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Got hooked fast as I like books/novels like this, only gripe was the writing quality. Shame it was dropped
honestly I don't know Webnovel works, sometimes good Novel is free like From Mr.Immortal Novel, while novel written by Middle schoolers its not free.
Basically, i attract to this novel be cause of the sypnosis whoch mentioned that the mc have a crazy potential in that world, but as it going on the mc potential doesn’t seem op to me except for some mysterious power hidden in him.
Story needs more development and world background is feels incomplete at the time of review.
I‘ve only read 21 chapters, but it’s been good so far. The translation quality isn’t all that good, it’s better than MTL by quite a bit, but it could still be quite a bit better, it’s updated quite often. I‘ve really liked the story so far, and it’s been pretty interesting, but an issue I have is that the author is mistaken about their own characters. Now I might have misinterpreted it, and this could be a problem on my part, but I’m still bring it up. The MC mentions that he is supposed to be really OP if he doesn’t die when he does in the original novel, and he made himself out to be some perfect being with ridiculous talent or whatever. I assumed that meant his affinities as well, but the MC only has superior ice talent at 91% as his highest. Lucy is supposed to be a powerhouse in the future, when it was mentioned, I took that as her being on the original novel MC level or a little below, but he highest affinity is only Grand information 77%. Current MC is way higher to I get it, it makes him look even more OP given MC second greatest affinity was at Grand 78%. The issue is that the original novel MC is way better with 3 superior affinities like 2 grand and then some more. It’s makes current MC seem not so OP like I originally thought he was supposed to be. end review for now
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Trying my best to keep reading at, at chapter 2 as of now. While it does seem promising, it's can be painful to try and comprehend most of what is written since it reads as if it was written by a child. I can only hope it gets written better later on and give it a better score.
I really like this story so far I just hope you can get a proof reader soon it's kinda hard to read this because of the writing issues.
This book is absolutely amazing, though it is told that apocalypse is supposed to happen, it doesn’t seem like it’s going to happen anytime soon. The English does get a bit worse later on but if you have read MTL books this is easy. I love the yandere characters and wish I could get more of them, I also love the long chapters
World background and stability of updates is quite good. Although I would suggest working on the grammar and capitlisation more so that the paragraphs are easy on the eyes and readers won't get disenchanted when reading your novel. I see good potential in here. Maybe you should use grammarly or prowritingaid to help make your writing even better! Good luck author
Interesting story and world design Mc is perfect : smart, sly and cold Biggest downside however is the rather atrocious writing quality. Author please at least read yourself .
great start I think it deserves a bit more views ,I hope author doesn't drop or anything
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It's extremely awesome with a nice character description and development. I really like it and am just hoping that it will never be dropped.
It's a good start I will write my full review when it is at least 20 chapters.
A very interesting story and was improving in all aspects by the chapter! Unfortunately it was dropped, i hope the author thinks of picking it back up in the future or maybe doing a reboot with the same concept eventually. I enjoyed reading about the MCs apathy and manipulation as it was as youd expect from someone who is apathetic not evil. All things are measured by their worth and benefits in his own twisted thought pattern and not just cringe evil for the sake of evil like other dark mcs.
Got hooked fast as I like books/novels like this, only gripe was the writing quality. Shame it was dropped
honestly I don't know Webnovel works, sometimes good Novel is free like From Mr.Immortal Novel, while novel written by Middle schoolers its not free.
Basically, i attract to this novel be cause of the sypnosis whoch mentioned that the mc have a crazy potential in that world, but as it going on the mc potential doesn’t seem op to me except for some mysterious power hidden in him.
Story needs more development and world background is feels incomplete at the time of review.
I‘ve only read 21 chapters, but it’s been good so far. The translation quality isn’t all that good, it’s better than MTL by quite a bit, but it could still be quite a bit better, it’s updated quite often. I‘ve really liked the story so far, and it’s been pretty interesting, but an issue I have is that the author is mistaken about their own characters. Now I might have misinterpreted it, and this could be a problem on my part, but I’m still bring it up. The MC mentions that he is supposed to be really OP if he doesn’t die when he does in the original novel, and he made himself out to be some perfect being with ridiculous talent or whatever. I assumed that meant his affinities as well, but the MC only has superior ice talent at 91% as his highest. Lucy is supposed to be a powerhouse in the future, when it was mentioned, I took that as her being on the original novel MC level or a little below, but he highest affinity is only Grand information 77%. Current MC is way higher to I get it, it makes him look even more OP given MC second greatest affinity was at Grand 78%. The issue is that the original novel MC is way better with 3 superior affinities like 2 grand and then some more. It’s makes current MC seem not so OP like I originally thought he was supposed to be. end review for now
Spoiler de révélation Trying my best to keep reading at, at chapter 2 as of now. While it does seem promising, it's can be painful to try and comprehend most of what is written since it reads as if it was written by a child. I can only hope it gets written better later on and give it a better score.
I really like this story so far I just hope you can get a proof reader soon it's kinda hard to read this because of the writing issues.
This book is absolutely amazing, though it is told that apocalypse is supposed to happen, it doesn’t seem like it’s going to happen anytime soon. The English does get a bit worse later on but if you have read MTL books this is easy. I love the yandere characters and wish I could get more of them, I also love the long chapters
World background and stability of updates is quite good. Although I would suggest working on the grammar and capitlisation more so that the paragraphs are easy on the eyes and readers won't get disenchanted when reading your novel. I see good potential in here. Maybe you should use grammarly or prowritingaid to help make your writing even better! Good luck author
Interesting story and world design Mc is perfect : smart, sly and cold Biggest downside however is the rather atrocious writing quality. Author please at least read yourself .
great start I think it deserves a bit more views ,I hope author doesn't drop or anything
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It's extremely awesome with a nice character description and development. I really like it and am just hoping that it will never be dropped.
It's a good start I will write my full review when it is at least 20 chapters.
A very interesting story and was improving in all aspects by the chapter! Unfortunately it was dropped, i hope the author thinks of picking it back up in the future or maybe doing a reboot with the same concept eventually. I enjoyed reading about the MCs apathy and manipulation as it was as youd expect from someone who is apathetic not evil. All things are measured by their worth and benefits in his own twisted thought pattern and not just cringe evil for the sake of evil like other dark mcs.