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Complete trash, there are so many plots holes and contradictions that it is unintelligible, combined with the fact that the almost immediately starts allowing other to make the same kind of planet which makes the MC's "Gold Finger" unless trash means this story is nothing but a flaming pile of horse manure.
I love this novel it is great I hope it is continued! The idea behind it is very differen then other novels I have seen that are copy’s of each other!
Just want to say author-Chan, I love your book. it really is quite a different view on cultivation and civilization in general. I would love to see how far this book goes and how it turns out. Keep up the good work. I do hope however that you can reduce the amount of "online chatter" in your work, it takes away from the stories substance. Other than that good luck, I'll be reading and will definitely let you know what I dislike.......should anything appear
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literal garbage, 99 percent of the content after chapter 4 is people reacting to the same thing over and over again, the mc has no agency whatsoever, it's literally 99.99 % filler
So it is one of the novels where the chinese culture is better than any other hmmm, why they even try bring this to outside? Soft power is important but the way it is make like the EUA in the 80's dosen't work anymore, they need to learn more with Korea, I have lots of problems with them but their soft power policy is outstanding
there's was a novel similar to this and I really want it to be picked but it didn't make it, since then life has been bad, and if this one does not get pick, I'm afraid I will have to do something bad, if there's any raw please send
Okkkkkk ku berj nilai jsjdjsjskskdkdkskskskdkskdkdkskskdkskks28iwiwiwiwiwiwkwkkaoaoaa ada komentar di dunia ini adalah untuk meningkatkan dan memelihara ikan 🐟🐟🐟🎏🎏🎏🎏🎏🐟 di dunia lain tanggal yang ditentukan di Indonesia dan dunia
Spoiler de révélation Complete trash, there are so many plots holes and contradictions that it is unintelligible, combined with the fact that the almost immediately starts allowing other to make the same kind of planet which makes the MC's "Gold Finger" unless trash means this story is nothing but a flaming pile of horse manure.
I love this novel it is great I hope it is continued! The idea behind it is very differen then other novels I have seen that are copy’s of each other!
Just want to say author-Chan, I love your book. it really is quite a different view on cultivation and civilization in general. I would love to see how far this book goes and how it turns out. Keep up the good work. I do hope however that you can reduce the amount of "online chatter" in your work, it takes away from the stories substance. Other than that good luck, I'll be reading and will definitely let you know what I dislike.......should anything appear
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literal garbage, 99 percent of the content after chapter 4 is people reacting to the same thing over and over again, the mc has no agency whatsoever, it's literally 99.99 % filler
So it is one of the novels where the chinese culture is better than any other hmmm, why they even try bring this to outside? Soft power is important but the way it is make like the EUA in the 80's dosen't work anymore, they need to learn more with Korea, I have lots of problems with them but their soft power policy is outstanding
there's was a novel similar to this and I really want it to be picked but it didn't make it, since then life has been bad, and if this one does not get pick, I'm afraid I will have to do something bad, if there's any raw please send
Okkkkkk ku berj nilai jsjdjsjskskdkdkskskskdkskdkdkskskdkskks28iwiwiwiwiwiwkwkkaoaoaa ada komentar di dunia ini adalah untuk meningkatkan dan memelihara ikan 🐟🐟🐟🎏🎏🎏🎏🎏🐟 di dunia lain tanggal yang ditentukan di Indonesia dan dunia
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