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For anyone who is from the south or has experienced southern culture, you will relate to the mc. He is a principled, family driven, and responsible black man. That is the best way to describe him without spoiling. His powers only allowed him to better act upon those traits. The writing quality is great. The character interactions are always a great thing to read. They feel like family. I love this book and I suggest you give it a chance. Warning: you will learn some southern slang reading this 🤣
A good read.....but I want to ask the author one thing....if he is already so powerful.......to be equal to the world's strongest how the story will progress. I mean there should have been two categories for power.....but you have shown talent as power system also......his starting point is labelled as S while he has SSS and to get SSS he needs to just do missions so that he don't get ego on his head.......then in few chapters he will easily become world's strongest......I think a different power rank and talent should have been there....
4+5+4+4+3)/5=4.2 I like this one a whole lot more than his other novel. The first demonic dragon. this has much better plot. So far every one has a lot more character. even the villains have more character than the villains in that. we have a good and observant mc. and fun interactions between characters. I'm still not a big fan of the casual usage of IRL deities. but I'm not the only hypocrite here and i can't pretend to be holy or better than y'all heathens. I'd gladly recommend this novel! (so far so good)
Everything this author has written so far is not appreciated enough the MC’s are distinct in their character development, and the growth of this potential multiverse is exciting please continue writing!!
Went fine in the beginning… but I started loosing interest after the author killed off Shear.
Super neat concept, unique characters, and vivid descriptions without going too crazy with it and making it a slog. Thanks for the book!
The book is pretty good. It’s the kind of book you read while waiting for your main 📕 chapters to be uploaded. The grammatical structure is great. I give kudos to the author for the world building and cultural settings, it’s so 2023 and I could relate to it. The author unfortunately doesn’t expound on the training fights as much as I would like. Leaves my imagination wanting. Currently I’m 56chapters in. So this is all I can say for now. Good job author.
This book is a legit 10/10. If something could represent what's beyond perfection, it's this novel.
I love this novel like I don't how to explain it,I have been searching for novels with overpowered mcs and I have found that in this novel I am not very good at reviews but I just wanna say this novel is awesome and I hope it get a lot of read in the future
pretty good book. one thing I will say is mc is not my type. other than that everything is good. what you can expect is that there will always be obstacles in mcs way that will make him grow better, but better in a way author wanted him to be. can't say much about it cuz it's authors book. he do he.
Read First Demonic Dragon. Loved it. then binged this gem. I really really wish this author would get the recognition he deserves. keep going, Anatha. your writing is awesome. you have discord if ya ever need to vent!
I like it so far, but I want to be certain about something. Are Aubrey and Aisha (I know she’s into women but she could be Bi for all I know) a part of the harem or nah? In the description it mentions that they have a yuri relationship, but sometimes in harem novels that means they have a romantic relationship with each other AND the main character, so I’m just making sure.
great job author I really love this novel especially after mal's character development after his talk with nyx ❤️ 😍 👏
The story is really good. However, one main is the main villain introduced early on. It feels a bit weak that they’re a villain just because they’re petty and don’t want somebody else being strong. Having a villain with a bit of a stronger motivation like a forbidden god giving somebody a blessing could do wonders for this story and bring something new and interesting to the lore of this story.
Better title would have been "The cute saint among humans".. he is literally so childishly kind and has saint like compassion, makes you wonder how he survived without parents and working part-time with a traumatized sister who was hurt by this ugly world.. which atleast I don't believe are possible for any human, so I can only guess he was a reincarnated saint god or something which doesn't sit that well with me in the character build up... I still feel many other characters are pretty childish as well
It is a very very well made story and world plot building. The characters are also lovely and as fine as they can be... it's truly a work of art ...I can say for certain that it can compete with "My three wives are beautiful vampires" should the author sharpen his/her overall skill just half a level ..Now although I am not an author but I like to say that Nyx loved his dear adopted son so much thus if she meets him a few more times when he is alone it should be better that only happened at the start of the story.... and let us know more about Nyx, her inner thoughts, desire and charector ....Hehe I won't say much but there is my inner desire to see Nyx and MC falling in a deeper relationship than adopted mom-son ....and the author can you please give the chart of power levels like immortal - god - primordial etc. I am very interested to know
Absolutely beautifulThe character development of the mc as well as the other elements of this books are well thought out and writtenGood work Author
Truly awesome novel with very well made set up and much to look forward to because writing quality is superb with many instances of funny jokes, drama, character development put in excellent way its interesting and enjoyable to read. So many gods, monsters, mythological creatures powers to be revealed so far abilities of blessed is very good and interesting. Then there is unknown threat coming on who knows how large of a scale to look forward to. Character design is very beautiful and world background always good and right enough where it's necessary.
Basically a standard "normal world become dungeon world" but ... With great writing, excellent character design and developpement ( even though some part feel rushed, that totally within acceptable range for me ), and globally a worthy read alltogether.
Like everything up until that yuri, yup, nope, I’m out. Great story author but I ain’t coming back. Other than that and it needing some more world development, I think it’s fine, I just can’t. Especially between his sister and best friend, that’s like 1000x worse for me
I like the characters and the story, it seems to be developing in an interesting direction. I hope it will keep getting. new chapters
I've already said basically everything I needed to in the other review, but the fact that this novel is such high quality, with such a good story while updating almost twice a day between this novel and First Demonic Dragon, it's definitely commendable.
I usually don't write these unless the story deserves it. this story is the best I've read in a really long time. the characters have growth, not unnatural relationships, and just are fun to read about. the j fo dumps are natural. they don't leave you wishing to skip ahead. the world is amazing. as a fan if mythology,specifically Greek, I can't find a better book. the author does amazing work portraying a different vibe with the goddess Nyx. I honestly can't wait to read how this mother figure in his life held him get past his somehow deep trauma. his family, sister and aisha, treat him like a family would. the story is well written, nothing unnatural. I can't wait to see how he handles bianca and Anna. author you will keep getting my coins and votes. keep it up!!
Spoiler de révélation For anyone who is from the south or has experienced southern culture, you will relate to the mc. He is a principled, family driven, and responsible black man. That is the best way to describe him without spoiling. His powers only allowed him to better act upon those traits. The writing quality is great. The character interactions are always a great thing to read. They feel like family. I love this book and I suggest you give it a chance. Warning: you will learn some southern slang reading this 🤣
A good read.....but I want to ask the author one thing....if he is already so powerful.......to be equal to the world's strongest how the story will progress. I mean there should have been two categories for power.....but you have shown talent as power system also......his starting point is labelled as S while he has SSS and to get SSS he needs to just do missions so that he don't get ego on his head.......then in few chapters he will easily become world's strongest......I think a different power rank and talent should have been there....
4+5+4+4+3)/5=4.2 I like this one a whole lot more than his other novel. The first demonic dragon. this has much better plot. So far every one has a lot more character. even the villains have more character than the villains in that. we have a good and observant mc. and fun interactions between characters. I'm still not a big fan of the casual usage of IRL deities. but I'm not the only hypocrite here and i can't pretend to be holy or better than y'all heathens. I'd gladly recommend this novel! (so far so good)
Everything this author has written so far is not appreciated enough the MC’s are distinct in their character development, and the growth of this potential multiverse is exciting please continue writing!!
Went fine in the beginning… but I started loosing interest after the author killed off Shear.
Super neat concept, unique characters, and vivid descriptions without going too crazy with it and making it a slog. Thanks for the book!
The book is pretty good. It’s the kind of book you read while waiting for your main 📕 chapters to be uploaded. The grammatical structure is great. I give kudos to the author for the world building and cultural settings, it’s so 2023 and I could relate to it. The author unfortunately doesn’t expound on the training fights as much as I would like. Leaves my imagination wanting. Currently I’m 56chapters in. So this is all I can say for now. Good job author.
This book is a legit 10/10. If something could represent what's beyond perfection, it's this novel.
I love this novel like I don't how to explain it,I have been searching for novels with overpowered mcs and I have found that in this novel I am not very good at reviews but I just wanna say this novel is awesome and I hope it get a lot of read in the future
pretty good book. one thing I will say is mc is not my type. other than that everything is good. what you can expect is that there will always be obstacles in mcs way that will make him grow better, but better in a way author wanted him to be. can't say much about it cuz it's authors book. he do he.
Read First Demonic Dragon. Loved it. then binged this gem. I really really wish this author would get the recognition he deserves. keep going, Anatha. your writing is awesome. you have discord if ya ever need to vent!
I like it so far, but I want to be certain about something. Are Aubrey and Aisha (I know she’s into women but she could be Bi for all I know) a part of the harem or nah? In the description it mentions that they have a yuri relationship, but sometimes in harem novels that means they have a romantic relationship with each other AND the main character, so I’m just making sure.
great job author I really love this novel especially after mal's character development after his talk with nyx ❤️ 😍 👏
The story is really good. However, one main is the main villain introduced early on. It feels a bit weak that they’re a villain just because they’re petty and don’t want somebody else being strong. Having a villain with a bit of a stronger motivation like a forbidden god giving somebody a blessing could do wonders for this story and bring something new and interesting to the lore of this story.
Better title would have been "The cute saint among humans".. he is literally so childishly kind and has saint like compassion, makes you wonder how he survived without parents and working part-time with a traumatized sister who was hurt by this ugly world.. which atleast I don't believe are possible for any human, so I can only guess he was a reincarnated saint god or something which doesn't sit that well with me in the character build up... I still feel many other characters are pretty childish as well
It is a very very well made story and world plot building. The characters are also lovely and as fine as they can be... it's truly a work of art ...I can say for certain that it can compete with "My three wives are beautiful vampires" should the author sharpen his/her overall skill just half a level ..Now although I am not an author but I like to say that Nyx loved his dear adopted son so much thus if she meets him a few more times when he is alone it should be better that only happened at the start of the story.... and let us know more about Nyx, her inner thoughts, desire and charector ....Hehe I won't say much but there is my inner desire to see Nyx and MC falling in a deeper relationship than adopted mom-son ....and the author can you please give the chart of power levels like immortal - god - primordial etc. I am very interested to know
Absolutely beautifulThe character development of the mc as well as the other elements of this books are well thought out and writtenGood work Author
Truly awesome novel with very well made set up and much to look forward to because writing quality is superb with many instances of funny jokes, drama, character development put in excellent way its interesting and enjoyable to read. So many gods, monsters, mythological creatures powers to be revealed so far abilities of blessed is very good and interesting. Then there is unknown threat coming on who knows how large of a scale to look forward to. Character design is very beautiful and world background always good and right enough where it's necessary.
Basically a standard "normal world become dungeon world" but ... With great writing, excellent character design and developpement ( even though some part feel rushed, that totally within acceptable range for me ), and globally a worthy read alltogether.
Like everything up until that yuri, yup, nope, I’m out. Great story author but I ain’t coming back. Other than that and it needing some more world development, I think it’s fine, I just can’t. Especially between his sister and best friend, that’s like 1000x worse for me
I like the characters and the story, it seems to be developing in an interesting direction. I hope it will keep getting. new chapters
I've already said basically everything I needed to in the other review, but the fact that this novel is such high quality, with such a good story while updating almost twice a day between this novel and First Demonic Dragon, it's definitely commendable.
I usually don't write these unless the story deserves it. this story is the best I've read in a really long time. the characters have growth, not unnatural relationships, and just are fun to read about. the j fo dumps are natural. they don't leave you wishing to skip ahead. the world is amazing. as a fan if mythology,specifically Greek, I can't find a better book. the author does amazing work portraying a different vibe with the goddess Nyx. I honestly can't wait to read how this mother figure in his life held him get past his somehow deep trauma. his family, sister and aisha, treat him like a family would. the story is well written, nothing unnatural. I can't wait to see how he handles bianca and Anna. author you will keep getting my coins and votes. keep it up!!
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