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A Fake Familiar Reborn
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In the middle of a possible Stray hunt, Rias Gremory accidentally ended up with three marks on her hand due to activating an unknown spell. After researching them, she discovered their use of calling forth a possible familiar. But what came from the summoning was a familiar that not even a Devil could have ever imagined.
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alright man you are an absolutely great writer, and so far I love all your stories but don't you think you may be starting to take on too many at once?
I just want to say, Grayfia is not even in the top 100 strongest beings in DxD, if Archer is struggling with her then he just became a canon fodder. Servants can’t get stronger, so in the middle or late stages of the plot Archer would just be a decoration. Also, Tracing shouldnt be degraded due to the lack of presence of Gaia, so Archer should be much stronger here.
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Man! ~ Great start. ~ You are not getting the views only because of your chapter count. But I believe if they give it a try, everyone would appreciate your work. ~ And about the updates, I won't complain... Since your chapters are lengthy. (but I wished you'd update every week. Sad smiley face) Nonetheless, Thank you. 👍✌️
I like the story and I hope you won't drop it author keep it up ______________________________________________________________________________________
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This is really good, the writing quality is amazing. The story building is fabulous and the characterization or the way he sets the personality of characters are really satisfying and spot on to me. MUST READ THIS ITS WORTH GOLD
Another awesome archer story. You are the only writer so far who has managed to portray archer so well and integrate him in different scenarios
I really like this fanfic of yours. Personally, I'm not a fan of DXD, but I really like the female characters in DXD. and I'm a person who really likes Archer (shidou emiya), so when I saw your story, I was very excited to have a fanfic that I've always been looking for. I hope you won't abandon this story and also hope you'll update it. more often. (My English is not very good, so I hope you will understand my opinion.)
the only downside is the update frequency. everything else, i like it. Also, just a little hope, give Rias some love, alright? I pity her if she that desperate to get "The Bone of Emiya's Sword"
Good story. The best Fate DXD crossover I've read. I like how you nerfed him since there would be no actual tension if it were just regular Archer
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gremory peerage -Rias Gremory[Caster(Twicht Princes/JK/dress 2nd"Fantasia Re:Build")/Rider(NP:Summong Gamory(Camels)+ORC)/Saber(NP:Galatin II/"Fantasia Bunko 2023")/Berserker(Scale Mail)/Archer(Summer"Fantasia Re:Build")] -Himejima Akeno[Caster(Miko dress/form Fallen angel/JK/2nd dress "Fantasia Re:Build")] -Toujo Koneko(Shirone)[Assassin(Nekotama lv2/Shirone Mode/dress 2nd "Fantasia Re:Build"/Hellcat-chan)] Kiba Yuuto(Isaiah)[Saber(Darkness Knight Fang)(NP:Sword Birth"Sword of Betrayal"/Glory Drag Trooper+5 demon sword)] -Gasper Vladi[Caster(Danball Vampire/Danball Vampire Shogun/Danball Vampire God)] -Asia Argento[Caster(JK/2nd dress "Fantasia Re:Build")/Rider(NP:Dragon tamer"Fafnir/Anselmus/Cyril/Gregorios/Simeon+Twilight Saint Affection)] -Xenovia Quarta[Saber(Durandal+True Excalidur(DxD)+Excalibur's Scabbard)] -Rossweisse[Caster(NP:Mistilteinn Wand)] -Hyoudou Issei[Berserker(Oppai Dragon)/Caster(Lecherous Magic)/Archer(Welsh Blaster Bishop)/Rider(Ryuuteimaru)/Saber(Ascalon+ Ascalon II+Ascalon II Prototype)/]
Here is an observation that I mentalized; I will assume that you would technically turn the DXD universe into a "LostBelt singularity" and since the majority are humans (pure/reincarnated/hybrids) they could become "Living Servant", then there are the "supernatural beings" that have very human traits even if they are deteriorated but polished in what they have been able to manage in modern peaceful times with political skirmishes. Those who possess the "Longinus" are already condemned since yes or yes they will be linked to be "Living Servants" and depending on how much influence and impact they had on the stories they could summon past variables if they had relevance to a legend. How happy will Alaya be to receive new additions and possibly those who "hire" (scam) to become "Counter Guardians" by Cao Cao's hero faction.
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Hmm, author mentioned that Rias is not responsible for Archer’s increase in stats ...a big mistake. A Servant gets stronger and weaker depending on the Mana of their Master, I guess the Author probably just watched UBW and did not do enough research. He also made the most common mistake most Fate fanfic authors do ...and that is Archer’s tracing, or rather, Fate magecraft in general. If you are a fan of fate you would know that magecraft are being degraded due to Gaia, and since DxD world doesnt have the Will of the World, Archer’s tracing should be much stronger. But for some reason, Grayfia, managed to tank Caladbolg, an NP strong enough to rip space apart, and that was a downgraded version. In DxD without Gaia’s interventions, Caladbolg would as strong as the original, and since it is a broken phantasm, its rank would increase. Grayfia should have been vaporized by it. So yeah, Archer was nerfed so bad. But eh, heavily nerfed character isn’t new. Author probably like DxD more and is naturally biased. Nerfing aside, writing quality is good. updates are unstable, which is understandable since author has other stories. World building, well, its a fanfic, theres not much world building. character design, meh. Also, there are other servants summoned aside from Archer, which is as cliche as it could get. If you like more DxD Fate crossovers, i think you should check out “Bonds Beyond Humanity”, now that is a crossover done right. It’s in ff.net
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