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the story is good but it needs more deep in the main cast ,but overall is good and where is the continued chapters?
I might not be your biggest fan but im up there. I'm waiting for reverse apocalypse to come out of hiatus and waiting for Supreme lord to get farther along before I start reading again. I'm not even getting on web novel till there is more than a day or two of reading. I'm literally waiting in suspense for any work from you.
it's a pit the author abandoned the story that now says completed. It was an interesting story about an apocalypse, and different from the author previous stories (that all sound quite similar). Hope it gets a second chance and the author starts writing it again.
I liked the story. First I will talk about the things I liked, then I will talk about the shortcomings.The characters are well thought out. -The world background has an interesting and understandable layout.-The features of the system are well thought out and easy to understand. -The battle scenes are satisfactorily descriptive.Here are the points that I find missing.-It's a well thought out novel, but overall I found it a bit lacking in depth. Although mc has a painful and difficult past and says he can't trust people, he doesn't quite fit in.From my point of view, it would be more reasonable for a person who has been so hurt and bullied to be a little unstable when trying to get stronger for revenge.So I think a more wild personality should have come to the fore instead of unnecessary stuffing for it to be cool.I don't feel that mc has a completely distrustful image of the ducks chasing him according to his past life we learned.I liked the novel overall, better than other cliche reincarnation system novels.
I've just started reading your novel (c18) and I think it has an amazing potential! I like how the beginning was unexpected, and the fact that the author doesn't give that much information about the story only just enough you don't get lost. He also adds these little teasers about the background of the main character that makes you think "wonder how that happened", and motivate you to read the story. It is also good that even though this is an OP protag novel, it doesn't feel like he got too powerful too fast, but instead that he struggles to accomplish his feats and develops slowly but surely (still OP though). Overall great novel so far and I'll probably edit this review as I move forward in the novel. Anyway, best of luck, author, and good work!
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Spoiler de révélation
Well since it's from our beloved author, Hideous, what are you waiting for ? Just jump in😊😊😊 But will there be romance? If so, is it late romance ?
Bored of reading about humans? Then you have come to the right place. Follow the journey of Liam, a halfling, in this book. Just a few chapters in but the author keeps you hooked. I am sure you will not be disappointed!!
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
Very interesting and unique new story from Hide. Knowing his quality of work this one will be really good too. Looking forward to a new fave work by Hideousgrain.
Having read the author's previous works before, I'm not surprised that the story this novel told was as compelling to read like the others. Highly recommend.
reminds me of monster Hunter after chapter 50. but still seems realistic and entertaining.
the story is good but it needs more deep in the main cast ,but overall is good and where is the continued chapters?
I might not be your biggest fan but im up there. I'm waiting for reverse apocalypse to come out of hiatus and waiting for Supreme lord to get farther along before I start reading again. I'm not even getting on web novel till there is more than a day or two of reading. I'm literally waiting in suspense for any work from you.
it's a pit the author abandoned the story that now says completed. It was an interesting story about an apocalypse, and different from the author previous stories (that all sound quite similar). Hope it gets a second chance and the author starts writing it again.
I liked the story. First I will talk about the things I liked, then I will talk about the shortcomings.The characters are well thought out. -The world background has an interesting and understandable layout.-The features of the system are well thought out and easy to understand. -The battle scenes are satisfactorily descriptive.Here are the points that I find missing.-It's a well thought out novel, but overall I found it a bit lacking in depth. Although mc has a painful and difficult past and says he can't trust people, he doesn't quite fit in.From my point of view, it would be more reasonable for a person who has been so hurt and bullied to be a little unstable when trying to get stronger for revenge.So I think a more wild personality should have come to the fore instead of unnecessary stuffing for it to be cool.I don't feel that mc has a completely distrustful image of the ducks chasing him according to his past life we learned.I liked the novel overall, better than other cliche reincarnation system novels.
I've just started reading your novel (c18) and I think it has an amazing potential! I like how the beginning was unexpected, and the fact that the author doesn't give that much information about the story only just enough you don't get lost. He also adds these little teasers about the background of the main character that makes you think "wonder how that happened", and motivate you to read the story. It is also good that even though this is an OP protag novel, it doesn't feel like he got too powerful too fast, but instead that he struggles to accomplish his feats and develops slowly but surely (still OP though). Overall great novel so far and I'll probably edit this review as I move forward in the novel. Anyway, best of luck, author, and good work!
You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...You Killed It...
Spoiler de révélation Well since it's from our beloved author, Hideous, what are you waiting for ? Just jump in😊😊😊 But will there be romance? If so, is it late romance ?
Bored of reading about humans? Then you have come to the right place. Follow the journey of Liam, a halfling, in this book. Just a few chapters in but the author keeps you hooked. I am sure you will not be disappointed!!
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
Very interesting and unique new story from Hide. Knowing his quality of work this one will be really good too. Looking forward to a new fave work by Hideousgrain.
Having read the author's previous works before, I'm not surprised that the story this novel told was as compelling to read like the others. Highly recommend.
reminds me of monster Hunter after chapter 50. but still seems realistic and entertaining.