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The story has great potential but due to grammar issues it can be difficult to understand. Also you should include the #Kindombuilding tag as the story is progressing in that way. The storytelling has also improved. Gambare Author ✌🏻
We gather here today to celebrate Naruto. Naruto was a great man, he saved the village many times, got defeated many times, won many times, loss many things, gained many things, he was a freak of nature that not even the evil of mankind could take away his good nature. He has fallen. I know it may be a shock to some of you but it is true, he had a son named boruto, and that was his folly. His son became a shonen protagonist like his father, and just like his father and many other shonen protagonist, he needed to lose his parents. I know it may be hard to swallow but it is what it is. We can only move on and keep him in our hearts! Only there will he live on! I may be an atheist but I think I can represent all of us when I say. Amen. Rest in peace soildier🙏
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These fake reviews are annoying. I gave it chance because the rating but the grammar alone is enough to turn me off.
Half of these reviews are faked interesting.............................................................................................................................................
Ninjas who reached extraordinary heights were given the title of "God of Shinobi." Throughout the series, only two ninjas were given the title of God of Shinobi: Hashirama Senju and Hiruzen Sarutobi
Because Nagato is Akatsuki's leader, Konan tends to defer to him, doing as he instructs even when she personally disagrees. In Nagato's rule of Amegakure, Konan acts as the "angel" to his "god", communicating his will to Ame's villager
Nagato is the figurehead leader of the Akatsuki who wishes to capture the tailed beasts sealed into various people around the shinobi world.
After Deidara defeated Gaara in combat and took him to Akatsuki's lair in the Land of Rivers, Shukaku was forcefully extracted from Gaara and placed within the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path
Besides Kurama, Shukaku was one of the first Tailed Beasts the Naruto series introduced. Shukaku is one of the reasons Gaara has the Ulimate Defense. Other than his childish personality, Shukaku has advance sealing techniques that far outrank the other Tailed Beasts, despite being considered the weakest
Naruto is no doubt a unique ninja within the realms of the Naruto universe. For starters, he has a fox demon sealed inside of him, lives by a diet that mostly consists of ramen, and creates techniques that no one else would ever think to create. There's truly no other shinobi quite like him.
Naruto is an orphan who has a dangerous fox-like entity known as Kurama the Nine-Tailed Fox sealed within his body by his father, the Fourth Hokage Minato Namikaze, the leader of Konoha's ninja force, at the cost of his own life and that of his wife, Kushina Uzumaki.
Naruto is generally a very simple minded, easy going, cheerful person. He often rushes things, and misses obvious things such as Hinata's constant shyness around him. In the beginning of the series, Naruto is very fun loving, often pulling pranks on fellow villagers. This usually ends in a scolding from Iruka Umino.
NARUTO:I TAMED SHUKAKU NITS Shukaku (also known as the One-Tail) is a character in the Naruto series. It is a Tanuki-like sand demon who is one of the nine Tailed Beasts.
Naruto is a Japanese manga series written and illustrated by Masashi Kishimoto. It tells the story of Naruto Uzumaki, a young ninja who seeks recognition from his peers and dreams of becoming the Hokage, the leader of his village
Kaguya later gave birth to a pair of sons who inherited all of her powers. One of these sons would grow up to become the Sage of the Six Paths. Jealous that her sons had inherited powers similar to herself, Kaguya became one with the God-Tree and her body and mind formed the Ten-Tailed Beast.
Shukaku (also known as the One-Tail) is a character in the Naruto series. It is a Tanuki-like sand demon who is one of the nine Tailed Beasts.
He has a grudge against the Nine-Tails because the fox believes that his single tail makes him the weakest of the tailed beast. Shukaku looks like a sandy-brown raccoon dog with a jagged mouth, and he has curse seal markings throughout his body.04-Oct-2021
This novel have a inconsistent updates but still is good to read. While it may be that the concept is copied from another novelist but it still retain it's own independency in story development.
Shukaku (also known as the One-Tail) is a character in the Naruto series. It is a Tanuki-like sand demon who is one of the nine Tailed Beasts.
👱♂️👱♂️👸👸🤴🤴🤴🤴🤴🤴🤴🤴🤴😎😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁He has a grudge against the Nine-Tails because the fox believes that his single tail makes him the weakest of the tailed beast. Shukaku looks like a sandy-brown raccoon dog with a jagged mouth, and he has curse seal markings throughout his body
This novel have a inconsistent updates but still is good to read. While it may be that the concept is copied from another novelist but it still retain it's own independency in story development.
This novel have a inconsistent updates but still is good to read. While it may be that the concept is copied from another novelist but it still retain it's own independency in story development.
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The story has great potential but due to grammar issues it can be difficult to understand. Also you should include the #Kindombuilding tag as the story is progressing in that way. The storytelling has also improved. Gambare Author ✌🏻
We gather here today to celebrate Naruto. Naruto was a great man, he saved the village many times, got defeated many times, won many times, loss many things, gained many things, he was a freak of nature that not even the evil of mankind could take away his good nature. He has fallen. I know it may be a shock to some of you but it is true, he had a son named boruto, and that was his folly. His son became a shonen protagonist like his father, and just like his father and many other shonen protagonist, he needed to lose his parents. I know it may be hard to swallow but it is what it is. We can only move on and keep him in our hearts! Only there will he live on! I may be an atheist but I think I can represent all of us when I say. Amen. Rest in peace soildier🙏
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
These fake reviews are annoying. I gave it chance because the rating but the grammar alone is enough to turn me off.
Half of these reviews are faked interesting.............................................................................................................................................
Ninjas who reached extraordinary heights were given the title of "God of Shinobi." Throughout the series, only two ninjas were given the title of God of Shinobi: Hashirama Senju and Hiruzen Sarutobi
Because Nagato is Akatsuki's leader, Konan tends to defer to him, doing as he instructs even when she personally disagrees. In Nagato's rule of Amegakure, Konan acts as the "angel" to his "god", communicating his will to Ame's villager
Nagato is the figurehead leader of the Akatsuki who wishes to capture the tailed beasts sealed into various people around the shinobi world.
After Deidara defeated Gaara in combat and took him to Akatsuki's lair in the Land of Rivers, Shukaku was forcefully extracted from Gaara and placed within the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path
Besides Kurama, Shukaku was one of the first Tailed Beasts the Naruto series introduced. Shukaku is one of the reasons Gaara has the Ulimate Defense. Other than his childish personality, Shukaku has advance sealing techniques that far outrank the other Tailed Beasts, despite being considered the weakest
Naruto is no doubt a unique ninja within the realms of the Naruto universe. For starters, he has a fox demon sealed inside of him, lives by a diet that mostly consists of ramen, and creates techniques that no one else would ever think to create. There's truly no other shinobi quite like him.
Naruto is an orphan who has a dangerous fox-like entity known as Kurama the Nine-Tailed Fox sealed within his body by his father, the Fourth Hokage Minato Namikaze, the leader of Konoha's ninja force, at the cost of his own life and that of his wife, Kushina Uzumaki.
Naruto is generally a very simple minded, easy going, cheerful person. He often rushes things, and misses obvious things such as Hinata's constant shyness around him. In the beginning of the series, Naruto is very fun loving, often pulling pranks on fellow villagers. This usually ends in a scolding from Iruka Umino.
NARUTO:I TAMED SHUKAKU NITS Shukaku (also known as the One-Tail) is a character in the Naruto series. It is a Tanuki-like sand demon who is one of the nine Tailed Beasts.
Naruto is a Japanese manga series written and illustrated by Masashi Kishimoto. It tells the story of Naruto Uzumaki, a young ninja who seeks recognition from his peers and dreams of becoming the Hokage, the leader of his village
Kaguya later gave birth to a pair of sons who inherited all of her powers. One of these sons would grow up to become the Sage of the Six Paths. Jealous that her sons had inherited powers similar to herself, Kaguya became one with the God-Tree and her body and mind formed the Ten-Tailed Beast.
Shukaku (also known as the One-Tail) is a character in the Naruto series. It is a Tanuki-like sand demon who is one of the nine Tailed Beasts.
He has a grudge against the Nine-Tails because the fox believes that his single tail makes him the weakest of the tailed beast. Shukaku looks like a sandy-brown raccoon dog with a jagged mouth, and he has curse seal markings throughout his body.04-Oct-2021
This novel have a inconsistent updates but still is good to read. While it may be that the concept is copied from another novelist but it still retain it's own independency in story development.
Shukaku (also known as the One-Tail) is a character in the Naruto series. It is a Tanuki-like sand demon who is one of the nine Tailed Beasts.
👱♂️👱♂️👸👸🤴🤴🤴🤴🤴🤴🤴🤴🤴😎😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁He has a grudge against the Nine-Tails because the fox believes that his single tail makes him the weakest of the tailed beast. Shukaku looks like a sandy-brown raccoon dog with a jagged mouth, and he has curse seal markings throughout his body
This novel have a inconsistent updates but still is good to read. While it may be that the concept is copied from another novelist but it still retain it's own independency in story development.
This novel have a inconsistent updates but still is good to read. While it may be that the concept is copied from another novelist but it still retain it's own independency in story development.
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