DC: Celestial Light Human

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Aye_itz_cloudz

🔥.

LV 14

creekershaps

I'll never understand why people struggle making a compassionate and kind main character

LV 2

FadeKnight

Typical ero story. Everything revolves around females and the mc.

LV 3

LordOrpheus

Read it.

LV 10

adeadlegend

Legendary. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

LV 14

Lucifer_Evrosia05

Really loved the original, hope this one is just as good👍

LV 2

Xiaoyunyun

Trash creates another trash 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 Maybe instead of writing maybe u should learn how to write properly take lessons on how to write a story.

LV 1

Jackleell

"This is illogical god grants powers to someone who isn't a good person. Yes, a god is forgiving, but giving powers to someone unstable is questionable. Why is he unstable? Let's see: he starts associating with someone who tortured and killed the original host of the body, which is quite cringe-worthy."

LV 4

Iam_Owler

Just not for me. Goodluck on your journey. ciao

LV 5

Yuri_is_Ntr

I still didn't understand what mistake author made in his first attempt, but this one is a good story. The only problem I have is a flimsy curiousity of mc. I can't really say what and why he found interesting. Like bunny girl is boring but flash is alright? Sure... Maybe it's a power deal? But then again, harley is just a human. But she is hot so good? Eh, whatever. Anyway, just don't expect anything especially from harem. No one knows how his weird tastes works. P. S. You know that you can make a yandere, you don't need to found one? And harley isn't yandere, she is just crazy. It's kinda different. Eeeh.

LV 1

JakeKing_11

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Asta_4626

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Gunts92

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LV 10

Benoit_Valtin

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LV 2

DaoistOylL9F

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 13

Daenerys_Targarye

Love it want more lol I love that relationship asswell

LV 4

Krish_Verma_7524

love it love it love it 🤩❣️ wondering how u will take the story further

LV 11

amarril14

I like the book honestly. It's a good book that most people would enjoy, the only issue is that our sla-author updates once a decade outside of that great book, that I hope doesn't get dropped.

LV 3

Yoad_Rodriguez

its a good story, not my cup of tea tho👍

LV 4

Alex_167

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