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I had to leave this here. I just completed the first 100 chapters few days ago and am somewhere around 120. This story started out slow, but the quality of writing has improved so much in such short time! I got goosebumps reading one of the chapters. The story turns dark and I love it. It's definitely worth reading till at least Chapter 110. You won't regret it. I'm excited to see how the magical and political situations develop and looking forward to explore more of Xelgar. P.S. Alora best waifu
To all the new readers who are reading, 95% of the story is in Xelgar. My story is big, so don't except insane character development in just under 50 chapters. Have Fun!!!
So many things just keep happening. Just as I’m about to relax, boom, something happens. I’m being kept on my toes
Bruh no wonder hes's been bullied a lot cause he's an 'antisocial' person:contrary to the laws and customs of society; devoid of or antagonistic to sociable instincts or practices.
I read until 183. I don't like the current situation, everyone is dying, especially Leah's death, I was very upset, the author would prefer to reduce the deaths, I hope the children will not die in the future, the background is very good, I would like her to spend more time with Emma and the children
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it's been a long time since i enjoyed reading novel! I hope it reaches top 10 ranking soon! All the best to the author
great novel keep it going and give me more chapters btw u should make a discord for the novel it is a great place for people to ask doubts about the novel
Hey guys, Finally, part 1 of volume 1 is over and I am really happy that you guys were here reading my story. I know I am not that much of a good writer and this is also my first book, but I am working hard and improving on a daily basis and improving my writing quality. I have a really good story to show you guys and with Part 2 of volume one you are gonna really love it. I am gonna attempt to pull something off really difficult thing in this part but it will be worth it. Please keep supporting me through comments, power stones and etc, I will make sure to make every single coin count spent on this book.💕🙌
This is probably my first mostly positive review here. What I like most about this novel is that the author does away with most of the clichés of this kind of novel and the novel feels authentic. The common tropes you'd expect are just not there and the best thing is that there are none of the most common annoying tropes. The best thing so far is the story's development and what keeps me reading the novel. If I had to name its weakest point, that's the characters. I don't like most of them if I'm being honest. Aside from Daisy and the kids. That includes the main character, he is overly trusting even when he has all the hints that he should stop just trusting people for no reason. I sincerely hope that will improve in the future because an unlikable main character is a huge detriment. Although I did like some twists with the characters. Like one of them being surprisingly good while another one isn't. Anyway, if the main character sees some development, I think this novel has enormous potential.
no world background, the writing quality is amateur, no grammar mistakes, it's just the delivery, not even gonna go into the mc cause I would be ranting for too long, at ch 23, things just happen, there's some mystery past with amnesia maybe there'll be a story, can't say if it'll be good
The stars says it all! It only is a 5 out of 5, because I can't give a 10 out of 10! It has it all! A relatable MC, a charming unfolding, and man... I don't know what else to say, besides GIVE SOME MORE!!! 🤘🏼🤘🏼🤘🏼
Now this is epic, reading through this I can see great writing quality, incredible plot and unique characters. Keep up the good work!
Lovely story, I love the development of the story and the character design, Larisa has to be my favorite villain, I like how personality bending she was, if that is even a word.
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I enjoyed reading this novel and look forward to future updates. The background story is interesting and I appreciate the quality of the storytelling. The plot is also good and the story is off to a great start. The world-building is impressive, particularly since the story takes place in two different worlds. I am eager to see how the story develops in the future.
The story is starting out great, world building is also going well as the story revolve around two worlds, wants to see how the stroy build up in the future 👍
nice work really like the background story I'll be waiting for more updates so don't disappoint, so far the novel has been going well, I would like to see how it would turn out
Okay, I'm interested. Thumbs up to an upcoming author. Have great hopes for this book.
Resplendent, I have to say it's an excellent book originally I planned to drop a review after the first five chapters but then I was lost reading it until the eight. The book starts of slow but that's the joy of it because you get to observe from the eyes of the MC his everyday life. The description of each character was more than perfect and overall the storyline is broad and enviable.
I really like the descriptions used in the story. Each one feels unique in some way. Aizel has started out with having a pretty pessimistic outlook on life. I'm eager to see how this will change as he interacts with people in the fantasy world. What is also really cool is that he transitions between the two worlds periodically. Usually, in these type of stories, it goes only one way, so what the author has done with the premise is a breath of fresh air. Keep it up!
Read till ch 18. The fact that we don't know why he goes from one world to another gives a good mystery to the story. The story, fights and characters are well described. I look forward to reading the next chapters,
Story is progressing greatly , loved the mc till now and fight scenes were the cherry on the top especially the fight with the wyvern. The author is constantly updating chapters, and i can't wait to read more chapters. Gonna suggest this novel to my friends too. 🔥❤
Read till the fight with Larisa , the story is really good , atleast the mc is not reincarnated or regressor , plus the fight scene was amazing . Chapter is also updating and i don't see a harem tag so make sure don'T make it harem, i hate harem. Good luck ❤🔥
Although there aren't many chapters yet, up until the most recent one, the story has been rather interesting; it isn't repetitive like other novels about cultivation or reincarnation. The grammar is easy to read and the author does a great job of portraying his own story. Updates are also consistent. The initial fight scene was extremely well done, but I would have preferred to see more of Aizel's strength. Still, it was still nice if the author was creating suspense. I hope there will be some sort of magic involved in the following chapter. Instead of the Harem tag, there is a romance tag, so I will give it a plus one.
Loving it so far, the fight scene was epic with Larisa ❤️, Hoping to see more this type of fight in future. GOOD LUCK author , hope you can deliver a good storyline with some good fight scenes and power system.
So far, i would say its really good, the story is kinda developing so have to wait further for more chapters ❤
Hey everyone newbie author here, this is my first work ever , I am gonna be consistent everyday even if i know atleast 1 person is reading my chapter, it will make me happy and motivated to continue the work 😇 Follow the journey of Aizel , you will get goosebumps everytime i promise ❤🤣👹
I had to leave this here. I just completed the first 100 chapters few days ago and am somewhere around 120. This story started out slow, but the quality of writing has improved so much in such short time! I got goosebumps reading one of the chapters. The story turns dark and I love it. It's definitely worth reading till at least Chapter 110. You won't regret it. I'm excited to see how the magical and political situations develop and looking forward to explore more of Xelgar. P.S. Alora best waifu
To all the new readers who are reading, 95% of the story is in Xelgar. My story is big, so don't except insane character development in just under 50 chapters. Have Fun!!!
So many things just keep happening. Just as I’m about to relax, boom, something happens. I’m being kept on my toes
Bruh no wonder hes's been bullied a lot cause he's an 'antisocial' person:contrary to the laws and customs of society; devoid of or antagonistic to sociable instincts or practices.
I read until 183. I don't like the current situation, everyone is dying, especially Leah's death, I was very upset, the author would prefer to reduce the deaths, I hope the children will not die in the future, the background is very good, I would like her to spend more time with Emma and the children
Spoiler de révélation it's been a long time since i enjoyed reading novel! I hope it reaches top 10 ranking soon! All the best to the author
great novel keep it going and give me more chapters btw u should make a discord for the novel it is a great place for people to ask doubts about the novel
Hey guys, Finally, part 1 of volume 1 is over and I am really happy that you guys were here reading my story. I know I am not that much of a good writer and this is also my first book, but I am working hard and improving on a daily basis and improving my writing quality. I have a really good story to show you guys and with Part 2 of volume one you are gonna really love it. I am gonna attempt to pull something off really difficult thing in this part but it will be worth it. Please keep supporting me through comments, power stones and etc, I will make sure to make every single coin count spent on this book.💕🙌
This is probably my first mostly positive review here. What I like most about this novel is that the author does away with most of the clichés of this kind of novel and the novel feels authentic. The common tropes you'd expect are just not there and the best thing is that there are none of the most common annoying tropes. The best thing so far is the story's development and what keeps me reading the novel. If I had to name its weakest point, that's the characters. I don't like most of them if I'm being honest. Aside from Daisy and the kids. That includes the main character, he is overly trusting even when he has all the hints that he should stop just trusting people for no reason. I sincerely hope that will improve in the future because an unlikable main character is a huge detriment. Although I did like some twists with the characters. Like one of them being surprisingly good while another one isn't. Anyway, if the main character sees some development, I think this novel has enormous potential.
no world background, the writing quality is amateur, no grammar mistakes, it's just the delivery, not even gonna go into the mc cause I would be ranting for too long, at ch 23, things just happen, there's some mystery past with amnesia maybe there'll be a story, can't say if it'll be good
The stars says it all! It only is a 5 out of 5, because I can't give a 10 out of 10! It has it all! A relatable MC, a charming unfolding, and man... I don't know what else to say, besides GIVE SOME MORE!!! 🤘🏼🤘🏼🤘🏼
Now this is epic, reading through this I can see great writing quality, incredible plot and unique characters. Keep up the good work!
Lovely story, I love the development of the story and the character design, Larisa has to be my favorite villain, I like how personality bending she was, if that is even a word.
Spoiler de révélation I enjoyed reading this novel and look forward to future updates. The background story is interesting and I appreciate the quality of the storytelling. The plot is also good and the story is off to a great start. The world-building is impressive, particularly since the story takes place in two different worlds. I am eager to see how the story develops in the future.
The story is starting out great, world building is also going well as the story revolve around two worlds, wants to see how the stroy build up in the future 👍
nice work really like the background story I'll be waiting for more updates so don't disappoint, so far the novel has been going well, I would like to see how it would turn out
Okay, I'm interested. Thumbs up to an upcoming author. Have great hopes for this book.
Resplendent, I have to say it's an excellent book originally I planned to drop a review after the first five chapters but then I was lost reading it until the eight. The book starts of slow but that's the joy of it because you get to observe from the eyes of the MC his everyday life. The description of each character was more than perfect and overall the storyline is broad and enviable.
I really like the descriptions used in the story. Each one feels unique in some way. Aizel has started out with having a pretty pessimistic outlook on life. I'm eager to see how this will change as he interacts with people in the fantasy world. What is also really cool is that he transitions between the two worlds periodically. Usually, in these type of stories, it goes only one way, so what the author has done with the premise is a breath of fresh air. Keep it up!
Read till ch 18. The fact that we don't know why he goes from one world to another gives a good mystery to the story. The story, fights and characters are well described. I look forward to reading the next chapters,
Story is progressing greatly , loved the mc till now and fight scenes were the cherry on the top especially the fight with the wyvern. The author is constantly updating chapters, and i can't wait to read more chapters. Gonna suggest this novel to my friends too. 🔥❤
Read till the fight with Larisa , the story is really good , atleast the mc is not reincarnated or regressor , plus the fight scene was amazing . Chapter is also updating and i don't see a harem tag so make sure don'T make it harem, i hate harem. Good luck ❤🔥
Although there aren't many chapters yet, up until the most recent one, the story has been rather interesting; it isn't repetitive like other novels about cultivation or reincarnation. The grammar is easy to read and the author does a great job of portraying his own story. Updates are also consistent. The initial fight scene was extremely well done, but I would have preferred to see more of Aizel's strength. Still, it was still nice if the author was creating suspense. I hope there will be some sort of magic involved in the following chapter. Instead of the Harem tag, there is a romance tag, so I will give it a plus one.
Loving it so far, the fight scene was epic with Larisa ❤️, Hoping to see more this type of fight in future. GOOD LUCK author , hope you can deliver a good storyline with some good fight scenes and power system.
So far, i would say its really good, the story is kinda developing so have to wait further for more chapters ❤
Hey everyone newbie author here, this is my first work ever , I am gonna be consistent everyday even if i know atleast 1 person is reading my chapter, it will make me happy and motivated to continue the work 😇 Follow the journey of Aizel , you will get goosebumps everytime i promise ❤🤣👹
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