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Eu não ligo para essas pessoas que estão criticando a novela são uns otários não ligue autor seu trabalho está fantástico continue escrevendo essa história pôr favor um abraço.
MC got an OP power from the start but has to learn how to use it. Love how the MC grows his power while trying not to disturb the plot. The writing and story are good. I wish updates were faster.
Muito boa história bem construída. Mais deixou a desejar, que o MC Tomasi mais liderança e criando seu pròprio clã, ia ficar maís interessante
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This is one of those stories that, whenever I see a new chapter, I drop what I'm doing and immediately start reading.
Awesome story can't wait to read more, 5 stars for your work, continue this excellent work, thanks you very much can't wait to see more 👀👀👀👀👀
Fire story its very cool and I love the mc's powers, so far it's been good and pretty cool. word count word count word count word count word count.
Thanks for the wonderful work. Please keep up your good work sir. And we need mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore. Thanks again .best of luck
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this book so nice. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it[img=faceslap][img=recommend]
Is such a nice story people usually don’t understand the concept of biokenisis it is a nice blend of everything and the concept of making his own dragons is a very interesting touch
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You've been out of the basement for long enough time to lock you in to get ✍️. Seriously one of the best fan fictions.
According to ASOIAF world's power structure MC is too OP. And almost no updates. Writing quality, story development, character design is ok.
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very good story, absolutely great and not cringe MC. Great story progression, love the way the story was going. Unfortunately, the story appears to be dropped, as no updates have come for months.
Artificial, Poor Prose, Cliche ridden Canon-Compliant(ish), and just overall rough as a story.
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Eu não ligo para essas pessoas que estão criticando a novela são uns otários não ligue autor seu trabalho está fantástico continue escrevendo essa história pôr favor um abraço.
MC got an OP power from the start but has to learn how to use it. Love how the MC grows his power while trying not to disturb the plot. The writing and story are good. I wish updates were faster.
Muito boa história bem construída. Mais deixou a desejar, que o MC Tomasi mais liderança e criando seu pròprio clã, ia ficar maís interessante
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
This is one of those stories that, whenever I see a new chapter, I drop what I'm doing and immediately start reading.
Awesome story can't wait to read more, 5 stars for your work, continue this excellent work, thanks you very much can't wait to see more 👀👀👀👀👀
Fire story its very cool and I love the mc's powers, so far it's been good and pretty cool. word count word count word count word count word count.
Thanks for the wonderful work. Please keep up your good work sir. And we need mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore. Thanks again .best of luck
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this book so nice. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it. i like it[img=faceslap][img=recommend]
Is such a nice story people usually don’t understand the concept of biokenisis it is a nice blend of everything and the concept of making his own dragons is a very interesting touch
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You've been out of the basement for long enough time to lock you in to get ✍️. Seriously one of the best fan fictions.
According to ASOIAF world's power structure MC is too OP. And almost no updates. Writing quality, story development, character design is ok.
Exelente ,.......,......................................................................................................................... ...........................................................................
Spoiler de révélation very good story, absolutely great and not cringe MC. Great story progression, love the way the story was going. Unfortunately, the story appears to be dropped, as no updates have come for months.
Artificial, Poor Prose, Cliche ridden Canon-Compliant(ish), and just overall rough as a story.
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