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losiento pero por favor tomate unos minutos en editar los capitulos por favor ya no es que este muy mal esque esta inleible
La historia es buena un poco de mejorar la tradición, ya estoy un poco acostumbrado y no es difícil de leer la recomiendo es bastante entretenido
What's the point of reading this trash? It's just merely an MTL and this is not even edited.
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The translator did not even bother to correct the names (Instead of Arlong, some kind of Aaron, etc.), not to mention other edits. Typical Chinese fanfiction with slang, is that what the phrase "They really look like those who walk on lakes and rivers" can mean? It feels like I'm reading a novel about cultivators and not One Piece. I do not recommend
The story is itself is good. However, the translation is machine quality and there are several gaps in the story where the poster missed chapters. So, overall, low quality. I would advise readers to skip.
MC's ability is slightly overpowered, nice power introduction to One Piece, but the translation of Chinese->English names made me stop. 😅
Evaluation: Below Average WQ: Super bad. Too many gramm errors and inconsistencies. I guess this would be a machine translated due to the fact that it follows all errors MTL has. Second, the structure could've been good if you removed the CHINESE propaganda (always mentioning china, young master & arrogant behavior). 1/5 SD: This FF has potential and foundation, problem is that it is full of Chinese propaganda/racism like any other Chinese novel. Either you are a Chinese author or this is an MTL novel. I am not a racist or against Chinese/china but their propaganda is too over powering. 1/5 CD: MC copy skill is quite good and structured/nerfed correctly however the way the MC portrayal is a trash as it base it on a Chinese MC novel. Foreknowledge of OPverse isn't being utilize as well as his previous life experiences. 1/5 US: Chapters are long enough but due to this FF being MTL it's really hard to persist. Update are up to speed and maybe the only saving grace this MTL has. 4/5 WB: I quit on its early stages as I can't stand the gramm errors and Chinese propaganda without any noticeable improvements so I can't discuss any development on this part. 3/5
losiento pero por favor tomate unos minutos en editar los capitulos por favor ya no es que este muy mal esque esta inleible
La historia es buena un poco de mejorar la tradición, ya estoy un poco acostumbrado y no es difícil de leer la recomiendo es bastante entretenido
What's the point of reading this trash? It's just merely an MTL and this is not even edited.
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The translator did not even bother to correct the names (Instead of Arlong, some kind of Aaron, etc.), not to mention other edits. Typical Chinese fanfiction with slang, is that what the phrase "They really look like those who walk on lakes and rivers" can mean? It feels like I'm reading a novel about cultivators and not One Piece. I do not recommend
The story is itself is good. However, the translation is machine quality and there are several gaps in the story where the poster missed chapters. So, overall, low quality. I would advise readers to skip.
MC's ability is slightly overpowered, nice power introduction to One Piece, but the translation of Chinese->English names made me stop. 😅
Evaluation: Below Average WQ: Super bad. Too many gramm errors and inconsistencies. I guess this would be a machine translated due to the fact that it follows all errors MTL has. Second, the structure could've been good if you removed the CHINESE propaganda (always mentioning china, young master & arrogant behavior). 1/5 SD: This FF has potential and foundation, problem is that it is full of Chinese propaganda/racism like any other Chinese novel. Either you are a Chinese author or this is an MTL novel. I am not a racist or against Chinese/china but their propaganda is too over powering. 1/5 CD: MC copy skill is quite good and structured/nerfed correctly however the way the MC portrayal is a trash as it base it on a Chinese MC novel. Foreknowledge of OPverse isn't being utilize as well as his previous life experiences. 1/5 US: Chapters are long enough but due to this FF being MTL it's really hard to persist. Update are up to speed and maybe the only saving grace this MTL has. 4/5 WB: I quit on its early stages as I can't stand the gramm errors and Chinese propaganda without any noticeable improvements so I can't discuss any development on this part. 3/5