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- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
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Story is great but some stuff just wasn’t right, like how low he placed in the quirk test, he should of placed higher as he still is strong because of him being a ghoul not to mention he is kinda weak and annoying he acts just like season one kaneki I get why but he stayed to much like canon not that many differences.
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The story is pretty cool, but it has many problems such as skipping many scenes and important dialogues, the writing quality is bad and it has several errors
The story so far as show a lot of potential. I hope the author continue the good work.
It is an amazing take on the MHA world. There are only five chapters out while writing this review but it looks very promising. keep up the good work.[img=recommend]
Concept is cool, too bad the plot is a mess and the writing quality is that of a 13 year old...
Story is great but some stuff just wasn’t right, like how low he placed in the quirk test, he should of placed higher as he still is strong because of him being a ghoul not to mention he is kinda weak and annoying he acts just like season one kaneki I get why but he stayed to much like canon not that many differences.
Spoiler de révélation The story is pretty cool, but it has many problems such as skipping many scenes and important dialogues, the writing quality is bad and it has several errors
The story so far as show a lot of potential. I hope the author continue the good work.
It is an amazing take on the MHA world. There are only five chapters out while writing this review but it looks very promising. keep up the good work.[img=recommend]
Concept is cool, too bad the plot is a mess and the writing quality is that of a 13 year old...