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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I AM HERE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, as I say author as long as you don't drop the novel we cool. I am going to give you a 5 star because I like the idea and you're a good author other than some translation problems everything is good.
Good start , please do not throw qiu to the robot =) ...........................................................................................
I AM HERE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, as I say author as long as you don't drop the novel we cool. I am going to give you a 5 star because I like the idea and you're a good author other than some translation problems everything is good.
Good start , please do not throw qiu to the robot =) ...........................................................................................