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This is an interesting story. There is a realistic feel to it all the way being familiar. I am intrigued to see where this goes.
I believe that author's have a hook to capture there readers and this author is no different. To you author 🤙🏾🤙🏾💕💕💕😘😘😘. The book is amazing, don't just look at it then pass, add it to your library then read it to see what I'm talking about.
Dear reader, it is the author here, you won't be mistaken if you read this book, from plot twists to amazing story line, back stories to unexpected romance, embark on this uncharted journey with us, you won't regret it!
I think this story is preparing to be quite an interesting one, and while I've only read six chapters so far, I can say I like it. The world, characters and plot are all well developed and thoughful. I really like Aliyah, who seems to be a strong protagonist and I love her no nonsense personality. The only things that could be improved is certain sections where the dialogue between two characters is mashed together in one paragraph, instead of in their own lines. Overall though, the author has done a great job!
I always enjoy a strong female lead and this story gives just that! The characters are done nicely and there is always nice inkling of a mystery to keep you wanting to read more. It's also a reincarnation style story and I am in LOVE with that genre right now. Overall, pretty well done. Great job author!
Okay, review time!! This was made from reading ten chapters, so take my review with a grain of salt! Writing quality is 4.5/5. I see some run-on sentences that go on for too long without a full stop, reading it might seem long-winded, so that's why the score is not fully 5 stars, overall the writing style is awesome! This was a run-on sentence to give an example of what I meant! A full stop could have been placed at the first and second comma. Just remember to give readers a breather! ...got shadow banned because it was too long, review continues n the comments
I liked the concept, the characters are good and well written, and I can't wait to see more of Aliyah and how her story unfolds, good work there author!!
This book reminds me of all the independent women that never relied on their husband's money. The writer gave an explicit narration of it. Love it
Heyyy, I see quite much potential in this book. The author has a good writing style and the story is progressing quite well.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
This book is definitely something to look into. It has an initial pull to it and believe me you will not failed by the desire to read more and more. 🤞📚 Great job author. Can't wait to read more of this book. 💫💕
This is an interesting story. There is a realistic feel to it all the way being familiar. I am intrigued to see where this goes.
I believe that author's have a hook to capture there readers and this author is no different. To you author 🤙🏾🤙🏾💕💕💕😘😘😘. The book is amazing, don't just look at it then pass, add it to your library then read it to see what I'm talking about.
Dear reader, it is the author here, you won't be mistaken if you read this book, from plot twists to amazing story line, back stories to unexpected romance, embark on this uncharted journey with us, you won't regret it!
I think this story is preparing to be quite an interesting one, and while I've only read six chapters so far, I can say I like it. The world, characters and plot are all well developed and thoughful. I really like Aliyah, who seems to be a strong protagonist and I love her no nonsense personality. The only things that could be improved is certain sections where the dialogue between two characters is mashed together in one paragraph, instead of in their own lines. Overall though, the author has done a great job!
I always enjoy a strong female lead and this story gives just that! The characters are done nicely and there is always nice inkling of a mystery to keep you wanting to read more. It's also a reincarnation style story and I am in LOVE with that genre right now. Overall, pretty well done. Great job author!
Okay, review time!! This was made from reading ten chapters, so take my review with a grain of salt! Writing quality is 4.5/5. I see some run-on sentences that go on for too long without a full stop, reading it might seem long-winded, so that's why the score is not fully 5 stars, overall the writing style is awesome! This was a run-on sentence to give an example of what I meant! A full stop could have been placed at the first and second comma. Just remember to give readers a breather! ...got shadow banned because it was too long, review continues n the comments
I liked the concept, the characters are good and well written, and I can't wait to see more of Aliyah and how her story unfolds, good work there author!!
This book reminds me of all the independent women that never relied on their husband's money. The writer gave an explicit narration of it. Love it
Heyyy, I see quite much potential in this book. The author has a good writing style and the story is progressing quite well.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
This book is definitely something to look into. It has an initial pull to it and believe me you will not failed by the desire to read more and more. 🤞📚 Great job author. Can't wait to read more of this book. 💫💕