The Unseen Angel in MHA

LV 14

Aye_itz_cloudz

Love interest.

LV 14

DetachedDreamer

Honestly this was a great story, developed well, unique MC, and awesome powers. grammar was decent as well. the story takes a turn when the author decides to go with the hands down most cliche move you can make. Killing off the family. it wasn't written well, The MC suddenly became useless, and it was seen from a mile away. It's truly sad the author had to resort to this instead of finding something else to create the emotional impact needed. Killing off his friends for example. but no. had to go with the WN's favorite go to tragedy. Not that the story is bad after, its just, a story written so well ends up making this move is heart breaking and leaves a stain that can't be removed going forward. Hopefully the rest of the story turns out for the better, id still give it a chance if I were someone looking to give this a read but if you're looking for something special then this just isn't it.

LV 13

jazil_243

this just might be the best MHA fanfic I've ever read and the only thing that could make this better is if there was no romance

LV 1

WoahBuddy

I read through chapter 19, and I plan on continuing. I highly enjoy this story. You don't see many MHA fanfics that start way before UA high. But I think this type of story is considered niche due to the pacing and nonviolence involved in the beginning chapters. I like the idea of an archangel/seraphim quirk. It's unique and different. The author does a fantastic job of creating an image of the setting. The overall story is generally wholesome. A major issue I saw, and continue to see in many novels, are expressions and body movement. "Rolling my eyes, nodding in agreement, chuckling," etc. This novel, in particular, uses these about 5-8 times per chapter. It's too repetitive, and it's considered a bad writing habit. There are so many other ways to convey the feelings of your characters. I also don't particularly like any of the characters. I didn't see much individuality, but more like copy-and-paste personalities. Their uniqueness comes from their quirks, and that's it. Maybe it's better later on, and I will find out. Overall, I'd give this a 3.8/5.

LV 4

Rolling_thundaa

overall the story seemed good but the characters didn't feel real, the whole family died but I didn't feel a thing, it was like it was necessary for the MC to become a emo and chase power unconditionally.Even if it was a tragedy I didn't feel sad for the MC and killing the whole family seemed unnecessary

LV 14

God_of_hentai

what type of angel like one from dxd or from the bible or like from soem other anime

LV 3

JokesOnYou

Firstly, The story is written really well and I notice little to no grammar mistakes. Updates come regularly usually everyday or other day so pretty frequent. Now this MC isn’t like other MCs in MHA fanfics mainly because he doesn’t know the plot nor is he reincarnated. A lot of people say his family getting killed was to make him emo or he was nerfed when it happen clearly didn’t read the story. Story develops well and everything is done in a way that make sense as long as you actually read it through instead of letting your biased decision make the review for you. It’s simple this story isn’t for some people. Imo the character was done really well I don’t know why people wasn’t expecting a kid to actually be a kid. Again it’s not like he’s reincarnated or knows the plot and tragedy is in a lot of fics just stop reading if you don’t like it no point in leaving a bad review over a biased mindset. World background is well done and we see a angle of MHA that we don’t normally see in MHA fanfics. A lot of negative reviews are seriously biased imo. I’m not saying it’s the best but imo it’s really good and deserves way more recognition. P.S All Might fanboys can EAD

LV 4

TheQueen_foxy_270

I personally loved the book and how it went. in fact, i didn't notice that little crossover the author did until towards the end, and I got to say, "That was smooth, brother!" one can see the progress of the writing as at the beginning the book had a few miffs here and there but really the book had a good pace and a well thought out background and characters. people could find that boring, but that actually gives the story weight and depth. All in all, the author did amazing work with the story once again. Great work 👏

LV 2

GravityHat

Best MHA fan-fic i ever read. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 3

ShadowMonarch185

5 star, all the wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

LV 14

DaoisterrhYW

Garbage . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

LV 14

Dominic_Smith_6732

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

LV 4

Shadow_XL

It's decent but the last arc was garbage. I also think that the character development for the MC could have been handled way better. A lot of things felt rushed and we also didn't get to see any of the MC's therapy sessions even though that was a perfect set up for good character development the author failed to capitalize. I also don't like how the all the villains in this novel seems to just be pure evil, I know that sounds weird but it's way more realistic and more compelling to have just morally grey villains and that also would have been a way to create good CD for the MC as well, instead of just making them all evil and having the MC kill everyone. It would have been amazing to see the MC in a moral dilemma because of this.

LV 4

BattelC

To be completely fair and honest, this story is pretty good, but it has some rough patches. this story starts with just a little boy dreaming and ends with a man who's saved everything and more XD. Like I said it has some rough patches that "removes" people from this story, that is the "EMO" arc but if you can overlook some of these parts it's a pretty decent story. I would recommend it if you're looking for a "quick" read😅

LV 4

ShadowRPD

thsi was a very enjoyable read , had very minor typos or grammatical mistakes , the plot and the story was good though the fight sences could have been made metter , the roamce was fine and the length was good .very good for a mha fanfic and one of the few finished ones.

LV 4

Faith1

Overall it was one of the best MHA d around