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Don't be fooled by the rating! This story is just trash that started with great potential. Reasons : First, Mc's cheat is very powerful. While it is already Op that he can manipulate 3 realms above him, he is almost invincible as the number of people he can manipulate increases as his cultivation level increases. Honestly, I thought the author would make a low level cheat and show a clever use of it, but neither Mc nor the author has the intelligence to do that! - Secondly, Mc is a coward chicken! He has never used his martial arts or his cultivation on a real opponent and he is afraid to do so. In short, he's one of those low-level villain mentality Mc's you see in every novel. He has power thanks to the Op Cheat and he uses it mindlessly at will. He will never have the charisma of a true villain (he lacks the willpower of a normal adult, let alone a villain), and any dangerous situation will only make him more fearful and it will p♡♡s his pants. So he is almost the worst rotten egg in terms of character development. - The third one is similar to the above. He has no willpower and no intelligence! While it is frustrating for everyone to read brainless Mc, even more frustrating is the b♡♡y Mc who wh♡n♡s about everything. This Mc is the same way when it comes to getting stronger the hard way. In this kind of xianxia, Cultivation is an effort to take Qi from heaven and earth and strengthen one's body, mind and will to defy heaven and achieve immortality. But what does our MC do here? He cries like a baby because he doesn't want to suffer, and as if that wasn't enough, he avoids even fighting and killing someone when he doesn't have to afraid of this. (He must just to fight/kill the magicial beasts.) This makes this novel a story of a coward chicken who lives at will with the brainwashed puppets around him, a blessed with a cheat he doesn't deserve. - Fourthly, and most annoyingly, no matter how many suggestions/criticisms are made to the author, he ignores them. Even when you look at the reviews, it is hard to find less than 5 stars, because even if there is a useful criticism, the author ignores and deletes it out of own insecurity and laziness. Even if he is given a lot of suggestions, the only answer he can give is 'then this novel is not for you'. Pfft... Dude, I come to you and say 'write some fight scenes, it would be useful to see the techniques he learned and his strength at the cultivation level' and you tell me that this novel is not for me. Are you stupid? Seriously. It's an eastern fantasy novel. If you're not even going to show that, why did you put individual stats/skills in the system? Just skip it at this system status stuff and just make it a h♡nt♡i novel. Because there's no character interaction in this novel. They're all puppets. There's no action! Apparently 'this thing not for you'. There is no Mc who uses his cheat wisely. And worst of all, Mc has no readable character and no character development. So I ask you who is this novel for? This novel can be a very good h♡nt♡i novel with his manipulation skills. So write it description or summary down so people don't waste their time.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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Like the thought of using Jiang Chen from Dmwg, looking forward to usage of mcs from other novels. For body strengtheninng maybe ancient strengthning technique? Maybe sword god in another world for techniques or smth
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Cultivation fanfics seem to be rare from what i see, so i have high expectations
Shamless author review of 5 stars! At the time of writing rn, if we reach top 15 ranks in monthly b4 new years i will mass release 5 chps
I'm using Google translator, I really liked it please don't stop posting chapters ....................................... ............... ..
Its really good 👍 keep up the work 😃 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m enjoying it a lot, I can’t say I’m a fan of the manipulation ability, as I generally dislike any hypnosis ability’s. But this is a good wishfullment fanfic and first xianxia fanfic I have read, it’s honestly great! More please, from a fellow degenerate!
This is the first fanfic I read of the Novel Dragon Marked War God and you are doing a good job with it. I hope to read many more chapters of it from now on.
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Don't be fooled by the rating! This story is just trash that started with great potential. Reasons : First, Mc's cheat is very powerful. While it is already Op that he can manipulate 3 realms above him, he is almost invincible as the number of people he can manipulate increases as his cultivation level increases. Honestly, I thought the author would make a low level cheat and show a clever use of it, but neither Mc nor the author has the intelligence to do that! - Secondly, Mc is a coward chicken! He has never used his martial arts or his cultivation on a real opponent and he is afraid to do so. In short, he's one of those low-level villain mentality Mc's you see in every novel. He has power thanks to the Op Cheat and he uses it mindlessly at will. He will never have the charisma of a true villain (he lacks the willpower of a normal adult, let alone a villain), and any dangerous situation will only make him more fearful and it will p♡♡s his pants. So he is almost the worst rotten egg in terms of character development. - The third one is similar to the above. He has no willpower and no intelligence! While it is frustrating for everyone to read brainless Mc, even more frustrating is the b♡♡y Mc who wh♡n♡s about everything. This Mc is the same way when it comes to getting stronger the hard way. In this kind of xianxia, Cultivation is an effort to take Qi from heaven and earth and strengthen one's body, mind and will to defy heaven and achieve immortality. But what does our MC do here? He cries like a baby because he doesn't want to suffer, and as if that wasn't enough, he avoids even fighting and killing someone when he doesn't have to afraid of this. (He must just to fight/kill the magicial beasts.) This makes this novel a story of a coward chicken who lives at will with the brainwashed puppets around him, a blessed with a cheat he doesn't deserve. - Fourthly, and most annoyingly, no matter how many suggestions/criticisms are made to the author, he ignores them. Even when you look at the reviews, it is hard to find less than 5 stars, because even if there is a useful criticism, the author ignores and deletes it out of own insecurity and laziness. Even if he is given a lot of suggestions, the only answer he can give is 'then this novel is not for you'. Pfft... Dude, I come to you and say 'write some fight scenes, it would be useful to see the techniques he learned and his strength at the cultivation level' and you tell me that this novel is not for me. Are you stupid? Seriously. It's an eastern fantasy novel. If you're not even going to show that, why did you put individual stats/skills in the system? Just skip it at this system status stuff and just make it a h♡nt♡i novel. Because there's no character interaction in this novel. They're all puppets. There's no action! Apparently 'this thing not for you'. There is no Mc who uses his cheat wisely. And worst of all, Mc has no readable character and no character development. So I ask you who is this novel for? This novel can be a very good h♡nt♡i novel with his manipulation skills. So write it description or summary down so people don't waste their time.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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Like the thought of using Jiang Chen from Dmwg, looking forward to usage of mcs from other novels. For body strengtheninng maybe ancient strengthning technique? Maybe sword god in another world for techniques or smth
Spoiler de révélation Cultivation fanfics seem to be rare from what i see, so i have high expectations
Shamless author review of 5 stars! At the time of writing rn, if we reach top 15 ranks in monthly b4 new years i will mass release 5 chps
I'm using Google translator, I really liked it please don't stop posting chapters ....................................... ............... ..
Its really good 👍 keep up the work 😃 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m enjoying it a lot, I can’t say I’m a fan of the manipulation ability, as I generally dislike any hypnosis ability’s. But this is a good wishfullment fanfic and first xianxia fanfic I have read, it’s honestly great! More please, from a fellow degenerate!
This is the first fanfic I read of the Novel Dragon Marked War God and you are doing a good job with it. I hope to read many more chapters of it from now on.
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