd clothes, and although that wouldn’t be a horrible thing if it was in private with the MC or something, but they wear them all around, basically exposing every part of their body to every man who sees them, and that’s honestly just not my cup of tea.
It has it positives and is enjoyable in some aspects as there are lots of good reviews but I couldn't ignore the somethings like announcement/appointment made by one of the most influential powers Church to recognize a Paladin by going to classroom with bunch of students important figure with authority like Paladin is announced like that. This like those novels where the protagonist identity is revealed or exposed except on this one there isn't a valid reason why such an important matter happens like its insignificant thing to fulfill teenagers wet dream of feeling important.
Mm, haven't read it yet, But it's written by the sleazy old man, how can it be bad? So let me read.....Im collecting data. As for the start, it seems intriguing and I love the mc's name...
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I am loving this novel. This is a novel overpowered MC done right. Even though he can clear all difficulties with using brute force but he doesn't, he just enjoys his time chasing girlfriends and he is cunning in his plans. I am enjoying this novel. Keep up the good work author.
Love the characters and the story. It’s right up my alley for this type of content
I love it. A fun MC with a lighthearted fun story with ero on the side. The story is well structured, and you just want to keep reading. gods job, author
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
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up to chapter 40, in a few words if you are looking for a spicy, entertaining and progressive novel this is your novel, it shows that the author knows when to add lemons and when to advance the story, the mc is good and the heroines (they are from a game eroge, but still good) ps: highly recommended😏
Really enjoye this read . Hoping more chapters come out soon. Please make this story a daily posting. The characters to the Mc are very well developed as the story progresses.
Coming from Ossan, staying for the story. This novel is the best among what he wrote, in my opinion. The MC is strong from the start. He's cunning, smart, and didn't hesitate to get what he want (even at the cost of annoying the original protagonist of the eroge) The world background is great too! Using Sins and Virtue as a way to judge good and evil. The domination system also interesting. It's not really explained yet, so we need to wait! I hope it's explained in the future. Also... because it's ossan. The character and the way he write ero character is just chef kiss! The update is 1 chapter a day it seems. But when I read the synopsis and his reply at latest chapter. he said he will increase it to 2 chapters after it is contracted. What a same, so 4 star for update for now. Good work!
Honestly, this novel blew my mind away. The way it's structured, you just gotta keep reading and reading and reading. The ero elements are well blended with the story and everything just flows well. Author did really well with this.
Definitely not biased just because I am his friend and checked his works before he uploaded it, but this is great. I usually didn't read any eroge novel because sometimes that put me off when the MC didn't do what he did when it was still in the game. But in this case, the MC had clear goals and didn't hold back. He still cares about consent and such (from what I read in the future chapters). So you can look forward to it. There is also no GF that got stealed from him, it's great.
Very promising story, its nice to read something with good grammar for a change. Hoping for more updates!
Ini menjanjikan semoga keluarannya lancar dan crott tdk tersendak2[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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well this is promising, i hope you upload this novel as often as dxd milk.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Review from your only beloved Ossan. You can expect some cool and smart MC in this one, unlike the seemingly naive but growing character of my other novel (this MC has gone through a lot) I will just open it as a Q&A place. Q: Will the MC have Harem? A: Yes, of course. It's me. Q: Hoy many girls? A: *Wink* A lot. But only some will become MC's main girls. Q: How strong is the MC? A: He's broken Q: Is there any NTR scene? A: No. MC's girls won't be taken by anyone else. But if you are talking about whether MC will steal some girls, then you will need to read it! The most important one. Q: Any lemons? A: Obviously!. Ask your question in the reply! I will answer them as much as I can without giving any spoiler!
Such relaxing story to read and so many positives.. 1. MC with a brain who has already had his growth from the previous game world. 2. MC who shows compassion and care yet is not soft to his enemies. 3. The unique relationships with the girls are different and the Snu Snu scenes even reflect that. 4. MC is OP, so it isn't always lets power up mid fight so I can win. MC is able to plan (I still thing the Crane incident was a wrong decision on MC, but it still worked in the end) and adjust strategy. 5. OMG the use of pronouns is actually done correctly most of the times. (this here warrants a 6th star for review) 6. Foreshadowing is good, and actually has some mystery to it.
Author I need u back, this is like the best r18 novel that this app has to offer and I was really interested in seeing where the story will go 😢
I just finished reading and sad to see it's been 8 months since the last post, so I hope the author is doing ok and hope you will continue with the novel when you get the free time.
Well this story is very good . Accordingly in action face slappying and snu snu staff. Read it once and i am sur you are going to enjoy it.
Dropped?..................... .................................. ........................... ....................... ................. ............. ....... .... ..
well ,overall a good novel with good smuts but there is a problem man your discord link is expired so i cant't access the pictures man.
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
MOREEEEEEEEE[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]........................................................
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Lol I just can’t. I like your Evil Devourer novel a lot, but this one is honestly horrible compared to that one. Almost every heroine wears I3wd clothes, and although that wouldn’t be a horrible thing if it was in private with the MC or something, but they wear them all around, basically exposing every part of their body to every man who sees them, and that’s honestly just not my cup of tea.
It has it positives and is enjoyable in some aspects as there are lots of good reviews but I couldn't ignore the somethings like announcement/appointment made by one of the most influential powers Church to recognize a Paladin by going to classroom with bunch of students important figure with authority like Paladin is announced like that. This like those novels where the protagonist identity is revealed or exposed except on this one there isn't a valid reason why such an important matter happens like its insignificant thing to fulfill teenagers wet dream of feeling important.
Mm, haven't read it yet, But it's written by the sleazy old man, how can it be bad? So let me read.....Im collecting data. As for the start, it seems intriguing and I love the mc's name...
Great novel don't give up on it 👍 great Novel don't give up on it 👍Great novel don't give up on it 👍 great Novel don't give up on it 👍Great novel don't give up on it 👍 great Novel don't give up on it 👍
I am loving this novel. This is a novel overpowered MC done right. Even though he can clear all difficulties with using brute force but he doesn't, he just enjoys his time chasing girlfriends and he is cunning in his plans. I am enjoying this novel. Keep up the good work author.
Love the characters and the story. It’s right up my alley for this type of content
I love it. A fun MC with a lighthearted fun story with ero on the side. The story is well structured, and you just want to keep reading. gods job, author
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
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up to chapter 40, in a few words if you are looking for a spicy, entertaining and progressive novel this is your novel, it shows that the author knows when to add lemons and when to advance the story, the mc is good and the heroines (they are from a game eroge, but still good) ps: highly recommended😏
Really enjoye this read . Hoping more chapters come out soon. Please make this story a daily posting. The characters to the Mc are very well developed as the story progresses.
Coming from Ossan, staying for the story. This novel is the best among what he wrote, in my opinion. The MC is strong from the start. He's cunning, smart, and didn't hesitate to get what he want (even at the cost of annoying the original protagonist of the eroge) The world background is great too! Using Sins and Virtue as a way to judge good and evil. The domination system also interesting. It's not really explained yet, so we need to wait! I hope it's explained in the future. Also... because it's ossan. The character and the way he write ero character is just chef kiss! The update is 1 chapter a day it seems. But when I read the synopsis and his reply at latest chapter. he said he will increase it to 2 chapters after it is contracted. What a same, so 4 star for update for now. Good work!
Honestly, this novel blew my mind away. The way it's structured, you just gotta keep reading and reading and reading. The ero elements are well blended with the story and everything just flows well. Author did really well with this.
Definitely not biased just because I am his friend and checked his works before he uploaded it, but this is great. I usually didn't read any eroge novel because sometimes that put me off when the MC didn't do what he did when it was still in the game. But in this case, the MC had clear goals and didn't hold back. He still cares about consent and such (from what I read in the future chapters). So you can look forward to it. There is also no GF that got stealed from him, it's great.
Very promising story, its nice to read something with good grammar for a change. Hoping for more updates!
Ini menjanjikan semoga keluarannya lancar dan crott tdk tersendak2[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Spoiler de révélation well this is promising, i hope you upload this novel as often as dxd milk.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Review from your only beloved Ossan. You can expect some cool and smart MC in this one, unlike the seemingly naive but growing character of my other novel (this MC has gone through a lot) I will just open it as a Q&A place. Q: Will the MC have Harem? A: Yes, of course. It's me. Q: Hoy many girls? A: *Wink* A lot. But only some will become MC's main girls. Q: How strong is the MC? A: He's broken Q: Is there any NTR scene? A: No. MC's girls won't be taken by anyone else. But if you are talking about whether MC will steal some girls, then you will need to read it! The most important one. Q: Any lemons? A: Obviously!. Ask your question in the reply! I will answer them as much as I can without giving any spoiler!