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Écrire un avisAuthor being a pervert lolicon is one thing but it shouldn't be so ingrained in the story. Ive read story's with gay authors and straight mc and only reference was humorous but this novel just has too much to do with this 3 foot tall child succubus. If you like Loli I don't really care, it's fictional but I don't want to read it. an honest reveille of this story is that the background before he returns is a little shiny, immediately his sister has great talent too. no explanation where the bug system came, and much letdown regarding his focus on the succubus. I won't bother giving it more than one star because inexperienced readers won't get annoyed by these things and will give it higher rating regardless of if it's deservering. yet truth be told, it's a good enough novel for me if you remove the loli. (Fyck you grammar natzi's I'm lazy, ok?)
Love it, really nice to see a novel about insects[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Really good story but personally didn’t like the multiple Lolis in it. But none the less a good book.
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Not bad! it not everyday that you see a novel about insects[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I will love more chapters. also is it possible to try adding a fusion of DNA in the story like transplanting one mutant bloodline with another through the research build or cyborg bug.
It seems to be a very promising story, it's also the first time that i read of this type of novel where the mc is the head if a nest.[img=coins][img=coins]
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I thought the MC would have a "massive army of insects" which collectively grew in strength over time. As of chapter 19, he has eleven (11) insects. My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined.
Its not bad imo but it feels more like a wish fulfillment type novel. Not saying its bad but lack depth and seems like a summary for me. Tho the writing quality is good
The story is quite good. Has a lot of potential. I read the raws. The MC keeps leaving some of the major threat alive and then retreats. Then there’s hardly any mention of it soon. It’s like, he keeps building the trouble for himself.
Author being a pervert lolicon is one thing but it shouldn't be so ingrained in the story. Ive read story's with gay authors and straight mc and only reference was humorous but this novel just has too much to do with this 3 foot tall child succubus. If you like Loli I don't really care, it's fictional but I don't want to read it. an honest reveille of this story is that the background before he returns is a little shiny, immediately his sister has great talent too. no explanation where the bug system came, and much letdown regarding his focus on the succubus. I won't bother giving it more than one star because inexperienced readers won't get annoyed by these things and will give it higher rating regardless of if it's deservering. yet truth be told, it's a good enough novel for me if you remove the loli. (Fyck you grammar natzi's I'm lazy, ok?)
Love it, really nice to see a novel about insects[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Really good story but personally didn’t like the multiple Lolis in it. But none the less a good book.
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Not bad! it not everyday that you see a novel about insects[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's the first time that i read this type of book.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I will love more chapters. also is it possible to try adding a fusion of DNA in the story like transplanting one mutant bloodline with another through the research build or cyborg bug.
It seems to be a very promising story, it's also the first time that i read of this type of novel where the mc is the head if a nest.[img=coins][img=coins]
Almost written by a bot chatgpt may be better that this [img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=fp]
I thought the MC would have a "massive army of insects" which collectively grew in strength over time. As of chapter 19, he has eleven (11) insects. My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined.
Its not bad imo but it feels more like a wish fulfillment type novel. Not saying its bad but lack depth and seems like a summary for me. Tho the writing quality is good
The story is quite good. Has a lot of potential. I read the raws. The MC keeps leaving some of the major threat alive and then retreats. Then there’s hardly any mention of it soon. It’s like, he keeps building the trouble for himself.