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gotta say this is one of the most interesting story's I've read on here the concept is something i like very much there's only a couple of things I have problems with but those are due to my own views and preferences the idea of imagination powered magic tickles my creativity with all sorts of ideas
I just love your content so much... Please update fast and don't give up on writing. ...... ...... ......................................................
Really liked this work. The power scaling is kept vague so its hard to estimate how strong the MC is, but that just adds a sense of mystery to the MC's power level. The magical side of marvel is also explored more, which i appreciated 👍 Thanks for writing and sharing your work, i really appreciate it.
I find the MC saying his attacks out loud quite annoying and dumb, I understand the first and second time, but the rest? Come on man, grow up.
The protagonist acts too human. In a normal story that would be a good thing but it just out of place here. He also has a chunni mental disorder that makes him call out 'move' names for some reason. He then proceeds to fact friendly with the avenues he just met. Overall I can tell the author tried but he did not try hard enough.
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gotta say this is one of the most interesting story's I've read on here the concept is something i like very much there's only a couple of things I have problems with but those are due to my own views and preferences the idea of imagination powered magic tickles my creativity with all sorts of ideas
I just love your content so much... Please update fast and don't give up on writing. ...... ...... ......................................................
Really liked this work. The power scaling is kept vague so its hard to estimate how strong the MC is, but that just adds a sense of mystery to the MC's power level. The magical side of marvel is also explored more, which i appreciated 👍 Thanks for writing and sharing your work, i really appreciate it.
I find the MC saying his attacks out loud quite annoying and dumb, I understand the first and second time, but the rest? Come on man, grow up.
The protagonist acts too human. In a normal story that would be a good thing but it just out of place here. He also has a chunni mental disorder that makes him call out 'move' names for some reason. He then proceeds to fact friendly with the avenues he just met. Overall I can tell the author tried but he did not try hard enough.
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